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02/02/2021 Year 4 English Home Learning

Tuesday 2nd February 2021

To plan a newspaper report

UPLOAD HERE!

The video of Mr Inman below is for the following children.

4 Red: Inaaya, Naimol, Murad, Shaikh, Zahra, Hasti, Zainab and Sumayyah

4 Blue: Meher, Shuqran, Samanta and Abdulassis

4 White: Israa, Asim, Abdul, Emma, Sara, Taha, Abraham and Khairy

Eyewitnesses: Eileen Bees and Alan Hartley

Key words:

500 bombers

soldiers

wardens

civilians

victims

smouldering wreckage

fierce flames

choking black smoke

courageously

bravely

cathedral

relentless

Link to Coventry Live story:

https://www.coventrytelegraph.net/news/history/coventry-blitz-80-years-on-19253993

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112 responses to “02/02/2021 Year 4 English Home Learning”

  1. Luxor A.

    Uploaded to misc upload point

  2. Naimol A.

    Oh Mr Inman affogato my work sorry ๐Ÿ˜ž

  3. Abdulasiis M.

    I have sent my work.

  4. Saee N.

    I have done it and uploaded it

  5. Serina I.

    I upload it

  6. Khairy S.

    I have uploaded my work.

  7. Kaila M.

    My work has been uploaded.

    1. Mr Inman

      Your plan is simply fantastic and the effort levels in the starter (to highlight the verbs) is also great. This plan will serve you well for tomorrow.

  8. Aatifa A.

    I uploaded it and it is done. :)

    1. Mr Inman

      Your work is excellent! However I’m a bit confused by where your event is? You’ve called the newspaper Cov’s Daily Newspaper (a tabloid I assume!?) but the article is set in London. Also, your date is 14th November 1939? The blitz of Coventry was in 1940 (same date). Are you deliberately altering the story or are these things just slight mistakes. As I said though, the plan is fantastic.

  9. Azaan H.

    I have done this and uploaded it .

    1. Mr Inman

      A good plan and I like your starter too! Well done and this will set you up well for tomorrow. ยฃ1.10 in 1940 would have been about ยฃ20 in today’s money!! Maybe make it 2 pence or something!

  10. Israa F.

    I have uploaded my work.

    1. Mr Inman

      Thanks for the upload Israa. I like that you have printed it out, but then you needed to complete all of the boxes.

  11. Abdulasiis M.

    Miss I need help.

    1. Mr Inman

      Someone will call you tomorrow Abdulasiis. You must start your work earlier and had you written this message before 4, we would have called you to help straight away.

  12. Esa M.

    I have uploaded my work.

    1. Mrs Sanders

      A super detailed plan Esa, well done! I look forward to reading your finished article!

  13. Safiyah P.

    I have uploaded my work

    1. Mrs Sanders

      A good start Safiyah but please add more detail to your subheadings, this will help you out when it comes to writing your article tomorrow.

  14. Mosaver M.

    I have uploaded my work.

    1. Mrs Sanders

      Well done Mosaver! Give me an example of reported speech you are going to include in your article.

  15. Safa M.

    I have uploaded my work ๐Ÿ—ฝ

    1. Mrs Sanders

      Well done Safa! Remember to include what sort of attack happened in your introduction. Can you give me an example of reported speech you are going to use in your article?

  16. Hammad A.

    i have uploaded it!

    1. Mrs Sanders

      A really detailed plan Hammad but remember your newspaper article is going to be about the Coventry Blitz not WW2.

  17. Joel G.

    I downloaded my work

    1. Mrs Sanders

      A good effort Joel! Add more detail to your introduction. Where got bombed? Who bombed Coventry?

  18. Zakariya K.

    I have uploaded my work

    1. Miss Bhangu

      Well done Zakariya. You have included eye witness statements in your paragraphs and historical facts. Superb!

  19. Abdulasiis M.

    Miss I was doing Mr inmans one.

    1. Miss Bhangu

      How did you get on with this Abdulasiis? Please upload your work.

  20. Taha A.

    I have done it.

    1. Miss Bhangu

      Good start Taha! You have started off well by following the model plan, including who, why, where and when. Have a go at breaking up the story in chronological order.

  21. Aisha R.

    I have uploaded my work

    1. Miss Bhangu

      Well done Aisha! You have structured your paragraphs clearly, including eye witness statements for paragraphs 2 and 3.
      You have also included some strong vocabulary, which is great to see.
      Can you share some historical facts you have included?

  22. Kaif B.

    I have uploaded my work

    1. Miss Bhangu

      Well done Kaif! You have structured your plan clearly. You have focused on the eye witnesses for paragraphs 2 and 3. Add some colour to your cathedral picture.

  23. Aysha R.

    Name of news paper

    A world war 2 interview

    Price
    Price 2 pound each

    Date 2/01/21

    Induction

    The people who are involved in it the interview is a girl .

    We asked questions and there is little story .
    Took place in London.

    It happen in afternoon.

    Interviewing with a survivor who was born in Coventry.

    She will tell us what happened.

    1. Miss Bhangu

      You might want to recheck the date on your newspaper Aysha, but the rest is a good start. You could be more specific, as some parts need more detail. Could you add in some witness statements and quotes? Could you describe the girl using powerful adjectives?

  24. Jasmine M.

    I have completed it and i will upload it soon

  25. Safa K.

    I have uploaded my plan.

    1. Mrs Elkin

      A detailed plan well done. There are a lot of questions here, it might be useful to add some key vocabulary in there too.

  26. Ismaeel K.

    I have sent my work

    1. Mrs Elkin

      Ismaeel, I’m not too sure what you have done here, this seems to be a plan for an article on the beginnings of WW2. Your article should focus on the Coventry Blitz, featuring the eye witness accounts from Eileen and Alan.
      You might be able to use this on Thursday though!

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