2B English Mon 11th – Character Description

Hi Year 2!

Last week, you all came up with super expanded noun phrases to describe Fantastic Mr Fox.

Today we are going to use those ideas to write a super character description.

Firstly, I am going to read you a little more of the story. Here is Chapter 10!

Here is an example of a character description. You could magpie some ideas!

Please use your writing checklist to help you write a QUALITY character description, just like you would at school.

Here are some words to help you..

Try to use different sentence openers. For example…

In the darkness of the night…
To protect him from the cold…
When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea…
His pointy, sensitive nose…
What a _________ fox he was!
Around his neck…
Although he was sometimes terrified…
How _________ he was!

28 thoughts on “2B English Mon 11th – Character Description

  1. In the darkness of the night the clever cunning crafty fox went out to find food. He wore his blue elegant coat to keep him warm.
    Mr fox thought of a very fantastic idea he was determined to follow through.
    His pointedly nose never let him down.
    What a smart fox he was.
    He wore a pink silky scarf around his neck.
    Although he was sometime s terrified what a courageous fox he was.

  2. In the darkness of the night the smart,clever, fox went out hunting for some food.
    To protect him from the cold freezing weather Mr Fox wore a blue jacket, which he never closed up with a pretty pink coloured scarf to keep his neck warm and a yellow waistcoat.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea his eyes would light up like a bright star shining in the sky at night.
    His pointy, sensitive nose would help him smell things from a distance.
    What a confident intelligent fox he was!
    Around his neck he wore a silky pink scarf.
    Although he was sometimes terrified he always showed how determined and brave fox he was.
    How charming and courageous he was!

  3. In the darkness of the night clever, charming Mr Fox went out to hunt for food.
    To protect him from the cold blustery weather he wore a blue, silky jacket and a pink warm scarf around his neck.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he always determined to try it out and his eyes shining like a star.
    His pointy, sensitive nose helps him to smell and find things easily.
    What a brilliant, fantastic fox he was!
    Although he was sometimes terrified he still look at the positive side and he would never ever give up.
    How brave, elegant he was!

  4. In the darkness of the night, the smart, hardworking and intelligent fox carefully goes around the bushy town to look for food for his family.

    Mr Fox wears a long, silky and bright coat to protect him from the cold.

    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea, he is always courageous and crafty to work it out.

    His pointy, sensitive nose makes it fast and speedy to sense danger.

    What a brilliant and confident fox he was.

    Around his neck, he wore a shiny thin scarf.

    Although he was sometimes terrified, he is always determined to achieve his aim.
    How caring and kind he was.

  5. In the darkness of the night the tall, cheeky, clever Mr Fox thought of a genius most cleverest plan ever, but the Fox thought it didn’t work when it did.

    To protect him from the cold he wore a blue silky coat which kept him warm in the night when he gets food for the Cubs and Mrs Fox.

    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he always wanted to try it out.

    His pointy, sensitive nose lets him find things easily.

    What a fantastic, clever, ideal Fox he was!

    Around his neck he wore a red and pink scarf which kept him very warm.

    Although he was sometimes terrified he still tries his plan out.

    How kind and courageous he was!

  6. His warm jacket kept him warm in the cold dark night.
    What a clever fox he was!
    Around his neck, he wore a scarf.
    Although he was sometimes terrified of the night, he was always charming and courageous.

  7. In the darkness of the night the brave, clever fox went out to hunt for food.
    To protect him from the cold he wore a blue, dusty jacket and a yellow, dusty top.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he was always determined to follow it through.
    His pointy, sensitive nose helps him smell from far away.
    What a fantastic fox he was!
    Around his neck he wore a spotty tie.
    Although he was sometimes terrified he would never ever give up.
    How caring he was!

  8. In the darkness of the night the speedy, clever Mr fox sniffing fir the food. He was wearibg soft, blue coat and spotty scarf to protect him from the cold. His beady eyes sparkled like the stars when he thought of an extremely fantastic idea. He was a kind person,he dislike rudness.How polite he was!

  9. In the darkness of the night Mr Fox comes up with a cunning, clever plan.
    To protect him from the cold he had a blue, dusty shirt on.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he is always determined to try it out.
    His pointy, sensitive nose helps him smell and find things easily.
    What a fantastic and courageous fox he was!
    Around his neck he has a stripy red and pink wooly scarf.
    Although he was sometimes terrified he is resilient.
    How clever he was!

  10. Although Mr. Fox was terrified he still was a courageous fox, he was clever
    to come in the night as fast as he can. In the darkness of the night the smart, kind fox went to hunt for food. He ran with his blue, silky coat and his soft, thin scarf. He got into the chicken house because he can some eggs for his family. His soft, pointy ears can let him anything. what a fantastic fox he was. Mr fox cared for his family.

  11. Although Mr. Fox was terrified he still was a courageous fox, he was clever
    to come in the night as fast as he can. In the darkness of the night the smart, kind fox went to hunt for food. He ran with his blue, silky coat and his soft, thin scarf. He got into the chicken house because he can some eggs for his family. His soft, pointy ears can let him anything. what a fantastic fox he was.

  12. Although he was sometimes terrified he was a courageous Mr Fox, he is very clever as he moves speedy and quietly through the farm.
    Mr Fox speaks politely but is very cunning while planning this next plan.
    Around his neck he wear a colourful scarf and a matching sophisticated waistcoat, it’s very colourful too.
    He is a confident, brilliant and fantastic Mr Fox.

    • Well done for using the sentence starters and word bank Maryam – they are very useful in making your writing better.
      Next time try to include a exclamation sentence.
      Eg. What a clever, crafty fox he is!
      How ginger his fur is!

  13. In the darkness of the night,the cheeky,smart fox went to hunt for food. He was wearing a blue,silky coat and a soft,thin scarf. He ran with his ginger,bushy tail behind him. He got into the chicken house because he is an intelligent,cunning fox. He was very fast and speedy. His pointy,soft ears let him hear everything!

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