2W English – 14.05.20 – Subordination

Hi Year 2,

Firstly, listen to Mr Gordon read the next part of the story: Chapter 16, Bean’s Secret Cider Cellar & Chapter 16, The Woman.

Today we are going to be using subordination. This where a sentence has two clauses (parts). One part makes sense on its own (the main clause) and one part does not make sense on its own (the subordinate clause). The subordinate clause adds more information.

For example: When the foxes were hungry, Mr Fox went hunting.

CHALLENGE
Can you complete these sentences?

Because the cement was old and crumbly,…
When they removed the brick,…
As Rat was scared of Mr Fox,…
While Mr Fox and Badger were talking,…
After the animals heard a woman’s voice,..

GD CHALLENGE
Can you write some sentences of your own using subordination?

25 thoughts on “2W English – 14.05.20 – Subordination

  1. CHALLENGE

    After the animals heard a woman’s voice, they ran away.
    Because the cement was old and crumbly, they replaced it with a new one.
    When they removed the brick, The put new ones.
    As Rat was scared of Mr Fox, so it ran away.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking, they saw something interesting.

  2. Because the cement was old and crumbly, they needed to buy some more.
    When they removed the brick, the wall fell down.
    As Rat was scared of Mr Fox, he ran away.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking, the smallest fox ate out of a jar.
    After the animals heard a woman’s voice, they ran away.

  3. Because the cement was old and crumbly it was easy to move the bricks.Rat was scared of fox so he ran away.After the animals heard her voice they quickly hided.

  4. Because the cement was old and crumbly it started to fall of.
    When they removed the brick it started to fall down.
    As Rat was scared of Mr Fox he ran away.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking rat was saying bad words.
    After the animals heard a woman’s voice they hided.

    • Because the cement was old and crumbly, he was able to loosen the brick without any trouble.
      When they removed the brick, they saw the rats whiskers.
      As Rat was scared of Mr Fox he ran away and popped out of sight.
      While Mr Fox and Badger were talking the smallest Fox slowly taken a jar of cider of the shelf and taken a gulp.
      After hearing a woman voice they frozen and stood still.

  5. Because the cement was old and crumbly,so he loosened the brick away without much trouble and pulled it away.
    When they removed the brick, there popped a small sharp face with whiskers.
    As rat was scared of Mr Fox,he popped back fast out of sight.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking,the Smallest Fox had sneaked a jar off the shelf and had taken a gulp.
    After the animals heard a woman’s voice called back,”bring up two or three more jars”.

    GD
    If she takes one more jar she’ll see us,thought Mr Fox.

    • Because the cement was old and crumbly, he was able to remove it easily.
      When they removed the brick, he had a small voice saying go away!
      As Rat was scared of Mr Fox, because Mr zfox wants to est him up.
      While Mr Fox and Badger were talking, the smallest fox sneak and drink a jar of cider.
      After the animals heard a woman’s voice, saying Mabel bring those jars.

  6. Because the cement was old and crumbly, it was very easy to move the brick. When they removed the brick, they went in to the store cellar. A rat is scared of a fox so it ran away because fox was about to eat him. While Mr Fox and badger talking, little fox tried some cider. After the animals heard a voice they hid the woman.
    GD
    While me and my brother were playing I was goalie .

  7. Challenge:
    Because the cement was old and crumbly,it was very easy to move the bricks.
    When they removed the bricks, they saw the whiskers of a rat.
    As Rat was scared of Mr Fox, the rat ran away.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking, the tiny fox tried some cider.
    After the animals heard a woman’s voice,they quickly hid behind the cider jars.
    Gd:
    Mr Fox was hungry ,when Mrs Fox was cooking something good.

  8. When they romeved the brick,they went in the store cellar .
    As Rat was scared of Mr Fox,the women heard them.
    While Mr Fox and Badger were talking, the women heard there voices.
    After the animals heard a women’s voice, they hided from the women.

    When l was in the swimming pool, l was cold.
    While l was swiming ,my sister was crying in the swimming pool.

  9. Because the cement was old and crumbly we needed to buy a new one
    When they removed the brick everything fell down
    A rat was scared of Mr fox so she or he ran away
    While Mr fox and badger were talking badger fell on a rock
    GD when badger was running he found a girl sad and saw a badger and ran

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