2W English Mon 11th – Character Description

Hi Year 2!

Last week, you all came up with super expanded noun phrases to describe Fantastic Mr Fox.

Today we are going to use those ideas to write a super character description.

Firstly, I am going to read you a little more of the story. Here is Chapter 10!

Here is an example of a character description. You could magpie some ideas!

Please use your writing checklist to help you write a QUALITY character description, just like you would at school.

Here are some words to help you..

Try to use different sentence openers. For example…

In the darkness of the night…
To protect him from the cold…
When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea…
His pointy, sensitive nose…
What a _________ fox he was!
Around his neck…
Although he was sometimes terrified…
How _________ he was!

35 thoughts on “2W English Mon 11th – Character Description

  1. In the darkness of the night Mr. Fox had his meal and was ready to go to bed.
    To protect him from the cold he wears soft long jacket and long black gloves.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea, he had worked hard, and smart, also he was cheerful.
    His pointly, sensitive nose he could smell speedy because he a intelligent fox.
    What a caring fox he was!
    Around his neck he wore thin shiny long pink scarf.
    Although he was sometimes terrified but he was brave to.
    How delighted he was!

  2. In the darkness of the night Mr Fox was dancing around. To protect himself from the cold he had soft, bushy fur. When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he felt cheerful. What a clever fox he was! Around his neck there was a stripy, pink scarf. Although he was sometimes terrified he was very brave. How brilliant he was!

  3. In darkness of the night Mr Fox needed some food for his family.
    To protect him from the cold he wore a smart little waist coat.when he thought of a fantastic idea his tiny sensitive nose sniffed faintest of smells. What a smart fox he is!
    Around his neck he wore a spotty warm scarf.

  4. In a dark dark day Mr Fox was looking for food he could not see any and he was so cold.
    He was wereing a soft red tiy and a blue cosy cote.
    What a guy he was .

  5. In the darkerness mr speedily through the farm. To protect from the cold he needed a big wooly coat on when he th out of an extremely fantastic idea his pointy nose is sentive and his nose is for smelling
    What a sensitive fox

  6. In the darkness of the night…
    Mr fox moved speedly threw the farm.

    What a clever fox he was!

    Around his neck…
    He had a scarf.

    What a fox he was!

    • In the darkness of the night Mr Fox went out to the bushy farm to look for food.
      To protect him from the cold he wore his shiny blue jacket.
      When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea, he still gets terrified thst he maybe caught.
      His pointy, sensitive nose help him smell danger.
      What a determined and courageous fox he was!
      Around his neck thin orange scarf.
      Although he was sometimes terrified be is resilient.
      How careful he was!

  7. In the darkness of the night he look at the bright sky.
    To protect him from the cold he put a soft, comfy blanket.
    His pointy, sensitive nose smelled a delicious food.
    What a amazing fox he was!
    Around his neck there was a thick ,red and white tie.
    Although he was sometimes terrified he used his determined mined
    How brave he was!
    Amazing, fantastic Mr Fox was always resilient.
    He had a long , pointy ears.

  8. In the darkness of the night, he was looking for some delicous,tasty food .
    what a sneaky, clever fox he was!
    what a fast, speedy fox he was but he gets tired .
    When he has a extremly good idea he smiles happilly.
    how intelligent he was!
    What a mercifull fox he was!

  9. In the darkness he looked for food but ripped his Tail.
    To protect him from the cold they put a blanket on him.
    His sensitive nose is good for smelling food or stuff he might like.
    What a great fox he was.
    Around his neck he had a tie.

  10. In the darkness of the night Mr fox creeps around the farm.
    To protect him from the cold he wears a woolly blue jumper.
    When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea he started digging.
    His pointy, sensitive nose can sniff any thing from miles.
    What a fantastic fox he was!
    Around his neck he were a pink and white scarf.
    Although he was sometimes terrified but brave to.
    How he was 50 present brave and 50 present scared.

  11. In the darkness of the night Mr Fox crept outside into the farm to get some food for his family. To protect him from the cold he wore a bright,blue jacket. When he thought of an extremely fantastic idea his eyes would sparkle like diamonds. His pointy,sensitive nose was used to sniff out the horrible farmers. What a clever fox he was! Around his neck he wore a white,spotty scarf. Although he was sometimes terrified he would always act brave and try to sort out the problem. How brave he was!

  12. In the darkness he looked for food but someday ripped his Tail.
    To protect him from the cold they put a blanket on him.
    His sensitive nose is for smelling.
    What a good fox he was.
    Around his neck was a ty.
    How exited he was!

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