39 thoughts on “3R English home learning – Friday 5th June Entrepreneur Week.

  1. year 3 students
    Broad Heath primary school
    9 Hanford close,
    Coventry
    cv6 5tl
    5-6-2020
    sir Alan Sugar
    Amshold House,
    Goldings Hill,
    Loughtion,
    England,
    ig10 2rw
    dear sir,
    I am writing to you to persuade you that my shop that’s called ‘Appetizers’ is the best shop in the town.Everone knows about us due to the yummy and delicious sandwiches.We make all types of sandwiches. our shop is also famous for its different flavours and fresh food.Delivery is also available and the prices are reasonable too.
    I assure you that you will never be disappointed due to our food or service.
    yours sincerely

  2. Year 3 Student,
    Broad Heath Primary School,
    9 Hanford CI,
    Coventry,
    CV6 5TL,
    5th June 2020.

    Sir Alan Sugar,
    Amshold House,
    Goldings Hill,
    Loughton,
    England,
    IG10 2RW.

    Dear Sir Alan Sugar,
    I am writing to you to persuade you that my shop is the best. I think you should pick my sandwich shop because the sandwiches are so delicious and you can smell the freshly made sandwiches.
    What make my sandwich shop different is that it has different flavour and different taste. Also, it will make money because of the different toppings it contains, which gives protein, carbohydrate, fruits and vegetable. My sandwich shop is suitable for vegetarians and non-vegetarians. In the sandwich there is cucumber, chicken, tomato, cheese and butter.
    Even if I decide to take out the chicken cheese, the vegetarian will also love its yummy taste.
    Hope to hear from you soon.
    Yours Sincerely
    Osatohanmwen

  3. 1 fresh food
    2 my sandwiches shop is game themed
    3The sandwiches start 99p
    4Furthermore we can also dilever
    We can arrange birthday patties

  4. Dear year 3 class I learned about eunepteur week I named my sandwich healthiest sandwich there is game arena you play anything and exercise
    dance dance revelution or just break dance.

  5. Sir Alan Sugar
    Amshold House,
    Goldings Hill,
    Loughton,
    1G10 2RW

    Year 3 students
    Broad Heath Primary School
    9 Hanford Cl,
    Coventry
    CV6 5TL

    Dear Sir Alan Sugar,

    I would like to write in response to your letter and tell you that my shop which is called “Mosaver’s Marvellous Sandwiches”, is one of a successful small business in the city and it has made lots of good costumers in a very short while, so it need to be improved.

    Firstly, all the ingredients in my sandwiches are organic, for instance homemade bread with organic eggs that come from local farms and fresh vegetables which my parents grow in our garden. Besides my sandwiches have all the essential nutrients that you need for your daily balanced diet and I sell a cup of free and fresh orange juice with every sandwiches. In addition, what do you think? If there be more branches of this shop around the country, this would help people have healthy food easily available from their closest shop and cheapest price.

    Finally, I think this would be one a successful business in the country and it requires to be improved by creating more branches of it around the country and I demand your cooperation in this ambition. I look forward hearing from you soon.

    Your sincerely
    Mosaver

  6. Sadeen
    Broad health primary school
    9 Hanford Cl,
    Coventry
    CV6 5TL

    Sir Alan Sugar
    Amshold House,
    Goldings Hill,
    Loughton,
    England,
    Ig10 2RW

    Dear sir Alan Sugar,
    I would like to tell you about myself. My name is Sadeen. I am in year 3. I was working hard to plan for my business. I have a sandwich shop called ” cheeky chicken “. In my shop, I sell chicken sandwich with special spices. Nobody has used these unique spices in the UK. These species give a delicious taste and this is the secret in my delicious chicken sandwiches. Another special thing in my business is if people are following a healthy diet usually they are scared to eat from the restaurant as there are too many calories in fast food. However, in my shop, I make the chicken sandwich in a healthy way. Also, we sell different sizes and types of bread. The normal sandwiches in my shop have 500 calories while some have 200 calories and 300 calories. We can make the sandwich according to how many calories does the customer want to eat. This is why I think my sandwich shop is special and unique. I also have other sandwiches options such as vegetarian and less salt recipes.
    Checky Chicken ” Try it like it ”
    Yours sincerely
    Sadeen

  7. Broad Heath Primary School,
    Hanford Close ,
    Coventry,
    CV6 5DP
    5th June 2020
    Sir Alan Sugar
    Armshold House
    Golding Hill,
    Loughton,
    England ,
    IG10 2RW
    Dear Sir Sugar,
    I am responding your letter as you were looking for a young capable new entrepreneur. I am a 8 year old very hard working boy called Zaeem. I was interesting to run my own business. I started my business with a sandwich shop called “ Hungry” . In few week my business started hitting the sky.
    People are crazy for the sandwich I am making at this time, and the demand for my sandwiches has become so high.
    My fast selling sandwich are tandoori chicken freshly made with salad and the choice of customer.I know its sound normal but I bet no one can beat our taste.I have many customers in my town visited my shop whom were recommended by their friends and families.
    There are other varieties of sandwiches sells in our shop like Ham , bacon bites, french dip,Tuna and club sandwich. All ingredients will be reveal once you sign up contract with us.
    It will be a honour for me if you invest in my business.
    If you need any more detail please don’t hesitate to contact me .
    Looking forward hearing from you,
    Your sincerely ,
    Zaeem

  8. Sir Alan Sugar,
    Amshold House,
    Goldings hill,
    Loughton,
    England
    Dear Sir Alan Sugar,
    Thank you for giving us this opportunity. Everyone is doing good work in planning their shop but I want you to open my shop Tasty Bites because of the reasons below.
    1. We make our sandwiches with tasty and fresh ingredients.
    2. My sandwich shop is game themed for game lovers. While they enjoy tasty sandwich they can play games on ipads, computer and arcade games. Moreover, there will also be exercising games such as Dance dance revolution or Just dance.
    3. The sandwiches starts at 99p.
    4. Furthermore, we can also deliver to home or do takeaways
    5. Finally, we can arrange birthday parties at Tasty Bites.
    Certainly kids as well as grownups will enjoy these. I hope you will help me to open my shop.

    Yours sincerely,
    Nihit N

    Year 3 student
    Broad Heath primary school
    9 Hanford Cl,
    Coventry
    CV6 5DP

    • This is great. I like how you’ve thought so carefully about the ways your business could help the customers. Well done Entrepreneur Nihit!

  9. Year 3 student
    Board Heath Primary School
    9 Hanford Cl
    Coventry
    CV6 5TL

    Sir Alan Sugar
    Amshold House
    Golfing Hill
    England
    IG10 2EW

    Dear Sir Alan Sugar

    I am responding to your letter at my school, l am young entrepreneur with a sandwich bar idea, my business is called “marvellous bites” , its a health meal bar with the theme of the avengers as it’s sandwiches.
    The key thing is to connect to children about healthy eating what types of different non boring sandwiches can be eaten healthy, as it is proven that a good meals helps your brain and body at school our out of school, also for adults that have busy lifestyles .
    My idea was to link with different Avengers as they are active characters in marvel movies, there’s Iron man ,Black Widow, Hulk, Thor, Nick Fury so each character has his own healthy unique sandwich, they cost £2 to make 25 sandwiches it cost £11.45 a profit of £38.55.As you can see it is very profitable and health for children and adults, with theme of Avengers you could go school to school selling sandwiches, at sporting events meeting etc.
    I a young hard working entrepreneur that would fit nicely into your business,if you want to hire me, l am available.

    Thank you
    Your sincerely
    Moosa 3Red

    • Moosa! This is fantastic! What a wonderfully creative idea. I love the idea of linking the sandwiches to the Marvel heroes. Can you tell me one key feature of a letter?

  10. sir Alan sugar
    Amshold house
    Goldings hill
    Loughton England
    If 10 2rw
    Dear sir sugar it has been a great that you can open your own company Qbd my name is Abdullasiis I’m trying to make a sandwich shop that’s called sandwich shop. That sells fresh sandwiches and makes money. And I want to get lots of customers. And I want to the boy how starts the best sandwhich shop.

  11. Sir Alan Sugar
    Amshold House,
    Golding Hill,
    Loughton England,
    1G10 2 Rw

    Dear Sir Allen Suger
    I feel that I have a good business Opportunity for you to invest in. My name is Samanta and I am 8 years old . I have opened a sandwich shop called Secret Sandwiches.
    In my shop I would sell fresh baked dougnuts, bread and Cakes. I will make fresh sandwiches using fresh ingredients and home made chutney. I have a Secret ingredient that I use when I am baking ,I will share this with you if you decide to invest.
    My shop is special because it has comfortable settees to sit on and enjoy your food. In my shop there will be IPads for the customers to use and order food off.
    I look forward to your reply.
    Kind regard
    Samanta

  12. Broad Heath Primary School,
    Hanford Close ,
    Coventry,
    CV6 5DP
    5th June 2020

    Sir Alan Sugar
    Armshold House
    Golding Hill,
    Loughton,
    England ,
    IG10 2RW

    Dear Sir Sugar,
    It has been brought to my attention that you are a strong investor in new businesses.
    Firstly, let me introduce myself, I am Kaila and I am currently running a sandwich shop business, called ‘KJ’ s Munch Box’, but the demand for my sandwiches has become much more than I expected and I would like to expand my business. I am sure it would be a massive hit with the people of today.
    My best seller is called ‘KJ’s Meaty Munch’. This is a freshly baked baguette filled with chunks of turkey breast and bacon with mayonnaise and salad. I know it sounds like your average, boring sandwich, but they are so tasty and everyone enjoys them. I think my slogan which is ‘Just Munch It’ sums up my sandwiches perfectly, and if you tried one I’m certain you would enjoy just munching it. I have been told by many customers that they come out of their way just to return for one of my yummy sandwiches. I make other varieties of sandwiches too which have also gone down well.
    All of the mouth-watering watering ingredients are locally sourced and my sandwiches provide a delicious, healthy and nutritious choice. I can also cater for a range of dietary needs ensuring any allergies are clearly identified. The needs, wishes and wants of the customer are my top priority. I feel that this along with a friendly, relaxed atmosphere could make a fantastic future investment.
    Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I hope you can see the potential in ‘KJ’s Munch Box’.

    Yours sincerely,
    Kaila

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