For our mystery writing, we learnt to use a range of descriptive language. For example:
– Subordinating conjunctions as openers
– Fronted adverbials
– Figurative language
– Adjectival phrases
Here is some of our work. What do you think? What have you learnt?
I think I have developed many skills such as writers tricks and show not tell.
I need to improve my writing ✍️
I think 🤔 that 6 red have figured out the whole mystery theme and on the relative clauses and adding more journalists vocabulary
I think all our work was great but to improve my mystery story I could add more figurative language.I could also improve my writing by using more fronted adverbials.In my writing I learnt how to use suspense to draw the reader into the story and create an image in their head.
I think that all of our writing is great and could be used in so many ways.I think I could improve on the use of semi colons and metaphors.
I think I need to improve on adding adverbial phrases ad a bit more relative clauses.I have learnt more descriptve/figurative language to use in my writing.
I think the whole of six red understood the mystery story theme.I have learnt that to add supense and I need to add more figurative language.📚🖊
I think that our work is very good because we tried so hard to complete it 👍🏻. I have learnt lot of sentence openers which I can include in my writing 📝.
In my writing I would improve by using fugitive language for is exsample alliteration ,personification and powerful adjectives.
I think I did very good however I could improve by using more figurative language
My handwriting needs improving
I think I need to improve on using more up-levelled words in my writing ✍️ and useing festive language.
Some thing that I have learned is to use adjectives and adverbs effectively
I can improve on not repeating words for example “The nice,kind teacher”and to use sentence openers.
I think I need to improve in my adverbial phrase and presition openers because I haven’t used it so next time I will
I think maybe we should use more figurative language
I think I need to improve on my words and use levelled up words and different vocabulary’
I think I need to improve my work by adding more journalistic vocabulary.
I think I need to improve on my relative clauses
I think that these are all really good pieces of work and that the children should all be proud of what they have done in their work. I have learnt many more phrases that I can use in my descriptive writing next time
I Think I need to improve my spellings because I don’t look carefully and I don’t think about it
I think 🤔 💭 I need to improve on my relative clauses
I need to put a little effort
I think I need to improve on using more up-levelled words in my writing.