Children return to school Mon 8th April

Five Blue’s Weekly Blooming News🔍📇🗞

Below is a very detailed video sharing the most bizarre series of events we have uncovered this week at Broad Heath!

https://youtu.be/wgb0gTWEeXg

We hope the video was informative about our task. We have lots to do in order to prepare ourselves to write a newspaper and share this with the school.

Challenge:
Think of a headline for your news paper (Remember it has to be engaging, either an alliteration or a rhetorical question)

Challenge: Think like a teacher, what would a Broad Heath teacher say about the U.F.O. Sighting? (Use formal language as teachers would and write your ideas as a quote)

Challenge: As Saanvi suggested, collage a range of “subject 🛸 specific key words” we can use in our writing. The richer the vocabulary the richer our message!

50 responses to “Five Blue’s Weekly Blooming News🔍📇🗞”

  1. Xavier M.

    A Ufo caught on camera
    I receive a incredible email from Mrs Frankish.
    I was staggered when I saw the video.

  2. Safwan U.

    A UFO is a un-none flying objected there is a very chance that this is a unfriendly specie and there is also are a low chance that it could be a friendly specie. We don’t know because we haven spoke to they are self’s but if we get a chance we will know if it’s friendly or not if there not we are dooooned……….They are the first time creatures out of space have been seen.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      ‘This is the first time’

      ‘Doomed’

      Good try Safwan

  3. Laylah M.

    1)Aliens having a brew
    2)I have been contacted by some parents that they have seen a U.F.O people are scared but I am trying my best.
    Challenge
    Witnessed,claimed,quoted,and evidence.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Inverted commas and who is speaking? Please edit to show the above.

  4. Lily M.

    Oh no there is a UFO in the sky hovering above Boad Heath.
    Teacher: Mrs Frankish saw a UFO outside of Broad Heath School. What will happen?
    Key Words
    Eye Witnes, proof, UFO, claimed, saw, quoted, hovering,informed and Mrs Frankish

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thanks Lily, try editing challenge 2 so you write direct speech for Mrs Frankish (including inverted commas)

  5. Mohammed H.

    Mrs Frankish”,I am concerned for the school and worried for there danger because a ufo was hovering over the school”
    Claimed
    Ufo
    Mrs Frankish
    Stated

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Do you think your comma and inverted comma have been used correctly in the first line?

  6. Saanvi S.

    Challenge 1:
    BH UFO sighting.
    Challenge 2:
    Mrs Frankish: I have just got a call from the E.S.U. I am very concerned about what is going to happen we have got so many phone calls from parents and teachers. And everyone thinks that it is a UFO (unknown flying object). I am worried that I might need to close the school or protect the children.
    Challenge 3:
    1)Proof/evidence
    2)Claimed
    3)Stated
    4)Witnesses
    5)Quotes
    Bizarre

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Just got a call- I recently received a call from

      Which sounds more formal and why?

      Also ‘or’ suggests Mrs Frankish is picking between the school and children. That isn’t the case so edit the conjunction used also.

      Thanks Saanvi

  7. Abdullah A.

    Challenge:
    A UFO ON BROADHEATH ROOF!
    Challenge:
    A teacher might say I saw a UFO on the top of the Year 5 classrooms in BROADHEATH BUILDING.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thanks Abdullah but was the UFO on the roof??? I thought newspapers have to be accurate

  8. Aayan M.

    UFO caught I BH cameras
    Mrs Frankish:I am concerned about what is going to happen we have got so many phone calls and everyone is worried everyone one who rang the said they saw a UFO(unknown flying object) and said that we saw a red lighted beam in the air as well.
    Hovering
    Blizzard
    Proof/evidence
    Claimed
    Stated
    Witnesses
    Quotes

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      We have got or we have received? Also I’ve never heard Mrs Frankish say ‘said’ within a sentence.

      Try again and up level your vocabulary choices, shared, claimed, informed.

  9. Hamza A.

    1.Aliens taking over Coventry
    2.I received a call from the WAY and they stated that they caught a U.F.O over Webster park and I was shocked
    3.Hovering
    Blizzard
    Proof

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Do you think the best adjective Mrs Frankish would use is “shocked”?

  10. Muhammed A.

    Challenge 1
    My headline for my newspaper is going to be A U.F.O Sighting.

    Challenge 2
    I have sighted a U.F.O flying above Webster park outside the Year 5 classrooms as it was hovering around.

    Challenge 3
    The words I will use are:
    claimed
    stated
    commented
    informed
    proof
    evidence
    witnesses

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thank you Abdullah!

  11. Sabah S.

    Unexpected UFO
    ————————
    “It felt so bizarre. It was like it was all a dream. I have never seen a UFO before. Then, something like a drone zoomed past.”

    Some words:
    stated, claimed, professor, witness, UFO

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thanks Sabah, who is this quote from?

      1. Sabah S.

        This is a quote from a local named Ruby 22.

  12. Ravi J.

    1. Awful alien at broad heath at broad heath.
    2. I receive a bizarre email for Mrs Frankish.
    At first I fought it was a joke until I go a video, what I saw was shocking.
    3. Claimed
    Stated
    Commented

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Does our school name require no capital letters Ravi?

      Are these the only subject specific words you could think of?

  13. Mohammed A.

    Challenge
    It is amazing that BH has been able to catch a UFO!
    Challenge Sick I can’t believe BH has caught a UFO I gotta tell my mates.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Hmm, I’m not sure why you think BH ‘caught’ a UFO. We didn’t, it was spotted by a few locals over the weekend and then disappeared. Try again without using the phrase ‘caught’

  14. Steven N.

    Ms Ahmed said”the UFO Sighting is very concerning for the school
    Vocabulary:UFO,Unknown,Saucer,Stated,Claimed
    Headline:UFO caught

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thanks Steven, the UFO however wasn’t caught. It was sighted.

      Try again with your headline

  15. Esha A.

    Mrs Frankish would see the U F O was floating on top of our school we were all scerd.
    We dident know what to say but I think it’s real :(.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Hey Esha, the UFO doesn’t float. Think about your vocabulary list for this unit of learning. The UFO 🛸….. not floats

      Please find me two other verbs you could have used.

  16. Arina A.

    Astonishing Aliens Appear!
    Challenge:
    Stated Mrs Ahmed “This cruel day there is no WIFI to teach the kids in school children’s are afraid and frightened they wont pay attention to class this is really terrible because the UFO (unknown flying object) 🛸 is not letting them to get education we really need to figure this out!

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Aha interesting play on the few hours we didn’t have electricity.
      Good try but a few grammatical errors

      *Inverted commas come in pairs you’ve only used one.
      * not letting them get an education- more like, “…the UFO is blocking our electric circuits therefore creating a barrier for my children’s learning…” states a concerned, class teacher.

      1. Arina A.

        Astonishing Aliens Appear!

        Challenge:
        Stated Mrs Ahmed “This cruel day the UFO is blocking our electricity to teach the kids in school children’s are afraid and frightened they wont pay attention to class this is really terrible because the UFO (unknown flying object) 🛸 is not letting them get an education we really need to figure this out!”

        1. Arina A.

          Astonishing Aliens Appear
          Challenge:
          Started the concerned teacher (Mrs Ahmed) “This cruel day the UFO is blocking our electricity circuits therefore creating a barrier for my children’s learning. The kids in school children’s are afraid and frightened they wont pay attention to class this is really terrible because the UFO (unknown flying object) 🛸 is not letting them get an education we really need to figure this out!”

  17. Raees A.

    1 heeh is in a pas
    voadug TO ccTv footage
    2 ESu sighting of a UFO
    3 witess
    4 mrs frankish
    5 chid wtbeess
    6 UFO expot

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Well done remember capital letters for nouns.

  18. Saira S.

    Challenge 1
    UFO yawning in Webster Park.
    Challenge 2
    Mrs Frankish quoted “ I was contacted by the ESU and they said they saw a UFO hovering around the Webster park.
    Challenge 3
    Witnesses,claimed,quoted and evidence.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Good try but I doubt Mrs Frankish would say “they said” think of ways you can uplevel this phrase.

      1. Saira S.

        They shared or they reported or they replied to her saying or they informed her with news.

  19. Rhema E.

    A u.f.o. Sighting has been seen at Broad Heath Primary School.

    Mrs Frankish has been informed that there was a u.f.o. Sighting

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thank you Rhema!

  20. Mishal N.

    A UFO caught at BH.
    It was unrealistic but a drone came and was flying past .
    I will use key vocabulary and powerful adverbs.

  21. Mishal N.

    Challange : yo yo, there is a UFO in broadheath.
    Challange:When we first saw the UFO it was shocking to see a UFO on the year 5s roof and a drone flying past.
    Challange:I will use good sentence openers and some intresting adverbs.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Hi Mishal, can you try and use your own imagination and creativity rather than using similar ideas to others on the blog.

  22. Ridwan U.

    Challange: a U.F.O Was caught on camera.
    Challange 2: It is unreal that a U.F.O On top of our schools roof! Some people have witnessed the Fab Sighting, then we saw it ourselves!
    Challange 3:
    .claimed
    Stated
    Commented
    Discover
    .U.F.O
    .
    .
    .

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Thanks Ridwan, please remind me about the use of capital letters.

      Edit your headline.

  23. Mrs Ahmed

    Challenge 1: Yo yo yo! How fab!

    Challenge 2: Think about our spag lesson today, is the correct form “we have saw” or “we seen” but that’s boring try “we spotted” we were shocked to see” makes all the difference in ensuring your writing is fluent and not gappy.

    Challenge 3: Give me 5 subject specific words you have learnt this week. Words you will use in your news report.

  24. Harroop S.

    Challenge: yo yo yo Broad Heath has caught a U.F.O
    Challenge: It is unbelievable that we have saw a real U.F.O! It was very amazing to witness the amazing sighting.
    Challenge:I will use a range of specific vocabulary in my writing.

    1. Mrs Ahmed

      Remember what we said Abdullah, calm, think and then speak or write. I look forward to a full response soon.

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