This week in Literacy, 5 Blue have been learning a piece of performance poetry- Missing: Daisy by James Carter. Here is our class performance:
What do you think? I would love for everyone to comment 2 things you like about our performance and one thing you think we could do even better.
Well done 5 Blue- I was super impressed by our performance!
Miss Starkey 💫
The thing that I like about our poem was that how many improvements we made and it turned out to be fun.i really liked it
I like to do that again but in year 6
My favourite part of the poem is the last two verses.
Why is that Humaria?
Two things I liked about the peformance was the actions and how everyone sang the poem. One thing that could be improved about it is that we should have done it in sync more.
I am glad you enjoyed the actions Mahamad! Great feedback- well done!
I really enjoyed
One thing we could improve was everyone was on time
Also we could improve was not saying lines to fast
Thank you Miss Starkey
I am glad you enjoyed it Kimberley and you are welcome! Some great feedback too, well done!
Well done!
2 good things were that everyone knew what we needed to say and we knew the correct actions.
If we were to do this again, everyone should say the poem at the same time because some people were a little behind.
Very fair feedback Muhammad and I agree- well done :)
well done
I liked the way we all did our actions together.My second thing I liked was we all want together.
We could improve because the back row were trying to catch up
Some quality reflection there Umaiyah- well done!
Wow my sister told me Has anyone seen my dragon.
Awesome- did you enjoy it Yalda?
Well done everyone i enjoyed that so well done.
One thing I liked about this poem that you had actions for each line.
Second thing I liked that they were all saying it together.
One thing they could have improved was that they went to fast so they could have slowed down.
Great feedback Zahrah! Well done 👍
I liked that we altogether did the actions.
Another reason is,we said it clearly.
We could improve by slowing down a bit so the other rows could catch up with the front row and do actions a tiny bit faster.
Well done Jeremi! I agree 👍
Well done everybody!
well done
Great efforts, love to see choral performances.