8 thoughts on “Missing: Daisy

  1. It was awesome because you included:
    Expression
    Actions
    Different tones of voices.
    To make it better you could’ve went a bit slower and you we’re getting a little muddled.
    Well done 5 white!

  2. Enjoyed the choral performance and the actions. I think if you had stopped every few lines and had a solo/paired delivery, this would have made it even better and given it greater tone.

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