Below is an example of a setting description that one child created this week.
Your task is to state what you think is effective in the text, what could be improved and any corrections which should be made. Make sure this is completed in detail!
Up high, on a steep hill, there was an old wrinkly man who stood motion less, staring at the sight before him. Above the angelic and translucent clouds, the golden ball of light kicked beams of light on the lush green grass. The strong wind made it’s way and blowed all the tree’s up and down WOOSH WOOSH, the wind howled like a lion.
What to look out for;
– Punctuation including full stops, exclamation marks, commas and apostrophes.
– Verb tenses
– What else could be described?