Persuasive Letter

Write a letter to persuade the Big Bad Wolf not to eat Little Red Riding Hood’s grandma!

LRRH

LRRH is a story everybody knows well so I’m expecting some fantastic writing!

Use all the persuasive language we have practised in class. Try to write in the correct style (Imagine you know the wolf so the letter can be informal).

32 thoughts on “Persuasive Letter

  1. Well done 6M, a lot of hard work has been put into creating these great persuasive letters to the Big Bad Wolf, which I hope has persuaded the wolf NOT to eat Little Red Riding Hood’s grandma. Do you think he will eat grandma now after all this persuading?

  2. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,

    I am writing to you (the most intelligent wolf of all) because I am absolutely sure you will listen and understand this matter with all your superior wisdom. I have become aware that your intentions of eating innocent grandmas has recently increased. I know that you already have eaten one grandma but come on Mr Wolf! Do you really think its right? The situation is important and must be discussed thoughtfully yet calmly through this letter.

    My first point is that if you begin eating good, guilt-free grannies your reputation would be the worst throughout the whole wolf community! This is because, grannies are fragile, slow and an extremely simple catch. When you will start picking on the elderly ladies, your friends (or so known as “mates”) will begin mocking and laughing at you; you will suffer of shame and embarrassment for the rest of your life. Is this what you want? Obviously, for a manly wolf like you, you wouldn’t want to look like a cowardly beast!

    Furthermore, grandmas taste very horrible! It is a fact that 75% of old ladies have a horrible flavour to them. The rest 25% or so taste ‘Ok’ but have extra chilly to them with 1/2 a chance to blow all your hair off! Surely, it can never be that a wolf like you would want the disgusting, disgraceful or spicy taste to ruin your day.

    My final point is that there is loads of edible in the forest. This means you could indulge yourself with delicious delicacies (such as: birds, deer and rabbits). They would make you a lot healthier than hard, greasy and rotten nanny bones.

    Overall, I hope you consider these valuable points and stop eating those lovely grannas! Come on pal! There’s much more nutritional food in the forests. Take up another challenge. Become vegan and be the pride of the pack! The one and only chance – take it.

    From your faithful advisor
    oJASVI nAG

  3. Dear strong and brave wolf.

    I am writing to persuade you not to eat any more old innocent grandmas. There are many many reasons not to eat any more stinky old ladies.

    If you eat another grandma your hair will fall of and one day you will be nude and your so call friends will laugh at at you. Do you want that to happen to you? Your so called mates will keep reminding you of this terrible incident. No one will like you they all will call you the hairless wolf. This will humiliate you and your siblings as long as they live!!!

    Another reason you shouldn’t eat grandmas is because they have pointy bones. If you eat anymore your teeth will eventually fall out so you will be teeth-less And you will not be able to eat anything else let alone grandmas. However you may face a lonely death. Do you want that to happen?

    In addition this could give you low reputation. wolves are supposed to be fast,brave and strong. Do you want to be known as weak? Every one will laugh at you. You are supposed to be the leader of the pack the strongest and the bravest. What do you think the pack will do if they found out. You and your siblings will be humiliated through out the rest of your family lives.

    To conclude I think you should stop this madness or it will get out of hand. The family will want to seek revenge on you. Come on wolfy turn a vegetarian and stop this mayhem once and for all. You should take a chance once and you will feel amazed

    By your faithful advisor

    I.A.M

  4. Dear wise and brave Mr.wolf,

    I am writing to you and only to you because i know that you would listen! you must stop eating grandmas, immediately .There are many reasons why you should stop, so please read carefully, before it is to late for you…

    It is a well known fact that in forests there are plenty of tasty food which you could eat instead which you could hunt down. There are food such as: rabbits, deer’s ,birds which would also make a much better meal rather than eating a big stinky old granny. As well as that why don’t you leave grandmas alone and try and hunt down other challenging things such as deer’s.

    Grandmas are bad for your lifestyle.Scientist believe that if you at a grandma your belly will become really fat and you might not even be able to walk properly. would you want to be known as the fat wolf?Would you want that to happen?

    If you eat grannies your teeth would shatter.It is a true fact that which could be big dilemma… If your teeth fall out you can not eat at all and because of this starvation will be caused.

    So you shouldnt be eating any more grandmas because you don’t want to choke or die? Do you? Off course you don’t wolfy!

    To conclude I suggest you should become a vegetarian and eat healthy food such as carrots,apples,banana,peaches,plums and al kind of fruit and vegetables but still you can still eat fish,eggs and lots more to provide protein. Come on wolfy you can do it!

    From your faithful advisor S.A

  5. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,
    I am writing to you because no other wolf would fully understand what I’m saying apart from you! I have a few points why you shouldn’t eat grandmas because I have heard you have ate an old lady while she was on her way to shopping!

    It is a fact that if you eat grandma meat your hair will fall out and you will be the only wolf with no hair! Wouldn’t this embarrass you Running around the woods naked? It has been proved but scientists that if you eat granny meat you will end up having no hair forever! I’m sure you wouldn’t want to feel embarrassed every day?!

    If you eat a pensioner then you’re risking your teeth because old ladies bones are so hard! Surely, you don’t want to brake you teeth on a old fail ladies’ bones!?

    From you faithful advisor Patrycja

  6. DEAR WISE AND BRAVE WOPLF!!!

    I’m am writing to you because I know you will listen! You must stop eating innocent grandma,immediately. There are alot of reasons why you should stop,so please read carefully,before it is too late for you…

    Firstly,you will become very Fat if you eat innocent grandma.what has grandma done to you that your after her and trying to eat her?

    In adition,an intelligent wolf like you does not want to eat frail ladies? Strong wolf’s like you want to eat healthy food. Such as eating grannies is mean and selfish. Also grandma doesent want to be eaten.

    STOP! Because grandma is happy where she is! Also you will become very week after eating grandma. If you want to be selfish and eat grandma. THEN THIS IS UP TO YOU

    If you stop! And challenge your self it will be great and then you will have alot of new FRIENDS. Also you will be the WORLD strongest wolf ever. You need to eat FRUIT AND VEG.

    COME ON WOLFIE! WOLFIE YOU COULD DO IT!

    From your faithful advisor ZAINAB!

  7. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,

    I am writing to persuade you to not eat Little Red Riding Hood’s grandma. Are you sure this is the right choice? Are you aware of what you are doing? By the end of this letter you will understand the grave mistakes you are making.

    One reason for not eating Little Red Riding Hood’s grandma is that’s he would not be a delicious taste for a Wolf. Surely, she would be too chewy, squidgy and tough. It is a fact that rabbits and deers would taste a lot better for a fast wolf like you.

    Also everybody would think you are a slow, lazy wolf because you chases after old ladies. Would you like it if everyone called you the wolf who can’t run. Why don’t you challenge yourself and try to chase a cheetah or a hare.

    Furthermore, if you eat the innocent, poor, old grandma this would completely ruin your reputation. Think about it! Everyone would see you as weak, slow and scared. Would you like that, Mr wolf? Just stop! Think about it!

    If you eat that innocent old grandma, you’ll have to suffer from serious health issues! According to scientific studies, human bone will completely shatter your teeth ; if you don’t you’ll be perfect. As well as shattered teeth, did you know that this frail grandma has a disease which means it will completely vanish your fur! Aldo your teeth would all fall out because of her bones. You would not like it if everyone called you ‘gappy’!

    Come on wolfy. Come on pal. just believe in me you can do it. take the chance on a new lifestyle and you’ll see the amazement of a new life.

    Please do not eat her. You can be the first vegetarian in wolf history. I promise you can be the first one.

    Your faithful advisor Amaan Ahmed.

  8. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,
    I am writing to you to persuade you to not eat innocent old frail ladies immediately. There are many consequences you should face if you eat or slaughter old ladies.

    Firstly, eating a human bean is against the law. If you eat a human you will be in jail for over ten years or more. This is a matter that if you carry this behavior on you would be breaking a law. Do you want to live in jail for the rest of your life?

    Scientist believe that if you eat a human meat it would be terrible bad for not only you but for a wolf body. It would make you stop digesting food. This is matter that if you stop digesting you will die in a early year.

    Eating someone nan’s means that you are a cold hearted wolf would not care about a single thing. Do you want to be everyone colwn. Why do you want eat a nanny which don’t taste nice?

    Come one wolfy cheer up! Become a vegi.

    from your advisor
    Sabiren

  9. Dear wise and brave Mr wolf I am persuading you to not eat little riding hoods
    grandma.
    Mr wolf I am saying this that little riding hoods grandma want taste that good she want be crunchy. Futhermore resach have said that wolves shouldn’t eat human surely little riding hood grandma shouldn’t be eaten.It is bad for your health eating nannies can cause you to choke.they want been that juicy and their bones are very hard and it cause choking.Sencodly Wolves have plenty of food such as deer,snakes and Brids so stop eating old ladies.wolves shouldn’t eat old nannies furthermore research have shown that wolves shouldn’t eat human do you want to been seen as a weak wolf?eating old ladies will make a bad reputation unless you stop eating old ladies.why don’t become a vegetarian.
    Your faithful adviser Asmi

  10. Dear wise and brave Mr wolf.

    I am writing to you because I knoe that you will listen!you must stop eating grandmas,immediately.There are many reasons why you should stop,so please read carefully,before it is too late for you…

    Firstly you are becoming so fat and hairy!so you have to do more physical exercise to get some weights down.Also you have to stop from eating so much because you have to eat some fruits,that’s healthy.

    Secondly there are many reasons why you shouldn’t eat grandmas.An intelligent wolf like you should behave well and don’t eat so much.Eating old pensioners will be bad for your stomach because,when you eat it hurts.

    Furthermore it is a well known fact that you shouldnt eat grandmas.Other wolves will unless you that eat so much! If you eat grandmas,then you will be sick and your tummy will be bad when you are eating.

  11. Dear Wise and Brave Mr wolf,

    I am writing to you and to you only to persuade you to not eat old Grannies. I know that you’re the only wolf that would listen to me. Surely you can see that eating innocent old Grandmas is the stupidest choice to make! Why would anyone want to eat little old ladies? There are many reasons why you should stop, so please take my advice before it’s too late…

  12. I am writing to persuade you to stop eating grandmas.This letter
    is exclusive to you because i know you’ll listen to this message.
    However, there are many reasons why you shouldn’t eat grandmas, so read carefully!

    Unless you stop immediately you could experience severe heart problems. Also granny bones contain a toxic acid that melts your
    organs! You could avoid this by becoming a vegetarian and consuming no meat at all.

    Eating old age pensioners will ruin your reputation.Surely the best wolves challenge themselves by hunting a larger more powerful prey.Do you want to be known as the big cowardly wolf who hunts old ,innocent grannies.

    It is a well known fact that frail innocent old ladies taste chewy and mouldy, and will make you throw up, also the stench of the
    bones smells like rotten cheese. Hardly anyone can bear it.

    Come on wolfy give it a try it’s not so hard. I know you can do it.

    from your friendly advisor
    MR ZaneZaman

  13. Dear Mr wolf,

    I am writing to tell you do not eat an old grandma’s immediately. There are many reasons why you shouldn’t eat grandma’s and I will tell you the reasons throughout the letter …

    Eating old grandma’s will ruin your wolf reputation. It is a fact if you eat them then all the other wolves will mock you and call you the wimpy wolf. An intelligent , brave and wise wolf (who is you) should definitely not eat little old ladies. If you carry on eating someone’s beloved old nan then you’ll be known as a weakling.

    If you do this no one will be your friend. Surely you would agree, that no one in the forest, woods or in the wolf society will prefer you. Would you want to be known as the obese, lonely wolf?

    Your friends, also known as mates, will mock you all the time. Do you want to be known as a weakling? Moreover if you do not eat little old ladies then your mates will be kind to you and won’t make fun out of you.

    Instead of eating anything meaty you should take a step further and become a full vegetarian. Come on wolfie take a chance and you’ll see the results in your health.

    Yours sincerely, Ayub Khan :)

  14. Dear intelligent mr wolf,
    I am writing to persuade you to not eat my grandma.She’s innocent!There are many reason why you shouldn’t eat my grandma.

    Wouldn’t you agree that eating old ladies would ruin your reputation? She is just an feeble,frail,fragile woman.It makes you look weak.Wouldn’t you like to be seen as strong,brave and wise?

    Did you know eating little old ladies causes symptoms;like hair falling off,itchiness and asthma.Would you like one of these symptoms?stop or this could happen to you!Also,did you know that 56% OF wolves,have bad digestive system because of old grannies.With there old wrinkly,dry and chewy skin.

    Besides,there are a veriaty of delicious forest foods;such as birds,deers and rabbits.You could be on a diet instead. (because you need to be on a diet).It is a fact that there are much more foods that are available like grass,leaves and insects.

    In summary,
    If you want some advise,you should go on a diet and you shouldn’t eat nan.Have you ever had a grandma?

    From your adviser,Abena.

  15. Dear wise and brave Mr wolf,

    I am writing to you because I know you will listen!You must stop eating grannies immediately.There are many reasons why you should stop,so pleas readcarefully,before it is to late for you……

    When you try to eat grandmas you might choke.Firstly,people are big and they would not fit in your thought.Secondly,garandma might get stuck in throat.

    Old laddiesdo not exacly tast good.Grandmas have very rotten and dry meats do grannies meat is not good for you.people suggest that grannies are very bad for you.
    Little old ladies are very bad for your health.Eating grannies will give you a vry bad tummy and a head eak.Scientist suggest that wolfs should eat animals like lions,rabbit and deers.Do you want to be called weak wolf?

    Grandmas are very bad to eat.Firstly,all the bones are hard and very moldy.Also,all your teeth will fallout.Do you want to be called gummy wolf?

    You should eat animals like lions,rabbits and deers.Animals have more fresh meat then old ladies.Animal are quicker then old laddies.Come on wolfy you can do it?

    From your faithful adviser,
    Klaudiusz

  16. Dear Mr wolf

    I am writing to you because I know that you will listen!You must stop eating grandma’s immediately!There are many reasons why you should.So please read carefully before it’s too late for you.

    Firstly why are you eating old frail ladies?When you could eat plenty of other delicious food from the forest?That is much nicer then meat.

    Secondly if you eat humans you’re be fat and your teeth are not good because their bones are hard to eat.You teeth will fall out.

    Furthermore eating old pensioners will be bad for your reputation!It’s not good for you.You can eat better food like fruit and make some juice that all is easier.

    Your faithful advisor Anis

  17. Dear wise and brave Mr wolf
    I am only writing to you because I know you will listen!you must stop eating old people immediately.There are many reasons why you should stop or there will be conserques.

    If you do keep eating grandmas you might get so fat that you can’t fit into your den!futhermore you get so fat that you can’t move.If you don’t stop people might you the town roly poly because your that fat.

    A intelligent wolf like you know nanas smell terrible if you eat one you could get poisoned by the perform. Futhermore You could lose all your hair if you keep eating grandmas.

    Futhermore if you eat old people will want revenge.there will be anger between humans and wolfs.Your family and friends might not want to see you again if keep doing this.why dont you like fruit and vegetables.

    To consider not getting hurt you should become a vegan who don’t eat meat at all and you should leave old people alone or ther will be massive

    Your sincerely Nathaniel

  18. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,

    I am writing to you to persuade you to stop eating innocent grandma’s. It has been said that you have been spying in old ladies which is absolutley wrong. Do you think you made the right choice?

    First of all ,did you ever consider what would happen to your health if you carry on eating old women? You could suffer from many health problems ( such sad : vomiting, colds, loss of hair, and finally your teeth will fall out!) which will make you suffer for the rest of your life. Do you want this to happen?
    I’m addition, do you know what would happen to your reputation? Do you want to be known as selfish,weak and nasty instead of strong,powerful and intelligent? What will your friends (also known as ‘mates’) think? They will embarrass you for the rest of your life and you will live in shame of what you have done.Is that how you want to be treated?

    Also don’t you have enough food in the woods which would have more meat on then old,innocent ladies?what about the delicious deers,rabbits and fish? It is proven that 89% of wolves do not eat people but eat normal foods. We know you want to be different but eating grandmas is not the answer.

    Hey Wolfie why don’t you just become a vegetarian? You will be the pride of the pack! Your hair will begin to shine and you can be different in a good way and by not eating people or other living creatures.

    From your faithful adviser
    Aaisha Raja

  19. Dear wise and intelligent Wolf

    I am writing to persuade you to stop eating grandmas.This letter
    is exclusive to you because i know you’ll listen to this message.
    However, there are many reasons why you shouldn’t eat grandmas, so read carefully!

    Unless you stop immediately you could experience severe heart problems. Also granny bones contain a toxic acid that melts your
    organs! You could avoid this by becoming a vegetarian and consuming no meat at all.

    Eating old age pensioners will ruin your reputation.Surely the best wolves challenge themselves by hunting a larger more powerful prey.Do you want to be known as the big cowardly wolf who hunts old ,innocent grannies.

    It is a well known fact that frail innocent old ladies taste chewy and mouldy, and will make you throw up, also the stench of the
    bones smells like rotten cheese. Hardly anyone can bear it.

    Come on wolfy give it a try it’s not so hard. I know you can do it.

  20. An intelligent Dear wise and brave Mr wolf,

    I am writing to you because I know that you will listen! You must stop eating grandmas, immediately. There are many reasons why you should stop, so please read carefully, before it is too late for you…

    Why would you eat a grandma? You can find more food and better food in the forests like rabbits, deer’s, and birds. Also old ladies have more bones and their skin is really chewy! Surely you wouldn’t want your teeth to get stuck.

    A wolf like you shouldn’t be eating old ladies you should be eating much healthier food like fruit and vegetables.

    Furthermore old people are really slow. Its unhealthy you’re dragging your belly down.

    Come on wolfy you know you can stop eating grandmas.Be a vegetarian and be healthy.

    From Your Faithful Advisor Raeesa

  21. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf

    I am writing this letter to persuade you not to eat grannies. You can not eat them because they are innocent! Are you making the right choice? PLEASE RECONSIDER!

    The very first point why you shouldn’t eat grandmas is because you have a variety of food to choose from. Everybody knows that there is plenty of food in the forest such as deer, birds and rabbits. Do you think that it’s fair when you have a lot of food in the forest and you leave it there while you go out chasing tiny, old, fragile grannies?

    Furthermore, another reason why you shouldn’t eat grannies is because they taste ridiculously horrible! If you are eating old grannie meat then anything could happen to you. Do you think you should be eating granny meat?

    In addition, I am going to explain my final reason. You should challenge yourself eating bigger animals such as lion, cheetahs and bears. If you eat those bigger animals you are being the bigger person because you don’t have eat tiny, stinky, fragile grannies.

    Instead of eating grannies you should try something else. You look ridiculous when you are chasing tiny grandmas and people behind you are laughing at you. An intelligent person like you should be the bigger person. Come on wolfy you can do it. Can’t you?

    From your faithful advisor, Bismah

  22. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,

    I am writing to inform you that you should not eat Little Red Riding Hood’s Grandmother. Surely, no one can deny that you are sensible enough to not chase after Gruesome, little Grandmothers. However, by the end of this letter you will realise the right choice…

    Firstly, if you eat her grandmother, it is going to be detrimental for your reputation. You would not want everyone to think that you are a greedy man would you? Also, in other fairy tales wolves never would eat grandmas. It is a fact that 80% to 90% in traditional tales only eat rabbits.

    Imagine, if somebody (a wolf) ate your grandmother how would you feel? Clearly, if you start chasing after weak grandmas, would you not be weak as well. Your friends will put you in shame and embarrassment for the rest of your life.Would you want everyone to think that?Obviously,you are much cleverer than this,aren’t you?

    Grandmas will definitely ruin your health.It is a fact that a diet of rabbits will ensure you are the healthiest wolf in the woods.Experts believe that 98% of wolves never eat grandmothers.
    Would you want to be known as the “odd one out”,I’m certain you would not.

    Come on wolfy!Do this for me,be the brave one and make the right choice!Go vegetarian and do the correct thing!You know you can do it!

    From your faithful advisor,Sarah Kauser.

  23. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,
    I am writing to persuade you to stop eating humans! we all know that wolves shouldn’t be eating humans anyway. This following letter will inform you of all the reasons why you shouldn’t eat innocent human beings.

    First of all, everyone knows that grandma’s don’t taste that good!
    Do you really want to be eating onions, cabbages and rotten sprouts out of an old lady’s wrinkly stomach? You don’t even want to hear about the aroma!

    In addition, If you eat this innocent old lady, who is Little Red Riding Hood’s grandma, you’ll have to suffer from serious health problems! Basically, according to scientific research, human bones will completely shatter your teeth; if you don’t you’ll be perfectly fit and healthy!

    The frail LRRH’S (Little Red Riding Hood’s) nan and many other old pensioners out there would be terrified to even get out of the house! How do you think their dear loved ones would feel?

    Hey, wolfie! You do know that if you eat someones dear old granny, you’ll have the worst reputation ever, all the wolves would laugh at you and you’ll be filled with embarrassment and shame for the rest of your life! Is that what you want?

    To conclude with a bit of advice, I suggest you should become a vegetarian! You won’t have to harm any living animal again for the rest of your life. You’d become famous and historical for being the first ever wolf vegetarian! Good luck wolfie!

    Your faithful friend,
    rayan

  24. Dear wise and brave Mr Wolf,

    I am writing to make you aware of the awful choice you are about to make! If you go ahead and eat that poor, old grandma, you will completely destroy your future and will have to face the horrible consequences!

    One reason why you should not eat grannies is that you will totally spoil your reputation. surely you would agree that big, strong and brave wolves are fast enough to go hunting after other big, fast forest animals. Well, if you keep on chasing after slow, old grandmas, people will think that you are too weak and scared to go find yourself some food. Obviously this is not what you want!

    Another reason why you shouldn’t eat innocent grandmas is that it could be very dangerous! It is a fact that grandmas wear big and baggy dresses! This means that you could easily choke and die!! You have a hug and wonderful future future to fulfill! There is no reason why you should risk your own life! We all want you to live a happy and joyful life!

    Come on wolfy! Be the man and make the right choice! Yyoun don’t want to put your own life at risk just for those stinky old grannies! Go full vegetarian and be a super star!!

    From your faithful advisor, friend and soul mate,
    Arzu 6M

  25. Dear Mr wolf
    I am writing to you because I know that will listen! You must stop eating grandmas,
    There are many reason why because it’s unhealthy to eat meat. You should eat deer,rabbit instead.

    Furthermore why are you eating old frail ladies you cloud eat plenty of food from the forest such as birds,deers,rabbit?

    You eat too much meat your teeth will fall out you won’t eat anything more
    You shouldn’t eat meat. If you eat meat you eat fat and can not run.Human don’t taste very nice.
    by SalanaSharif

  26. Dear Wise and Brave Mr wolf,

    i am writing to persuade you to not go ahead with this horrible plan . If you do you will face many consequences…

    If you eat innocent grandmas you will start to look ridiculous.
    Firstly,grandma bones will knock out your teeth. Do you want to be called toothless?
    Secondly, if you eat frail grandmas all of your hair will fall off!An intelligent wolf like you wouldn’t want to be seen as a naked wolf for the rest of your life.would you.

    Another reason why, you should not beat gramas is grandmas will ruin your health.A diet of rabbits wi8ll ensure you are the healthiest wolf in the woods.Secondly,98% of wolves in traditional tales only eat rabbits. Do you want to be the odd one out?

    Come on wolfy you know you can stop eating grandmas.Why dont you just be a vegetarian like me and then you don’t have to eat grandmas.You know you can do it.
    “Will you do it wolfy just for me please”said Little Red Riding Hood.
    “i’ll do it for you and just because it is you thank you for being so nice to me ” said wolfy.
    From your Faithful advisor Alyssa

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