The Detective Dog – Effectiveness of text —– B/Y Mon

What features of the extract below do you like and why do you think it is effective?

 

Into the classroom the two of them hurried

And found Mr Jones looking terribly worried.

He tugged at his hair and he let out a sigh

Peter looked around and he started to cry.

Sniff, sniff, sniff, What was going on?

“The books!” cried out Peter. “The books have all gone!”

 

Nell gave a growl when she heard the bad news,

But then started sniffing and searching for clues.

Sniff, sniff, sniff! On the bookshelf, a cap!

The thief must have dropped it, the terrible chap.

 

 

 

6 thoughts on “The Detective Dog – Effectiveness of text —– B/Y Mon

  1. Into the classroom the two of them hurried
    And found Mr Jones looking terribly worried.
    He tugged at his hair and he let out a sigh
    Peter looked around and he started to cry.
    Sniff, sniff, sniff, What was going on?
    “The books!” cried out Peter. “The books have all gone!”

    Nell gave a growl when she heard the bad news,
    But then started sniffing and searching for clues.
    Sniff, sniff, sniff! On the bookshelf, a cap!
    The thief must have dropped it, the terrible chap.

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