Some of the children made shorts video’s to point out the key features of a non chronological report.
Here they are. Have a little watch of them and tell me what you think?
Have they pointed out ALL of the key features?
What could they of improved?
How could the of improved it?
They did not point out all the features.
They could improve there talking skills.
They could take turns to talk.
They did not point out all the key features.
They could of improved the video by pointing out all the key features and speaking clearly.
They could of improved it by having one person talking.
They could of had subheadings, introduction and a summery.