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Thursday 24th June- Year 3 English Home Learning

Hi Year 3,

To use paragraphs

Watch the video below and complete the two tasks.

Task 1

Complete the task set on Education City. It is set under homework and is named paragraphs.

Challenge

Watch the story of Paddington at the Palace below. Retell the story using paragraphs. DO NOT COPY THE STORY!

Upload your challenge work here.

112 responses to “Thursday 24th June- Year 3 English Home Learning”

  1. Aro M.

    i sent my homework

    1. Mrs Khaliq

      Good boy Aro.

  2. Zahraa Y.

    At a bright sunny morning Paddington and Gruber was going the the queens palace and Paddington waved his flag and he saw someone at the window Paddington thought did the queen look at the window but then they went to the gate and saw a band because. Paddington was so small he found not see a single thing! All he saw was people faces but he Could not see a single thing that is ended! But then Gruber wanted to get a picture with the guards but he couldn’t. We the police said I will allow you to take a picture.

  3. Zahraa Y.

    For education city

  4. Zahraa Y.

    I could not get in it is on loading all I saw was white

  5. Minaal A.

    I only did half of the story

  6. Minaal A.

    One morning Paddington and mister Gruber where going to see the guarded at Buckingham palce. when they arrived at the royal park there were flowers blooming the flowers look beautiful maybe I should take some for the Queen I don’t think you can because they are the Queenes. If you do take a pic for your scrap book they arrived to the palce Paddington couldn’t see there was only a few people the guar d told Paddington you can come and he took a photo

  7. Lusardo M.

    One suny Mr.Gruber took Paddington to London on a sight seeing bus .When they went of the bus they went to the Queens front yard when they went there Paddington said I can pick up flowers for the Queen then Mr.Gruber said STOP and then Paddington stopped immediately.He said why , Mr Gruber replied because it is the Queens front yard.
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    Then they walk along to Buckingham Palace gate were the Queen lives,the guards behind the gates were marching along the path every hour and the crowd was building up .
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    Next Paddington couldn’t see the gards marching along the path so Mr . Gruber bought Paddington a telescope to see the gards marching and then Paddington could see some other people faces so he crawled through everyone’s legs by the time we got there ,the gards past by but the gates open so the police can go in.The crowd was gone by the time but Paddington and Mr Gruber made a photo for Paddington photo album.
    So he thought he saw the Queen in a window so he waved his Union Jack flag at her.

  8. Maddox B.

    It was a warm quiet morning and Paddington and mr grueber we’re visiting Buckingham palace. They made sure they sat at the front fonthe bus to see as many of London’s attractions as they could. Paddington and Mr gruwber got off the bus and walked through the park and some flowers caught Paddingtons attention “no you mustn’t pick them “ said Mr gruwber it’s against the law. “All the flowers in this park are owned by the queen” Mr Gruber took a picture for Paddingtons scrap book. There was a flag and it meant end Queen was home. Me Gruber bought Paddington a periscope and told him to look through the bottom end you will see over peoples heads. Paddington crawled through the crowd and by time he reached the front all the guards were gone and Paddington didn’t get to have a picture with them. A police man came over “I’ve been instructed to allow you to come inside and have a proper picture” Paddington and mr gruwber followed. As they left Paddington waved his flag
    One more time Incas the Queen seen it. Mr Gruber took one last photo “you must put an X on the photo when we get home and put it in your scrap book “ he told Paddington

  9. Adam J.

    One bright morning, Mr Gruber and Paddington went out to visit Buckingham palace to see the queen. Padington and Mr Gruber went through St James’s park he saw alot of flowers and asked Mr Gruber if he should get some for the queen and he said its illegal as the queen already owns it and that it is here front garden.They went near the palace and saw a band playing songs and Paddington went and couldnt see anything. Then the band went away and they were not happy.Then a Royal guard went to them and pointed at them and he said come and they saw the Queen and got there picture.

  10. Muhammed R.

    One sunny day in the morning padington and mr grubber went to go to Buckingham palace so they went in the bus they wanted to sit in front of the bus because they want to see amazing London
    .They went to the park padington said oh I’m going to pick up these flowers mr gruber said that is illegal to do padington said why? This is illegal because this is the Queen’s flowers anyways.
    so you dont need to even give once they reached to Buckingham palace padington thought he saw the Mr grubber said that could be the Queen.
    Now they saw the solider’s walking they were doing types of music but padington couldn’t see so Mr grubber gave this telescope thing but he still couldn’t see so he crawled about but they were already gone.Mr grubber said sorry if I couldn’t get you any pictures it’s fine said padington it doesn’t matter now a guy in a differnt hat said to the police man let them two people to come so the police man said do you guys want to come in Buckingham palace they said of course do they went in an after a long time they came back padington said when they out I really think that is the

  11. Ismael K.

    I have sent it on share point but I have to take a picture twice cause there wasn’t enought space

    1. Mrs Khaliq

      Not a problem Ismael. What is a paragraph?

  12. Raiyan K.

    I uploaded my work

    1. Miss Millar

      That’s fab! What progress have you made today?

  13. Mohammed S.

    I have done my English and I have sent it to the SharePoint link

    1. Miss Millar

      Thanks! What have you done to show your progress today?

  14. Yunus R.

    Paddington bear went to Birmingham palace with Mr Grew they went on the buss and they say at the front to see the building and they went to the park to see the queen

    Paddington pick up the but it’s the queen
    Then the movie came then they can get a picture

    1. Miss Millar

      Lovely start. Please re-read to check it makes sense (It’s Buckingham Palace.)

  15. Muhammad S.

    One sunny morning Paddington and Mr Grubber wanted to go see Buckingham palace and greet the Queen.Mr Grubber brought his camera and Paddington brought his flag.They sat on the front of the bus but the rest they had to walk through ST James park.”Maybe I should get some flowers for the Queen”said Paddington.”Maybe you shouldn’t it is illegal” said Mr Grubber.”Anyways this all belongs to the Queen already.”saidMr grubber.They were at Buckingham Palace and there was a parade.They tried to look but there was a lot of people. Mr Grubber tried to give Paddington a telescope but there was a lot of people.At the end the people left but Paddington didn’t get a single picture.Finally he got a picture with a guardsmen. The End

    1. Miss Millar

      Amazing. Love the use of adverbs to begin sentences. How could you improve further?

      1. Muhammad S.

        I could improve by sectioning it.

  16. Miss Millar

    Very creative writing. Just remember to write in paragraphs.

  17. Ameen K.

    Paddington Bear was going to Buckingham Palace because he wanted to see the Queen.

    After that,Paddington and Mr Grew left the bus because it only went to the nearest park.

    The bear wanted to pick the flowers for the queen but he couldn’t because it was against the law.

    Then, he saw a dark figure and found out it was the Queen.

    1. Miss Millar

      Remember that paragraphs need to have multiples sentences in each.

  18. Abdullah K.

    One lovely sunny morning Paddington and Mr gruber where making there way to the Queens house Buckingham palace Mr gruber held an camera and Paddington held a Britain flag. Mr gruber and Paddington got on to a buss and they sat in the front seat because they wanted to see all the pictures. At last they arrived in a park it was really sunny Paddington said that he would pick some flowers up for the the Queen at Buckingham.

    1. Mrs Walker

      Good work Abdullah but please can you write paragraph about what Paddington wanted to pick in the park.

  19. Romeesa T.

    Did the education city.
    1. Pets
    2. Cats kept mice away
    3. Dogs guarded the ships
    4.where did the pirates sleep

    1. Mrs Walker

      Good girl Romeesa. How did you find your Education City task go?

  20. Yusuf B.

    When paddington and Mr gruber woke up they were very excited because they were going to see the changing of the gardens in Bukingham palace.They sat on top of the bus to see what everyone else was doing.The bus took them most of the way but they stopped at St James park .They took a walk through st James garden which was the front garden to the queens palace. Paddington wanted to take a flower in case the queen saw him. “Im afraid that’s breaking the law “said Mr grubber ,and it will spoil the flowers for others to see.There was a big music band playing ,and it was getting very busy paddington crawled through the crowds by the time he got to the end the band was finished and then Mr Gruber took a picture of paddington next to the guard.

    1. Mrs Walker

      Yusuf this is a good piece of work but just remember that people’s names must have a capital letter.

  21. Sumaya S.

    i will do it

    1. Mrs Walker

      We will look forward to see your work. Please make sure you listen to the story and remember to write in paragraphs.

  22. Haroon K.

    I did it and share point it.

    1. Miss Redhead

      Thankyou.

  23. Elyas A.

    The question Education City.
    1, Pets
    2, cat kept mice away.
    3, The dogs guarded the ships.
    4, What other pets are found on the ships?

    Challenge:
    Paddington and Mr Gruber went to Buckingham Palace to see the Queen. They were so exited to see the Queen. When the arrived in Buckingham Palace Paddington wanted to pick the flowers but Mr Gruber said its against the rule.
    Mr Gruber got his camera to take photo of Paddington.
    There were lots of people, Paddington cant see the Queen. He just saw the people and Mr Gruber didn’t took picture of Paddington.
    The King said you can make a photo frame but finally Mr Gruber took a photo of Paddington.

    1. Miss Redhead

      Good effort Elyas well done.

  24. Sania K.

    In one stormy night Paddington and MR Grumber wanted to go to Buckingham palace to meet the queen .
    They went on the bus Mr Brunner got a camera and Paddington got his flag invade they actually meet the queen .
    The bus stoped at a park they had to walk through the park than they saw lots of guards once they got in they heard a big loud noise
    “wwhat was that sound”. Paddington said worridly
    They went even further into the palace and you do not know what happens they saw the queen they were so happy.
    Paddington waved his flag and Mr Grumber took lots of pictures on the way out of the way he took it everywhere .

    1. Miss Redhead

      Reread your work to check that it makes sense.

  25. Oluwaduminu S.

    Education city work
    What is the subject or main topic ?
    Pets
    Circle the key fact bellow.
    Cats kept mice away
    Circle the key fact bellow.
    Dogs guarded the ship
    Which question would you ask to find more key facts
    What other pets are found on the ship.
    Retelling a story
    Paddington and Mr Grubber take a bus to go to Buckingham palace.
    Soon after they get there and they look at the lovely flowers 🌸 and Mr Grubber tells Paddington about them then a parade of marching band begin but Paddington and Mr Grubber couldn’t see because of the crowd.
    Mr Grubber decides to buy a telescope but Paddington still couldn’t see.
    Many people got to get a photo with the band after their parade. Then a man talks to them and they point at Mr Grubber and Paddington and get to have photo inside the palace.

    1. Miss Redhead

      Good effort. He brought a periscope. What is a periscope?

  26. Zeyd H.

    Paddington went to see the queen and wanted to give her flowers.He was about to pick them when he saw a sign that read DO NOT PICK FLOWERS.He arrived at Buckingham Palace and waved 7 times because he thought he saw the queen.

    1. Miss Redhead

      You were asked to write paragraphs, this means more than 1.

    2. Zeyd H.

      Continued
      He then went with the queen and went on a hot air ballon. He went to take a picture and gave her a present.It was a marmalade cake, and shared it with the queen and the guards.

  27. Abdullah K.

    It didn’t work

    1. Miss Redhead

      Can you tell me how it did not work?

  28. Tana I.

    Station
    Paddington was at the station then mr and Mrs brown brang padding ton HOME.
    Place
    Mr grew went to buckimham with paddington

    1. Miss Redhead

      Brang is an incorrect verb what is the past tense of bring?

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