This week you have been learning about stories with dilemmas and you have focused on the build up section.
You have been writing about a girl who has been playing with her kite in a forest.
Bronze – Use conjunctions to create multi-clause sentences about what the girl was doing and where she was. You may want to include the following; so, because, as, if, although.
Silver – Use a range of sentence openers such as adverbs, adverbials and prepositional openers to describe the girl, what she was doing and where she was playing. Include adjectives too!
Gold – Write the build up section using a range of sentence structures, a range of sentence openers (adverbs. prepositions and adverbials), interesting language choices (adjectives, simile, metaphor) and ensure you proof-read before sending!!
We look forward to reading your writing!
Year 4 Teachers