Week 5 homework-Year 4

This week you have put your fantastic minds and writing skills to write a fiction explanation text about a magical machine.

Now is your opportunity to show your creativity and write an explanation text about your own extraordinary, unique invention.

 

Success criteria:
* Title-Key question
* Subheadings
* Chronological order
* Sentence openers
* Causal conjunctions (as a result, which caused, this leads to, because of this, therefore, so)
* Present tense

 

42 thoughts on “Week 5 homework-Year 4

  1. How do you use the cake machine?

    The cake machine is an ectrodanay machine and it makes cupcakes in seconds,so it an extraodinary machine .
    How is the cake machine made?

    This unique machine is made by collecting scrap and it’s washed up on the island like cogs,pistons,screws,rubber and nails. After that’s done,put the parts together to make the cake machine.

  2. How do you use the cake machine?

    The cake machine is an ectrodanay machine and it makes cupcakes in seconds,so it an extraodinary machine .
    How is the cake machine made?

    This unique machine is made by collecting scrap and it’s washed up on the island like cogs,pistons,screws,rubber and nails. After that’s done,put the parts together to make the cake machine.
    How does the cake machine work?

    To activate the machine,Mr Smith pulls a massive green lever.Because of this,the machine rumbles and jiggles.This allows to type in what cake to make as a result,the cogs slowly turn with pistons bounce up and down.

  3. The incredible chocolate machine

    The best machine ever you have seen , it is the chocolate machine!!!

    Who made the chocolate machine?

    A creative, genius lady called Hafsah was sitting on the green lush grass she found an idea .Which made her think that she can make a creative chocolate machine that can make different types of chocolates.

    How does the chocolate machine work?

    Find some old things like cogs,taps,twisting bits,nails then she put the pieces together gently.Nobody can be using it Except Hafsah because she is the only one that knows how to use it.Hafsah has to go on the computer and write what the costmer then it will be ready for the costmer.Firstly,she puts the honey in then if she will hear the sound Beeb Beeb Beeb Beeb that means that the chocolate should get lowered down the the temperature.when you hear the sound ring ring that means It’s ready.

    How is it packed ?

    It gets packed by a magical tube and It makes it look like a little mermaids!!!

    Your chocolate is arriving !!!!!

    By Takwa

  4. The cool shirt machine 🔧🔨

    In the Isle of mollThe shirt machine is a cool machine which creates T-shirts without even using a thread and a needle .

    How does it work?

    First you get a huge computer with a keyboard and type the shirt you want e.g musical shirts then there is a red button which makes the machine do different noises like Beeb Beeb .After that you see a dial which tells you how much honey you put in and there are three colours green means to much red means to less and white is just right.
    Finally the shirt will come all wrapped and ready to deliver to the person we need to give it to.

    Eesa.a

  5. The T-shirt machine
    Where is the t- shirt machine?
    The t-shirt machine is in the isle of mull,Scotland,it is a magnificent machine.
    What was it made of?
    It was made of cogs,taps and other kind of machinery that was made of metal.it took 7 years to make.you don’t need to use a needle or thread

  6. The lollipop machine

    Ones there was a mysteryes man who had an idea his idea was to make a huge machine a lollipop machine and ones he went far away from land and fond things floating in the sea and found a land with lots of logs and metal machine things such as pipes,wires,plugs and an enormous shield for machines not to get crashed and people to be safe

  7. The ice-cream machine

    This machine isn’t an ordinary machine but it is an extraordinary machine which makes delectibal ice-cream to eat. It is built by a inventor named Mr Edward.
    Mr Edward makes lots of machines such as the food machine,cake machine and T-shirt machine.

    How was the ice cream machine made?

    The ice cream machine was made by pipes ,taps, wires,switches,pistons,cogs and wheels all glued ,screwed, nailed and slotted together to make the ice cream machine.

    How does the ice cream machine work?

    To actavate the machine a bright green lever needs to be pulled. Secondly the ice cream mix needs to be made and poured into the freezing cylinder. Then the freezing door needs to be assembled to the beater. After a bright yellow botten needs to be pressed ,this leads to make the ice cream in just 5 minutes. Finally the ice -cream will be delivered at the bottom of the machine.

  8. The ice cream machine
    Not ordinary but extraordinary, machine ,which makes sweetress and appetizing ice creams in a minute!
    What is the ice cream machine made out of?
    Just over 9 years,Mrs Alice,who lives on an ireland was gifted tools and pipes.Because she likes to make stuff,she used all the tools to invent an ice cream machine.She was only gifted with screw and nails.Because it wasn’t enough she went out to search for them.Some where washed up on the shore and some tools were given by her neighbours.Once Mrs Alice had collected all of the tools she needed,she started to build it.

    How does the machine work?
    To activate the machine Mrs Alice pull the giant red lever,which turns the cogs. While the cogs are turning she sprinkles a lit bit of fairy dust.Suddenly rumbbling noises came from the machine like hungry crocodiles starving to death.At the end Mrs Alice was so happy because the scrumptious ice cream was finished!!!!

  9. How does the cake machine work
    This is no ordinary machine it is an extrodinary machine .

    How does the machine work
    In Order to activate the machine pull the red lever which results in the cogs to tearn because of this the flavours get mixed in the cake.Pull the lever to the right to put the cake in the oven .once you hear a ding the cake is ready and comes out of the bottem slot.

  10. The Ice Cream Machine
    This,is no ordinary machine,this machine makes any flavour ice cream!!
    What is it made of?
    The ice cream machine is made up of different parts that Mike Schmitt found. He found some parts that washed up on shore,some in scrap yards and some gifts from neighbours.To finish his machine, Mike ordered the key item from the machinery,a bag of nails and screws,some Pistons and a hammer.which he screwed,glued,slotted,fitted and stuck together.
    How does it work?
    To activate the machine,Mike Schmitt pull the lever in on position.Then he types his request in the computer.He stamps on the go button near his foot.

    • Then the machine pistons bounce which allows the fairy dust and crushed ice to be mixed. When the fairy dust and crushed ice are mixed,the syrup and unicorn blood(tastes like rainbows unicorn blood does,it’s deeeeelicous) are released into the mixture. Finally the ice-cream and cone pop out in a holder and are teleported to the person that ordered it. It only takes a few minutes to arrive. Your ice-cream is arriving,enjoy it. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

  11. Shirt machine

    The shirt machine which means no job he has to tyideas down on the computer which,allows the clogs to rotate round and round.
    How is the Shirt Machine made?
    Find some old scrap from the scrapyard such as (cogs,screws,pistons,nails,taps,old pieces of rubbers)
    Once that is done,fix the tools together so that some of the parts of the machine are done.Then finish the other layers in order to make the shirt machine.
    How the shirts are packedged?
    The shirt comes out of the bottom slot of the machine all packed up in spotty wrapping paper which as a result means the shirt is ready to go to it’s owner.
    Your shirt is arriving be done,just Lets you rest
    How the shirt machine works?

    To activat the shirt machine,messi has to pull the Blue buttun but before that he had to Type

  12. How does the cake machine work?

    The cake machine is no ordinary machine because it makes cakes and cupcakes in seconds,so it an extraodinary,unique,remakable machine

    How is the cake machine made?

    This unique machine is made by collecting scrap and it’s washed up on the island like cogs,pistons,screws,rubber and nails.
    After that’s done,put the parts together to make the cake machine.

    How does the cake machine work?

    To activate the machine,Mr Smith pulls a massive green lever.Because of this,the machine rumbles and jiggles.This allows to type in what cake to make as a result,the cogs slowly turn with pistons bounce up and down.

    From Hamda Finger

  13. The ice cream machine

    How does it work?

    In order to generate the power to the machine,Mr Adam scans his finger print.This causes mixing bowl to pop out for Mr Adam can drop some milk with the other ingredients to go inside the freezer for to minutes.Mr Adam does the password this causes the ice cream to come out to him to enjoy.

  14. How the football manchineel works

    First we enter want football we want then send
    it to the person who wants to buy it then the person
    then the person will text back, and say yes
    the the inventer will press the red button
    then the manchine will turn on the start
    making a buzz sound and at the, end it
    will make a zzz sound at the end and
    pop out in a round present.

    • How the football manchine works?

      First we enter want football they want to
      buy then the person texts back,and says
      yes.The inventor will push the red button
      then the manchine will turn on then
      manchine will start making a buzz sound
      at the end it will beep then POP! out in a
      round present.

  15. The ice cream machine
    Far from the usual machine, this machine transforms ordinary into extraordinary and the main ingredient to make the ice cream is fairy dust. Instead of wasting your time at a ice cream truck you could get even more astonishing, eye popping, jaw dropping ice cream from the ice cream machine.
    How was the machine made?
    Just over 10 years ago the machine was made by collecting scrap from different types of scrapyards, which was used to make the machine. Mr Spark collected pipes, wheels, piston screws and many more, that he stored in a safe place. Afterwards he designed where each item would go in the machine to make the ice cream for the person. To finish his invention he was gifted some more key items such as screws, nails and pistons from his neighbours to complete the extraordinary ice cream machine.

  16. The ice cream machine
    Once there was a machine like a machine never seen before it was an ice cream machine.

    How was the machine made
    To begin with,Franklin who was the creater of the machine collect lot of scrap either from the scrapyard or they were washed up by the shore which looked like the sea has just thew up.Only find ccogs ,pistions and screws.

    How does the machine work
    After this,Franklin pulls a blue lever which activates the machine.During the process the cogs turn and twist to produce the flavor .Finally

  17. The shirt machine
    Far from the usual machine, this transform ordinary into extraordinary as quick as a flash without having to pick up a finger also works with a finger scan.

    How is the shirt machine made?
    Over ten years, Mr stark was gifted a precious pearl which generated electricity. This gave him an idea to make a shirt machine he collected pipes and wires which was washed up by the shore. Pistons,cogs,taps,glues,nails and rubber was found in the scrapyard on the other Side of the island. Mr stark ordered most specific tools from the manufacturers and unique,exquisite gifts from neighbours.

    How does the shirt machine work?
    To activate the shirt machine Mr Stark pulls a giant green leaver button which turns the machine on. Carefully, he types his ideas which are Inputted into the computer to explain what’s needed. Mr Stark presses an orange button which causes the cogs to rotate and makes the designs on the t shirt. At the bottom of the wolf, is a slot which will make the shirts come out once they’d been pack edged and sent to the right owner.

  18. Shirt machine

    How is the shirt machine made

    The shirt machine is made from pulling bits, squashing bits and Pistons and buttons.

    How does the shirt machine work

    Not just everyone could touch the machine just the inventor could touch it. There is a big computer and you type an idea and press the green button and then you have a dial and if it goes red the whole room will be filed in bubbles less than five minutes.

    How does shirts come out of the shirt machine

    The shirts comes out of a magical pipe wrapped upped

  19. The ice cream machine
    This machine is not an ordinary machine this is a very special and magical machine. This machine creates ice cream so you don’t have to go to the ice cream van just press and pull a few levers and buttons and then it a blink of an eye you will see a mouthwatering ice cream.
    How is it made?
    This magical machine was made over 5 years ago,it is made by a few metal scrap that had been washed up by the shoar pipes,wires,string,cogs,screws, and nails were all delivered by a huge dragon.These were all glued,screwed,nailed and plotted together.
    How dose the machine work ?
    This magical machine works by only a racer sharp crystal to activate this machine mr Inman needs to pull a giant leaver this causes power all around the machine.Then mr Inman needs to press a button right under is chair this makes the clogs to rotate.Just then mr Inman needs to wave at a sensor this means the flavour has been released on to the ice cream then right in front of your eyes there is a flavour some ice cream.
    By Moman

  20. The Shirt machine?
    The machine creats shirts which means no jobs could be good done,just let’s you rest in peace.
    How does the shirt machine work?
    To activate the shirt machine, Mr Spark has to pull the green leaver but before that he has to type his ideas down on the computer which, allows the cogs to rotate round and round.
    How is the Shirt machine made?
    find some old scrap from the scrapyard such as / cogs, screw, pistions, nails, taps, old pieses of rubber/ Ones this is done, fix the tools together so that some of the parts of the machine is done. Then finish the other layers in order to make the shirt machine.
    How the shirts are packaged?
    The shirts come out of the bottom slot of the machine all packed up in spotty wrapping paper Which as a result means the shirts the ready is ready to go to go it’s owner.
    From Hanna Khan

  21. The cake machine:

    The cake machine is far from ordinary machines as it is extraordinary. A clever inventor named Mr Magic invented the machine he had to travel to Fairyland to get fairydust to coat the machine to make it remarkable.

    How was the cake machine created?

    Mr Magic built this machine from scratch such as cogs,screws,nails
    pistons,taps,old leavers, rubber, pipes,worn out clocks,copper,plastic and metal. Some of the items had to be ordered from professional shops. He had to glue and fix the items to create the cake machine.

    How does the machine work?

    To activate the machine Mr Magic pulls the red leaver and stamps on the large green button. Then the machine rumbles while the process is being done. As a result of the rumbling icing a nd sprinkles squirt all over the three layered cake.

  22. How does the shirt machine work
    In the island of Mall there was a machine my grandad John saw it then he though it was dirty so he could take it home he told me that the machine needed to be cleaned the taps too it took him like 5days because it was so big I helped him he saw a red button he pressed it and the computer said which type of t shirt do you need sir he typed flying shirt I think the flying shirt came out of the machine he wore it and said fantastico I love this shirt he checked all of the shirts he keeped it in his secret room he always checked it then he lived happily ever after .

  23. The food machine
    Far from the usual machine, the food machine creates the best food in the world.You don’t need to pay or find a shop, you can just have a rest.

    How was the food machine made?
    Ten years ago, Mr Spark collected some pieces from scrapyards to finish his machine.He was also given a powerful gem which can power up any electrical object.After that, Mr Spark was gifted, for his birthday, some cogs, pistons, wires, screws and nails.Then he put all the pieces together to make the food machine.

    How does the food machine work?
    To activate the machine, Mr Spark pulls the giant lever, which turns the machine on.After that, he types in the computer what food he wants, then presses the green button.Then Mr Spark types in the other computer what size the food will be.Finally, the machine rumbles and the cogs turn and the food will appear on the table near the first computer.

  24. How does the T-shirt machine work
    In the Isle of mull,scotland their lived an old man named Bill brown who made a magnificent T-shirt machine which always went Brrr and it took 8 months to make this magnificent T-shirt machine.when the T-shirt machine is done then the tempreature of the room will be warm.The man named bill brown had the T-shirt machine that selled different designs of clothes on his computer.

  25. what is the T-shirt machine?

    The T-shirt machine is a machine that makes T-shirts without a needle and thread.The person who invented this is Andrew Brown and the idea came from a strange dream that he liked.He got the pieces for the machine is from the local scrapyard and by delivery.Some of the pieces are cogs,pipe,piston,lever also some taps and they all have to be clean to make it work.

    How does it work?
    It works by Andrew brown sends a email to the customer he the product is suitable for him or her.Then he input up the idea on his computer and when done that he press the enter button and then press the button on the floor to switch on the machine.There is a dial to show how much washing powder that is in the T-shirt machine if it on red there is less if is on green there is too much and if it is in white there is enough.as all results is in there is a large pipe when all of that is done Andrew brown waits for the shirt to be wrapped and come out of the pipe.

  26. Amazing T Shirt machine🔧

    In the ils of mull my uncultivated was making a shirt mashing it came in his dream.

    What it is made of🔧

    It is made of a tv laptop a hover in revers and a tank

    How does it work🔧

    Firstly you type in your shirt idea and you activate the tv.
    Secondly the tv shows very thing that is happening inside inside the t and the shirt gets made and out it comes out of the hover and raped up.

  27. How was the shirt machine made?
    This machine was made by Mr Jeff he had collected pieces from the scrap yard and washed up from the shore. It took him 10 years after those ten years he had glued nailed and screwed to make his magical shirt machine.
    What does the shirt machine do?
    It doesn’t make ordinary shirts it makes exdordinary shirts when he thinks of an idea Mr Jeff types it down on the computer. Then he presses the big green button that is on the top right of the machine. When he has pressed the button he starts rumbling after that the cogs and pistons starts roatating. When the proses has finished. A shirt pops out whith a label on it.

  28. HOW DOES THE SHIRT NACHIN WORKS?
    Far away in scotland there was a man, he made a magnifasum machin.
    How is the shirt machin made?
    The machin is made out of pipes,tap,runingparts.the machin is made in a good plase that no body no
    Aftr, the man went to his computer so that he culde tipe wat cind of machin he want.Thenhe prees the huge green buton on the flor. Next,the machin started to work, andthe machi started to make lots of strange noise.

  29. how does the shirt machine work?
    Well that’s a good question. The shirt machine was created by an old man he used pipes, taps, vowles, transesters,wires,pistons,switches,and they all get nailed and slotted together. next to the shirt machine there’s a computer you type in what type of shirt you want. then he preses the green button on the floor . after a while it comes out the other end. so far he’s made a flying shirt an eddable shirt and a music shirt for the juke and he presse’s a button all kind of instruments play to anouse his arrival by rayan osman

  30. The shirt machine

    Not far from a ordinary machine but a extrordinary machine.This extraordinary machine creates all sorts of uniqe shirts such as glowing shirt,edible shirt, scenting shirt and singing shirt.

    How is the machine made?
    Just over ten years ago,this extordinary machine was made out of scraps such as pistons and wires came from behind bushes cogs and levers had came from scrap yards.Mr khan the inventor of the machine had to glue screw and hammer the machine together.

    How does the machine work?
    To activate the machine you need to pull the green lever to get it started.To create your unique shirt i put your ideas on the computer which will create your shirt.Because of this your machine will create a unique shirt.
    The inventor of this machine was Mr khan.

  31. The shirt machine.

    Far from usual machines, the shirt machine creates any type of t-shirt you desire. The shirt machine lets you make any type shirt with no waste of thread.

    How is the shirt machine made?

    Just over ten years ago, Mr Spark, the invendor of the machine, collected bits of scrap from scraparts. The old inventor came across a mysterious gem, whilst looking for the scrap in the scrapyards. Finally years of hardwork paid of, eventually he got pies, which were washed from the sea, pistono, nails, which were from manufactores,cogs and pieces of types.

    How does the machine work?

    To activate the machine, Mr Spark needs to pull the leaver, this means that the cogs turn to make the colers of the shirt. After this Mr Spark types into the computer, which tells the machine what type of shirt it needs to make. On the floor, there is a box of pixie dust the inventor needs to put the pixie dust into one of the cogs. After this the shirt is slowly made which causes the cleaner to suck the shirt in to clean it also to dry it after it has a quick wash. Out of the bottom slot,will come the shirt wrapped up in silver wrapping paper with the address.

    By Alisha Riaz

  32. At fist you will need to type your ideas
    Then you will hear sounds that means it is
    working.At the end you will see a pacet and that
    means inthe packet it has the shirt

  33. The ice-cream machine

    This machine creates ice cream that means you don’t have to go to the ice cream van and get it you can just press a few buttons and you will get your delicious ice cream.which is special.

    How is the ice cream machine made?
    Just over 10 years , Mr spark was gifted a precious gem which was very expensive .Mr spark went to his scrapyard and found some things such as cogs,screws,pistons and nails.when this is done Mr Spark got all the things and put them together to be made .

    How does the ice cream machine work?
    To activate this machine Mr Spark has to pull the lever .To begin, with Mr Spark has to press a large green button which will turn the machine on .Mr Spark has to where a special helmet which is connected to the machine wireless. The user can think of any type of food or drink and the machine will produce a ice cream version of the food ,for instance if your out in the evening and you want doner meat a chips.The helmet will produce your doner meat and chips flavoured ice cream .the ice cream will appear in your mind but you will be able to taste it.If you get full up with out eating it .This is the best invention ever because you are not physically eating .You will still have to have your regualar meals.

  34. Ice cream machine
    To begin with this machine is a special,unique machine because its not like other machines.The ice cream machine is very quick to make your delectable,mouth watering ice cream.
    How was it made?
    Just over 5 years ago a very intelligent man mr Samad found a incredible dragon wich would give him scrap to make a machine.As Mr Samad builds the machine a mysterious,razor-sharp and glistening crystal was found by Mr Samad now this crstal would activate the machine.
    How was the ice cream machine made?
    As the dragon would give Mr Samad scrap Mr Samad invented a golden,shining computer this computer would run the machine.Mr Samad would type in all the stuff he needs to make 50 ice creams and then the middle barrel would make the cones and the end barrel would make the delicious cream.

  35. What is the shirt machine?
    This is no ordinary machine but this is an extrodinary
    machine which does not waste your money or time.

    How is the shirt machine made?
    It is made by different types of scrap found in the scrapyard and some washed by the shore such as(cogs, pistons, nails, taps and old types of rubble) Then finish the layers and put it together and it was just over 10 years.
    How does the shirt machine work?
    To activate the machine, Mr Spark pulls the lever so the machine is on. Mr Spark types in what he wants from the machine and it starts to rotate and releases the cogs to turns around.
    How are the t shirts sold?
    Mr Spark puts the persons name and address on it with some purple wrapping paper for girls and black wrapping paper on it. Afterwards there is a mini van which sells the t-shirts to the people.

  36. The shirt machine
    In the iel of moll,Scotland there is a magnificent awsome inventor called Trevor brown he made a fantastic t shirt machine that can make t shirts whithout needle or thread.
    How did he get an idea?
    In a weird dream Trevor brown was out of unique clothes and then he decided to go to a scrap yard and grap pistons pulling bits squishy bits and the magic ingredient and it took him 2 months to build and deliver clothes
    How do you get the tshirt machine to work?
    First you have to input a idea into a fantastic computer. Then you have to put washing powder in the machine.next you have to look at the dial if the arrow goes to red that means there is too much washing powder and the room could get filled with washing powder in 5 minutes if the arrow goes to the green spot then it is alright .next the special ingredient is pulled and pushed that is when the magic happens this is the best part the clothes spit out from a pipe and the clothes are wrapped up in the best paper .

  37. Shirt Machine

    This machine creates shirts which means no jobs to be done,just let’s you rest in peace.

    How does the Shirt Machine work?
    To activate the shirt machine,Mr Spark has to pull the green lever but before that he has to type his ideas down on the computer which,allows the clogs to rotate round and round.

    How is the Shirt Machine made?

    Find some old scrap from the scrapyard such as (cogs,screws,pistons,nails,taps,old pieces of rubbers)
    Once that is done,fix the tools together so that some of the parts of the machine are done.Then finish the other layers in order to make the shirt machine.

    How the shirts are packedged?

    The shirt comes out of the bottom slot of the machine all packed up in spotty wrapping paper which as a result means the shirt is ready to go to it’s owner.

    Your shirt is arriving

    Safa Munir

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