Well done for yesterdays work.
Today we will be making progress by editing and improving a section of writing.
What does it mean to edit and improve?
Editing and improving involves correcting errors, spelling mistakes, and making general improvements from your ‘Next Steps.’
Can you edit and improve this paragraph? Re-write the whole paragraph correctly.
paddington and Mr gruber got off the bus. They saw the beatiful parc and felt happy. Paddington said lets get a closer look off the palace. The place was glorious and stretched out across the royal parc Paddington could feel the soft grass beneath his feet and the royal bad began to march around him .