Children return to school Mon 8th April

On Tuesday we walked around Foleshill and thought about the things we like about our local area and things that we would like to improve.

Your challenge is to write a letter to your local councillor to discuss your findings and explain the changes that you would like to be made. Remember how a letter needs to be set out.

48 responses to “Year 2 Letter to our councillor”

  1. Maryam G.

    Dear councillor Khan,
    I am writing to you because yesterday I went round Foleshill and I saw litter everwhere I am absolutely discussed because all around our beautiful local area in Foleshill there was litter everywhere!!!

    I think that the local council needs to tell the people if they drop any rubbish onto the floor they have to pay £100 or they have to pick it up straight away that is how you keep a local area neat and tidy. It will be better if we make more bins instead of people dropping it onto the floor.
    The local people need to hold it until they find a bin instead of sprinkling it on the floor or you can give it to your mum or dad until they find a bin.

    I look forward to hearing your response to my suggestions
    Yours sincerely o

    Maryam and Inaaya

  2. Lawy A.

    Dear cronciller khan,

    I’m writing this to you because I’m terribly discussed of the rubbish on the floor around here. They dont even notice the bins! Please watch out for rubbish on the floor. If no one is near by pick it up. I think that there are more bins

    Lillie and Lawy

  3. Luxor A.

    Dear councillors khans
    Year 2 went for a walk around foleshill and we were very upset to see litering on the street . I think the local council needs to have more signs .

  4. Sumayyah A.

    Dear councillor Khan

    I am writing to you because I’m so angry

    Yesterday year 2 went for a walk around Foleshill and we were very disappointed to see that there was litter.

    I think that the local council needs to pay.
    I think that the local council needs to but lots of bins.

  5. Muhammed A.

    Dear councillor Khan
    I am writing to you because there is rubbish everywhere.
    Yesterday year 2 for a walk around Foleshill and we were disappointed to see plastic bottles,paper and glass.I think that the local council need to put more bins.I think the local people need to put sines up.

  6. Zakariah D.

    Dear councillor khan
    I am writing ✍️ because yesterday we went for a walk we saw liter everywhere l
    was disappointed 😔.l think that the local government should make signs.

  7. Maryam G.

    Dear councillor Khan,
    I am writing to you because yesterday I went round Foleshill and I saw litter everwhere I am absolutely discussed because all around our beautiful local area in Foleshill there was litter everywhere!!!

    I think that the local council needs to tell the people if they drop any rubbish onto the floor they have to pay £100 or they have to pick it up straight away that is how you keep a local area neat and tidy. It will be better if we make more bins instead of people dropping it onto the floor.
    The local people need to hold it until they find a bin instead of sprinkling it on the floor or you can give it to your mum or dad until they find a bin.

    I look forward to hearing your response to my suggestions
    Yours sincerely

    Maryam and Inaaya

  8. Elen M.

    Dear councillor Khan,
    I am writing to you because I am absolutely disgusted of the look 👀 of folshill.
    Yesterday year 2 went for a walk around folshill and we were very disappointed 😔 to see litter and plants 🌱 that were dead 💀.I think the local council needs to improve the law to make it more like a commander.
    I look forward to hearings your response to my suggestion.

    Your sincerely

  9. Brooke M.

    I can’t wait for your reply from brooke

  10. Aisha R.

    Dear councillor khan,
    I am writing to you because in the local there is lots of rubbish and I am completely
    disgusted.Yesterday year 2 went for a walk around Foleshill and we were very
    disappointed to see all of the rubbish was on the floor.I think that the local
    council needs to put and bins to let people know.I think that the local people
    need to put the rubbish in the bin.

    Your sincerely Aisha and hasti

  11. Brooke M.

    Dear councillor 16 th July 2019

    I am writing to you because I am apsalutly sad. Because people are frowning rubbish everywhere I think that the local council needs to sort it out .so I’ve came up with some great ideas 💡 for you to sort. this out keep reading for the ideas 💡 1.put sines and posters up 2. Put more bins around 3. Make posters for people to clear dog poo 💩 🐶 up and maybe put dog poo bags on treese or on bars .

  12. Zakariya K.

    Dear councillor Khan,
    I am writing to you because there is lots of litter on the streets.

    Yesterday year 2 went for a walk around Foleshill and we are very disappointed 😔 to see so much litter because there not in the bin!

    I think that the local council needs to improve by putting litter in the bin.
    I think that the local people need to put the litter in the bin.

    I look forward to hearing your response to my suggestions.

    Yours sincerely
    Zakariya

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