Year 3 Literacy Homework Week 5 – Inverted Commas

For your homework this week Year 3, we would like you to write a dialogue based upon  a short film taken from the Literacy Shed.

LO: To use inverted commas.

Watch the short film below about two brothers who are also train robbers! We would like you to create a conversation between them, using ” and ” as well as ? and ! in your writing.

For example:

“Ouch, that really hurt!” Declared Frank, as he fell through the smooth timber roof.

We would like EVERYONE to respond to this blog by Thursday 26th May 2016!

35 thoughts on “Year 3 Literacy Homework Week 5 – Inverted Commas

  1. Thursday 26th May
    To use inverted commas
    Jeff-”Give me back my diamond.”
    Zack-”NO you give me it back to me.”
    Jeff-”No you give it back.”
    Zack-Pushes jeff
    Jeff-”AHHHHHHHHH

  2. ” that cudunt have been a better landing ” wisperd frank as he fell from the timder roof .
    “Where’s the dimund!” shouted jef
    “There’s the dimun and let’s see who’s gonna get it first ?

  3. “The jewl is mine,”said Zack
    “NO MINE!!!”shouted Jeff
    “NOOOOO we are falling!”they said
    “I hate you. now we’re in hospital”Zack said angryly
    “It’s your fault”said Zack
    “no yours”said Jeff.

  4. “you dare to give that ruby” jack replied
    ” no why should I ” declared jeff
    “because I said” called jack
    “no !” claimed jeff
    “I’m the oldest so I should have it” stated jack
    “but I should” cried jeff
    “nooooooooo!” shouted jack

  5. Zack: “lets steal the Diamonds.”
    Jeff:”no that’s not nice”
    Zack: “why are you a chicken”
    Jeff:”NO”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Zack:”YES”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Jeff:”I hate you”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Zack :”well I don’t humm”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. “Come let’s jump”declared Zack bravely,when he saw the big hole.
    “Ok”replied Jeff.
    “Lets get the diamond”Zack said hopefully.
    “It’s mine”said Jeff
    “No,it’s mine”replied Zack.
    “Were falling down!!!”They both shouted.
    ”Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

  7. Zack:”lets jump”
    Jeff:”ok”
    Zack:”lets get the diamond”
    Jeff:”it is mine”
    Zack:”no,it’s mine”
    Jeff:”were falling down”
    Zack:”Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

  8. The train comes and the brothers are there for it to come.
    Rick:”look the train is there lets jump when its near”.
    Jimmie:”321 JUMP”!
    Rick:”perfect landing”
    Jammie:”not for me ouch”
    Rick:”who cares”
    Jammie:chill”
    Rick:”look the diamonds is there”
    Jammie:”what are we wating for? lets go”
    rick:”okay”
    Jammie:”I will break the safe”
    Rick:”oh my God”
    Jammie:”it so pretty”
    Rick:”stop wait a second are we going to share the dimond”
    Jammie:”NO”
    Rick:”ouch”
    Jammie:”give it to me now”
    Rick:”No”
    Rick runs out of the train but Jammie trips Rick over and the dimounds is on the floor.
    Jammie:”yes”
    Rick:”you cant get away”
    Jammie run
    Jammie is out of breath
    Rick:”and I got you”
    The diamond falls Jammie and Rick jump of the train and they fall .they are in hospital with broken bounes.

    The End

    From MatthewLadhar :) :) :)

  9. “Look there is a safe” Said Zach looking at the safe.
    ” im going to open it first” said Jesse
    ” No your not ” as he pounced over Jesse.
    ” not if I will get it first” as jesse pulled open the safe red ruby diamond glistened.
    ” WOW what a luxurious ruby diamond” said Zach
    Jesse forcefully broke open up the wooden shed up above of the train.

  10. Zack: “Look at that Jeff”.
    Jeff: “It’s a diamond”.
    Zack: “It’s ruby red”.
    Jeff: “Let me have it”.
    Zack: “No let me have it”.
    Jeff: “No i am having it”.
    Zack:”Look at that pretty diamond”.
    Jeff: “I am having that nice diamond”.

  11. Jeff: ” This is my ruby so get your revolting hands off it.” Shouted Jeff angrily.

    Frank: “No this is my ruby.” Declared Frank

    Jeff: ” Ouch. That really hurts.”

    Frank: ” I think we’er going to the hospital or the police station.”

    Narrator: “THUMP.”

    Both: “THE HOSPITAL.”

  12. “Ouch”, moaned Jesse as he landed face first in the train.
    “There is the safe,” said Frank.
    “Wow! Look at that ruby, I’ll get it,” said the two brothers at the same time.
    “Yessss! I’ve got it,” declared Jesse.
    “Give it to me now!” shouted Frank.
    They carried on fighting until Frank put a rope round Jesse and Jesse fell off the train.
    “Pull me up, pull me up,” begged Jesse.
    “Ouch, get off me,” said Frank as Jesse landed on top off him.
    “Give me the ruby,” said Frank.
    The ruby bounced off the top of the train into the air. Both of the brothers jumped off the train to try and catch it.
    “Oh noooo!” both the brothers yelled as they fell down into the canyon.
    The next thing they knew they woke up in hospital.
    “I need to get the ruby,” said Frank, trying to reach it.
    “No I’m going to get it,” said Jesse as he suddenly fell off the bed.

  13. Jack”look at this Jeff”
    Jack”I want this red dimoad .
    Jeff”It’s my”.
    Jack”ahhhhhhhhh”.
    Jeff”ahhhhhhhhh”.
    Jeff”look now we’re in hospital because of you”.
    Jack”Me it was all your falut”.
    The end.

  14. Zack “Why Do you want the dimond?”
    Jaff because its lovely and if I give It to the police I wil never ever be arrested.Why Do you want It?”
    Zack “Because It Pretty and if I give It to my Boss at work I will get so much money!”
    Jeff”What if I make you a deal?”
    Zack”Depends what it is”
    Jeff”ok, if I give you £1000,00 you will give me the dimond forer and I will give you the money!”Thursday 19th May 2016
    Lo: To use inverted commas.
    Zack: “THAT RUBY IS MINE!!!!!!!!”
    Jeff: “NO IT ISENT!!!!!!!!!”
    Jeff: “clam down we will share it acutely no we wont”
    Zack: “who ever shares it they will get $170 and £5199”
    Jeff: “fine but I’m only doing it for the money”
    Zack: “fine but you know I will get the ruby”
    By esakhan

  15. Zack “I want to have the bright ruby”
    Jeff”Nooooooo I want this ruby I’ve been looking my whole life trying to find this ruby because when I went to the shops the “said it costs $4169 and 900£.
    Zack”well I don’t care about your life and your money and you findings thing I want this red bright ruby forever.”
    Jeff”ok we can calm down and now let’s just shake this ok”
    Zack” no I want no one to share this because it is mine.

  16. Jeff said,”why are you tripping to get my diamond?”
    Zach replied,”that’s my diamond so why are you saying its yours”
    “Well who ever gets it they keep it.”said Jeff.
    Zach said,”let’s see who gets it.”
    They both said,”now look we have ended up in hospital!!!😡

  17. Homework

    “That’s my ruby replied Jesse”.

    “No that’s mine not yours exclaimed Frank”
    “Well you can’t catch me said Jesse“.
    ”oh yes i can declared Frank”.
    “But you can’t for long said Jesse”.
    The ruby flew up in the air and of the train on to the floor.
    “Look what you have done now you fool exclaimed Frank”.

  18. Zack:” Let’s rob the diamond”.
    Jeff:”That’s only for me”.
    Zack:”No!” “that’s mine”.
    Jeff:” Not at all”,” It belongs to me”.
    Zack:” We will try our best”.
    Jeff: ” The one who wins in the fight, gets the diamond”.
    Zack:” Okay”.

  19. Zack “Why Do you want the dimond?”
    Jaff because its lovely and if I give It to the police I wil never ever be arrested.Why Do you want It?”
    Zack “Because It Pretty and if I give It to my Boss at work I will get so much money!”
    Jeff”What if I make you a deal?”
    Zack”Depends what it is”
    Jeff”ok, if I give you £1000,00 you will give me the dimond forer and I will give you the money!”
    Zack”Ok go get the money I will meet you in 1 hour right here!”

  20. “Ouch!” Said Jeff as he fell face first on the sharp,splintery timber wood floor.

    “Get a grip of yourself ,and let’s look for things to rob! Explained Zach .

    “Fine.” Sighed Jeff

    “Now, where could the treasure be?” Jeff asked Zach

    “That way!” Zach said!

    “A ruby! Gasped Jeff and Zach

    “It’s mine!” Said Jeff

    “No,it’s mine! Said Zach

  21. ” That’s my diamond!” shouted Max.
    ” Who got you here ?” Zack questioned Max
    ” I got my self here!” Exclaimed Max
    ” But I helped you!” Zack told Max

  22. Zack ” look at this Jeff. ”
    Jeff ”what is it”.
    Zack ”there gold and silver diamonds”.
    Jeff ” the diamonds are pretty and lovey”.
    Zack ” I no they are Jeff”.
    Jeff ”Les look for more”.

  23. Zack ” look at this Jeff. ”
    Jeff ”what is it”.
    Zack ”there gold and silver diamonds”.
    Jeff ” the diamonds are pretty and lovey”.
    Zack ” I no they are Jeff”.
    Jeff ”Les look for more”.
    Zack ”ok”.
    Jeff ”THE NEXT DIMOND IS MINE” .!!!!
    Zack ”NO IT IS NOT”.!!!!!
    Jeff ”fine then ”.
    Zack ”thanks you”.
    Jeff ”I HATE YOU”.!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  24. Zack: “That is my ruby!” explained Zack.
    Jeff:”no it isn’t,its mine!” shouted Jeff.
    Jeff:”we will share it together,actually no we wont! said Jeff meanly.
    Zack:”who ever shares will get lots of money” lied Zack.
    Jeff:”I’m only doing it for the money” said Jeff clearing his throat.
    Zack:”Then I get the ruby!”
    Jeff:why do you get the ruby?

  25. Jami: “lets rob that train”
    Jeff: “but I get the money”
    Jami: “gust go”
    Jeff: “I’m going to bash in”
    Jami: “good work now crack that box up”
    Jeff: “its mine ”
    Jami: “no its mine”
    Narrator: bang smash crash
    Jami: “its mine wait what”
    Jeff: “turd nuggets”
    Sound: nee no nee no
    Jeff: “mine”
    Jami: “no mine”
    Jami: “ahhhhhh turd nuggets”

  26. Lo: to use invered commas
    Zack:”That ruby is mine”!!!!.
    Jeff:”No it isn’t”. !!!
    Jeff:”calm down we will share no actually we wont”.
    Zack : “who ever share they will get $170 and £5199″
    Jeff:”fine but I’m only doing it for money : ” you keep it I Jeff :”you keep it I will take the money”.
    Zack :”fine you know I will know I take the ruby”.
    Zack :”noooooooooooooooooooooooooo why?”.

  27. Thursday 19th May 2016
    Lo: to use invered commas
    Zack:”That ruby is mine”!!!!.
    Jeff:”No it isn’t”. !!!
    Jeff:”calm down we will share no actually we wont”.
    Zack : “who ever share they will get $170 and £5199″
    Jeff:”fine but I’m only doing it for money : ” you keep it I Jeff :”you keep it I will take the money”.
    Zack :”fine you know I will know I take the ruby”.
    Zack :”noooooooooooooooooooooooooo why?”.

  28. Thursday 19th May 2016
    Lo: To use inverted commas.
    Zack: “THAT RUBY IS MINE!!!!!!!!”
    Jeff: “NO IT ISENT!!!!!!!!!”
    Jeff: “clam down we will share it acutely no we wont”
    Zack: “who ever shares it they will get $170 and £5199”
    Jeff: “fine but I’m only doing it for the money”
    Zack: “fine but you know I will get the ruby”
    Jeff: “you keep it I will take the money”
    Zack: “Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! why?”

    • Zack ” look at this Jeff. ”
      Jeff ”what is it”.
      Zack ”there gold and silver diamonds”.
      Jeff ” the diamonds are pretty and lovey”.
      Zack ” I no they are Jeff”.
      Jeff ”Les look for more”.
      Zack ”ok”.
      Jeff ”THE NEXT DIMOND IS MINE” .!!!!
      Zack ”NO IT IS NOT”.!!!!!
      Jeff ”fine then ”.
      Zack ”thanks you”.
      Jeff ”I HATE YOU”.!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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