36 thoughts on “Year 3- Shape poems

  1. The poet has express his feeling and emotional to the ginger bread man. The writer did a good job in describing the octopus poem by using his legs as the words.

    My opinion is the writer made the poems fun and wonderful. The poems makes you feel excited and emotional to read.

  2. Undersea tea is effective because it has rhyming words and repetition.
    In the gingerbread man it has rhyming words and adjectives.
    In both of them they have rhyming words and repetition.
    I think the gingerbread man one is good because it has adjectives,rhyming words and repetition.
    The poem I prefer is the gingerbread man because it has more adjectives,rhyming words and repetition than the octopus poem .
    The octopus one has a little bit of repetition,rhyming words and adjectives.

  3. It has lots of rhyming words, atilarations and good punctuation. Undersea tea is effective because it has adverbs.In Gingerbread man it is effective because they have used a question marks.some good word choices are slowly. I think this because it is an adverb.The poem I prefer is the gingerbread man because it is describes how much he the ginger bread man feels.

  4. 1.Undersea tea us effective because is has rhyming words ,alliteration and adverbs.
    2.Gingerbread man is effective because it has used a expanded noun phrase and subordinating conjunctions.
    3.Some of the good choices are Oliver the Octopus 🐙 slowly and repertion.

    Danyaal

  5. 1.The writer of this poem done a good job on the poem because he used riming words.
    2.he used lots of fun words to describe how the ginger bread man was acting.
    3.the rest of the poem has rimeing words.

  6. Undersea tea is effective because it has rhyming words and repetition.
    In the gingerbread man it has rhyming words and adjectives.
    In both of them they have rhyming words and repetition.
    I think the gingerbread man one is good because it has adjectives,rhyming words and repetition.
    The poem I prefer is the gingerbread man because it has more adjectives,rhyming words and repetition than the octopus one.
    The octopus one has a little bit of repetition and rhyming words and adjectives.

  7. The man who made the octopus poet made sure the octopus had 8 legs.
    I liked the gingerbread man when he said mostly they nibble on his limbs

  8. Undersea tea is effective because they use adverbs.
    In gingerbread man it is effective where noun phrases.
    Some good word choice are riming words.
    I think this because there is a lot of them.

  9. 1.The writer has made a good job of the poem because they have used adverbs and subornation.
    2.I prefer the Octopus 🐙 poem because it has aswome words and same words.
    3. In Gingerbread man we it is effective where it says “mostly nibble on his limbs.”

  10. Undersea tea is effective because they used rhyming and alliteration.
    In gingerbread man it is effective where he used an expounded noun phrase at the begging of the poem. Some good word choices are Oliver the Octopus 🐙 .

  11. Undersea tea is effective because they used rhyming words, alliteration, adverbs,adjectives, repetition,preposition,punctuation,personification,expanded noun phrases and subordinating conjunctions
    In Gingerbread man it’s effective because when they finished, they drawed a gingerbread man.

  12. 1.The poet has done well because they put rhyming words.
    2.my opinion because is it’s is amazing because they made it. like a gingerbread man and a octopus.
    3. I like them because they used preposition and Repetion.
    4. My opinion is when they tried there best in there own opinion.
    5. The poet done well because they tried to do the best poem in the world.

  13. Undersea tea is effective because they use alliteration and adverbs.
    In gingerbread man it is effective where it says more are waiting cut them out fast although we try.
    Some good words choices are underneath. I think this because it is a preposition of place.
    The poem I prefer is the gingerbread man because it has rhyming words and interesting adjectives.

  14. They were funny and had adjectives.For the octopus one it had eight tentacles just like an octopus.I enjoyed the poems because it was funny.

  15. The octopus writer remembered that octopuses have eight tentacles.
    The author made the ginger bread man have feelings ,because a gingerbread man doesn’t have feelings. By Zaid and Marwa.

  16. The first one I like it because they put the words as the tenticalls and I think it’s very creative.
    I like the ginger bread man because they did the words as the shape as a ginger bread man.
    I the won I like the most is the ginger bread man because they used the words as the shape as a ginger bread man.

  17. The poet made the poet nice.
    My opinion is that the poem is magnificent because when you are looking at it you can see a gingerbread man and other stuf. It is really nice.

  18. He has used important words in the poems

    Me and my partner like the Gingerbread man poem because we like gingerbread man.It is very good and it is very funny.
    Hamza and Saira

  19. 1. He has shaped the gingerbread man perfectly?
    2.I disliked the gingerbread man because it has little writing, small sentences and big sentences?

  20. I like what the poet did on the first one because it make me laugh
    I Opinion is it is very long and I can’t read it because it is on the side.
    Gingerbread
    I like it because it has pulse and it is long.
    My opinion of it was very funny and it had pulse.

  21. The octopus has done well because he has 8 tentihcals and it has a shape poem .
    The Jinger bread man is long poem and I like and it has lots of conjunction and adjectives.

  22. ssSsSShape poemsssss
    I like it because they made it look like it is vhgcfhyvhgfyvjhvdgghgytfdtffuggugfftgugugdrrtfuyftftyfutfhgfyyffyfytggcfggfhvghfvuhfgcygcyffygfgyfytyTyfhchc
    I would do a 🐷 because it’s Funneh.

  23. (1) They have very good poems because they have interesting words.
    (2) I liked it because it makes me think that I want to eat it .
    I don’t like it a bit because it confusing to read.

  24. 1. They wrote funny things that made us laugh but some people didn’t laugh.arina
    2.I like both of them but the octopus one was very hard to read.Aayan

    Arina and Aayan.

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