This week, year 4 have been working exceptionally hard at creating poems based on a winter theme. The children have had the opportunity to plan and perform their poem, but now it’s time to publish their wonderful hard work.
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golden roasted turkey
lays on a immense table right
under your nose.
As you inhale the sweet smell of mince
pies laying right under a christmas
tree eating them crunch after crunch
knowing why santa loves them so much.
Dasher and Rudolph leading
santa making sure he sends
every good boy and good girl
the presents that they deserve.
As you hear the sweet
sound of carrollers
at your doorstep
Everyone is jolly,
Everyone is happy,
We call this Christmas,
And it’s time to have fun.
Christmas trees are as spiky as a raccoon’s tail,
The Christmas present stood around like a queen’s guard
Snowman are as happy as a clown
Snowflakes falling like tears
We certainly have some talented children, well done.
Hishaam’s Poem
Snowflakes confetti the sky,
Snowflakes falling like a fluffy cloud .
You can see everything that is white,
Christmas is here.
You can feel the twirling swirling wind,
The crunchy snow feels like a packet of crisps on the ground.
The snow feels icey cold,
Christmas has arrived.
The food smells like birthday party foods.
Turkey cooking,coffee and Hot Chocolate making,
Christmas is here.
The taste of the food is lovely as a watermelon,
at night there is Turkey,mince pie,Chocolate milk and carrots for Santa and Rudolph.
Santa is coming to town
The Christmas lights were as bright as day.
The frost nibbled at your nose.
Christmas is here.
Presents sitting around your Christmas trees Santa is coming to your house
Snowflakes confetti the sky,
Powerdry snow covers the ground.
Santa is coming
WHACH CERFLY
King of ice and snow ,
covers the kingdom.
The Christmas tree stood like a guard ,
Winter is here .
Snowflakes confetti ,
falling from the sky .
Hear the howling whistling wind ,
Winter is here .
The frost nibbled on your,
nose the wind howled like.
A packet of wolves,
Winter is here.
Hear frost everywhere,
the wind growled.
The wind growled like a packet of wolves,
Winter is here
Hasan and Aaron
Snow flakes coneffi the sky ,
Powdery snow falls like sugar.
The Christmas tree stood like a gard
Christmas is here
Queen of snow and ice,
the wind howled like a pact of wolves
Christmas lights are gistening
Christmas is here
Santa is coming to town
to givepresents to people
in person to talk with you
Christmas is here
Queen of snow and Ice,
The wind howling like packs of wolves.
Christmas light were sprinkles and twinkle,
Christmas is here.
Santa is bringing us presents,
The Christmas light were as bright like shiny ice.
The frost nibbled at you tummy,
Christmas is here.
Bogdans
Snowflake confetti the sky,
Snow on the ground.
White on white,
Christmas is here.
Queen of ise and snow
Reveling in her beauty
White on white
Christmas is here
Snowflake conletti the sky,
Powdery snow fall like sugar.
The Christmas tree stood like the queen guard
Christmas is here
Santa is coming to town
queen of ice and snow
The wind howling like a pack of wife’s
Christmas lights shine so bright
Christmas is here
The Christmas lights were glistening like a diamond
Christmas is here
Presents sit around the Christmas tree
Snow flakes confetti the sky,
Powdery snow falling like feathers.
The Christmas tree stood like a guard,
Christmas is here.
Queen of ice and snow,
The wind howled like a pack of wolves.
Christmas lights shimmer and shine,
Christmas is here.
Santa is coming to town,
The Christmas lights are as bright as day.
The frost nibbled at your skin,
Christmas is here.
The emerald and spiky Christmas tree,
Has ruby red presents under it.
Snow skydiving from fluffy pillows,
Christmas is here.
The snow is turning to a slush puppy,
Icecals melting and dripping.
Turkey cooking in the scorching red fire,
Christmas is here
Cara’s Poem
Snowflakes confetti the sky,
Powdery snow falls like sugar.
The Christmas tree stood like a guard,
Christmas is here.
Queen of ice and snow,
The wind howled like a wolf.
Glistening and flickering Christmas lights,
Christmas is here.
Santa is coming,
The Christmas lights are as bright as the sun.
The frost nibbled at your skin,
Christmas is here.
The sparkling and twinkling star,
The emerald and spiky lush trees.
A blanket of snow covered the ground,
Christmas is here.
Santa is coming to your house,
The freezing ice covers your window.
Christmas Caroles are singing,
Christmas is here.
Marcel’s poem
By Cara and Marcel
Family Christmas
A mouthwatering golden turkey
lays on a immense table right
under your nose as you take one big breath
as you get closer and closer to the paralysing
mince pie as you eat them crunch after crunch
knowing why Santa loves them so much.
Green emerald Christmas trees
ablaze with flashing lights so colourful
making you blind with it’s ornaments.
You can hear the sweet sound
of Christmas songs letting you know and
everybody know Christmas is here.
Ginger bread men sleeping
In their gingerbread house
waiting to be eaten.
Santa drinking Fanta on
his slay while giving presents
to boys and girls and laidies and gentlemen.
Santa coming on a weird sleigh,
with presents for the children as they are wating.
To be opened on Christmas day.
Family Christmas
Eye catching, amazing roasted turkey lies on the table.
Children are eating the mouthwatering cookies,
That are rolling to the left and right.
Every time the children took a big bite,
they found the cookies to be a mountain of melted chocolate
Its extremely tasty!
Bells that was as bright as the sun,
were shining in the people’s eyes,
when they were eating their chocolaty, crispy buns.
Emerald Christmas trees had lights in
that was really bright , it was
Like crystalized ice!
HO! HO! Santa says,
while he takes the healthy white
milk off the tray !
HO! HO! Santa says,
when he puts the food away!
HO! HO! Santa says,
once he puts the presents down in return of the
food in the extensive tray!
HO! HO! Santa says,
When he sees the friendly and caring children play!
OH NO! Santa says,
when he sees the vile and greedy kids play
a silly game !
Let’s play the children say !
LETS – CEL – EB – RATE!!!
Family Christmas
A good Delicious silver rose teirkey,
lies 5
in the middle of our mums table.
Taste Christmas cookies are being good cookies.
good delicious mince pies, lies underneath,
the ending green Christmas tree,
always goods up.
Snowflakes confetti the ground,
Icicles come down like shards.
The Christmas tree stood like a soldier,
Queen of ice and snow!
Christmas trees stood broadly,
Santa’s coming to your home.
He sneaks in to hide from the Queen of ice and snow,
Revelling in her beauty,oh,Christmas is here!
Santa walks through powdery snow,
He munches on cookies.
The reindeers eat carrots,
Santa is here!
The Christmas lights glowed as bright as the sun,
The frost nibbles at my socks,seaping through my winter boots,
The lights,shimmering and shining,
Christmas is under everybody’s nose.
The lights were as bright of day,
Children threw snowballs.
Snowballs flew like planes,
Christmas has come !
The wind howls in your face like a pack of wolves,
Snowflakes fall from clouds like teardrops.
Oh,how much I missed the Christmas cheer.
I missed the Christmas carollers and their Christmas cheer.
Rudolph leading the reindeers,
Santa is in his sleigh.
He climbs on people’s roofs,
He gives majestic, presents!
As that joy spreads,like how people
Enjoy time with their families,
(Except those grumpy old grandpas who shut the door
On the carollers.)
The Christmas tree glowed like day,
The Carolers come and go.
People come together,
Christmas is HERE !
The poem writers stay in thinking of complex words
For their poems, about winter and Christmas.
And the rest,staying with their families,
And stores probably out of stock by now(to be honest.)
By Farhan and Aboubakar!