Year 4-To extend sentences using subordinate clauses.

Write the introduction to your story. To make sure you write an interesting and engaging story you must include the skills you have learnt in the lesson about subordinating clauses.

Being sensible, Peter made sure he kept a close eye on his mischievous brother.

Mum went to help the Poppy family to bake a delicious cake, as Mrs Poppy was not very good at baking.

Subordinating conjunctions

Before, when, while, during, as, because, after, although, since, until, once.

But remember to include all the other skills you have learnt too! E.g. conjunctions, adjectives, adjectival phrases and a wide range of punctuation;  . , ! ? ” “

Here’s a starter too, if you want to use it:

Frustrated, poor Peter was in trouble yet again!

24 thoughts on “Year 4-To extend sentences using subordinate clauses.

  1. Earlier that morning , Mum put Peter in charge of looking after naughty Fudge , who always made Peter get into terrible trouble. So then Mum went to the Poppy’s family to bake a chocolate fudge cake. Then Peter heard Jimmy call him from the back garden so he can give Fudge some socks to play with.

  2. Introduction
    Frustrated, poor Peter was in trouble yet again!Mum went to help the Poppy family bake a beautiful and delicious cake, as Mrs Poppy wasn`t good at baking.Being senseble,Peter made sure that he kept a close eye on his 2 and a half year old brother,Fudge.Peter gave mischievous Fudge some grousome socks to play with so he doesn`t cause a gigantic mess.

    • Peter showed his new cards to Jimmy then they were playing cards but Peter and Jimmy heard something from the kitchen BOOM CRASH BOOM so he went to the kitchen and there was glop ewerywhere.

  3. Introduction

    Peter, who was in year 4, had to take care of his mischievous brother Fudge. When Peter had to babysit Fudge in the park, he got into a terrible mess about Fudge falling. While mum was at Mr and Mrs puppy’s house, Peter saw Jimmy shouting his name over and over again. “hmm maybe he has the new duddy cards I better go” mumbled Peter,who was thinking out loud . Before Peter started playing with Jimmy’s new cards there was a loud BANG! CRASH!AND A LOUD THUMP!. Peter and Jimmy ran to the kitchen and there was Fudge with a humongous bowl of glop on his head and that was the big THUMP!.
    So now you know how cruel a toddler can be!.

  4. Introduction
    Frustrated poor Peter was in trouble yet again! Peter was an 8 years old boy he had a little toddler brother that causes a lot of chaos and trouble he has to babysit his brother wich is terrible he always gets poor Peter into trouble

  5. Mum is leaving Peter and Fudge,because she is going to bake with the poppy family.Peter is looking after fudge,Peter is looking after him really good however Jimmy calls Peter from the back garden,they play with jimmy’s cards.all of a sudden,a loud noise echoed from the kitchen.When Peter ran into the kitchen,there was a big mess. After that minute,mum and dad walked through the door.

  6. Earlier that morning,mum left to go to the poppy family to help them bake a yummy,scrumpions cake, which left Peter incharg of fudge. When Peter found out he was going to look after fudge, he kicked of and said “I’m going to get me in trouble”.

  7. Earliar that morning at 9:30 mum, told Peter some devastating news well only he found the news terrible mum wanted to be kind as she was going to bake a cake so Peter was responsible for wild Fudge Peter knew Mum was soft on news like this therefore, Peter went into a horrific tantrum.Mum just ignored him like he wasn’t there. At 9:40 Mum went to bake a cake she felt a bit nervous Peter wanted mum to go as soon as possible.when Mum went Peter filled Fudge with toys just then Jimmy called Peter as loud as he can Peter dashed to the White garden it was a new set of doggy cards!

  8. Earlier that morning,Peter was left in charge Fudge.When Peter was looking after Fudge,Jimmy was screaming Peter’s name.So Quickly Peter popped out of the door and then he pilled Fudge with a bunch of toys like a snowy mountain.

  9. Introduction:
    Earlier that morning,Mum told Peter that he was incharge for Fudge,but Peter was hesistant,as Fudge was a mischevious little young boy!
    Nervously,Peter gave Fudge socks to play with so he would behave.After a short while,Peter heard Jimmy who was calling his name “Peter Peter!!.”It sounded like it was coming from the back garden.When it was time for Fudge’s bath,Peter didn’t know what to do.When he heard the noise,he made a big mountain of toys over Fudge!!

  10. Earlier they morning,mum told Peter that she was going to the poppy family to bake a delicious scrimciouse cake.Once Mum Was gone Peter felt hesitated because he know that he is going to cause terrible trouble so he kept a close eye on him.

  11. Introduction:
    Early in the morning,Mum went to help the Poppys bake a cake,as Mrs Poppy was not good at baking.She left poor Peter look after Fudge,who was a wild animal.Peter was very nervous as Fudge always got himself into trouble and Peter is the one to blame.He was doing a excellent job until,his best friend Jimmy called his name out.Before Peter went to see what Jimmy wanted,he covered Fudge in a mountain of toys(including his bump around train from the Yarbys)and hoped it would keep him entertained.Then he went out to see what Jimmy was screaming his name for.”What is it Jimmy?” Asked Peter.
    “I have some adventure time/teen titans go cards!” Answered Jimmy.It was true,he had 3D adventure time/teen titans go cards.But then,they herd a loud bang!
    To be continued…

    • When Peter and Jimmy came back into the house,they saw that the kitchen was a mess.Food was everywhere,it was like a food bomb exploded and splattered everywhere.”Mums ‘gonna kill me”Peter thought.So he called Jenny and Sheila to come over and help him clean the the mess before Mum came back and Dad came downstairs.To their relief,it took Mum and Dad 4 hours to come into the kitchen,which gave the children more time to clean the disaster kitchen.

  12. Poor youngPeter, who was 8 Years old, had a brother called Fudge. He caused chaos where ever he went, he always caused chaos.One day, peter’s mum went to there cousins to make a creamy chocolate cake.he was left responsible for Fudge. Sadly,Peterhated this because he always gets into trouble while it was Fudges fault.

    • Well done, Sami a good start. You have used a subordinating clause. Some of your sentences are a little short. Next time use a conjunction to help the flow of your writing. Check punctuation too.

  13. Poor young Peter who was 8 years old got into trouble again and again because of his little annoying broather. Fudge,who was 2 years old was his brother. wereever he went he caused chaos .Earlier that morning,mum went to buy little Fudge and Peter some toys so peter had to baby sit Fudge while she was out. as soon as mum shut the door there was a bang! Boom! Thrash!.
    In the toilet the water of the tap was everywhere it was a disaster the tisu paper was all over the the door,in the toilet,on the walls,it even hanged up from the wall.

    • A great start to your story Moman. You have used a good range of subordinating/relative clauses, fronted adverbials and conjunctions. Always check punctuation and next try to include dialogue. Well done.

  14. Being sensible, Peter made sure he kept a close eye on his mischievous brother,he was definitely a trouble maker.Peter a child who was only 8 years old had to look after his brother Fudge. Fudge was 3 years old and was very sneaky Fudge alway cause trouble when mum and dad where around.Fudge who always caused chaos in all ways he could think of.Did you know that whenever fudge got into trouble Fudge blamed it on Peter. While Peter was looking after fudge,mum went to help the Poppy family to bake a delicious cake because Mrs Poppy was not very good at baking and needed her help.The scrumptious cake was for a lovely friend of the Poppy’s family and it was her birthday.After they baked the cake,they said she would love it. What would happen next . . .

    • What a super start to your story Layla. A great range of subordinating/relative clauses and fronted adverbials. You have also used interesting adjectives! Super!
      Always check you have used punctuation correctly, ie, after a fronted adverbial, after an adjective.

  15. Introduction
    Frustrated,poor Peter was in trouble yet again! Gruesome and foul fudge always got Peter in a lot of trouble.Peter who was an 8 years old boy,had a little toddler brother that caused a lot of chaos. Early one morning, peter had the responsibility to babysit his brother which was terrible as he always got poor Peter into trouble.

  16. Peter, who was 8 years old , had a little brother called fudge he enoyed him every time . Fudge was only 2 years old and he creates lots of trouble.This week, Mrs Poppy asked Peters mum to come and make a cake because she makes delicious cakes Mrs poppy is not good at it .kindly Peters mum went to help the poppy family to bake a scrumsious chocolate cake for a birthday party. As usual, Peter was left to baby sit his terrible brother. Peter felt miscible because it is hard work to look after Fudge as he was so energetic.

    • What a super start to your story Priya. A great range of subordinating/relative clauses and fronted adverbials. You have also used interesting adjectives! Super!
      Always check you have used punctuation correctly, ie, after a fronted adverbial, after an adjective.

  17. Introduction
    Frustrated,poor Peter was in trouble yet again! Peter was an 8 years old boy,he had a little toddler brother that causes a lot of chaos and trouble he has to babysit his brother wich is terrible he always gets poor Peter in to trouble.

    • Well Done Adbas. A good start to your story. I like that you’ve used an exclamation mark.
      You need to include subordinating clauses and more fronted adverbials. Check you have used punctuation correctly as it can be difficult to read.

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