Year 5 descriptive language challenge

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1. Happily the old man gifted the lovely ,kind child with a massive long have gift and handed over to his son as quick as a lion the child was surprised that he hah a horse he played and played and stoped and had a break

2. The young boy is having a big present for
   his birthday from his dad and
   it might be the present he wanted

3. Gracefully and happily the wrinkled man walked down the hallway as happy as could be with a rectangle,blue and pink box in his arms.Gently he placed the box in his sons arms.

   Suddenly,the little kid opened the box and surprisingly he found a toy which he has wished for his whole life.It is long with a face at one end.It was a hobby horse.Estactily,he played all around the piano,smiling with his cheeks a little wrinkled.

4. Happily the old man gifted the lovely ,kind

5. The young boy was overjoyed to be at home on his birthday.Surprised,the boy’s dad had given him a long rectangle box. The box was a bright blue ( His favourite colour). He sat on his knees as the present was given to him it was a wooden horse .He had always wanted one.He said that if he gets a grandchild he would give it to him.

6. As happy as he could the boy open the gift not knowing what he will get.The grand dad was filled with joy to pass his wooden horse head
   which he got then he was small.The boy clenched his gift wondering what he got.

   • The boy was excited but shocked to find out what was in that present, the man had gifted his horse from his old generation which has been passed on, the smile in the boys face was like an lion happy to see his prey.

7. The surprised, little boy was down on the floor because his kind, loving father was about to give him a present as large as a broom stick. However this present was way more amazing and fun than a broom stick. His amazing and wonderful father had given him the toy hours that he had wanted for ages.