69 thoughts on “Year 5 New York poems

  1. Super poems year 5! I love your use of alliteration, similes, metaphors and onomatopoeia. You’ve really captured the essence of NYC. As I read these poems, it’s as if I’m back in New York again. Great job! =)

  2. New york city,
    is the place to be,
    with shining lights,
    as bright as could be,
    lots of things to do and see.

    The statue of liberty,
    proudly standing high,
    welcoming everyone,
    that passes by.

    Everyone busy on fifth avenue,
    buying things at the shops,
    to busy to stop.

    New yorkers,
    munching on zuckers bagels,
    people basking in the sun,
    children playing in central park,
    it’s so much fun,
    families picnicking,
    enjoying the sun.

    Famous yellow taxis,
    going to and fro,
    lots of places for people to go.

    New york city,
    is the place to be,
    so what are you waiting for ?
    come for yourself and see.

  3. Big city big dream
    The place of colours
    The Big City is as big as a giant
    Green welcoming statue is next to me
    The statue was as green as emroled
    You will ne er be depressed but it is he best

  4. NEWYORK NEWYORK YOUR THE BEST CITY EVER.NEW YORK YOU HAVE A BIG FAMOUS STATUE.NEW YORK I BIG YOU WOULD NEVER WANT TO LEAVE IT.IN NEW YORK PEOPLE DO THINGS AIGNST THE LAW.NEW YORK IS A HAPPY PLACE TO LIVE IT IS COLOURFULL AND EVERY DAY YOU WOULD HAVE SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWORD TO.NEW YORK IS THE CITY OF LIGHTS.IF YOU LIVED IN NEW YORK YOU WILL AVE THE BEST LIFE EVER.

  5. new york the to be it is large has cites like Brooklyn has a pleas called times square may have some crazy pepol and some crime but its a cool place to live.

  6. New york the city of light.
    New york has big bright light’s
    New york gives everybody a good life.
    I said new york bring dreams to life.
    OK New york is best place to have a holidays.
    In new york it rains it snows also the sun shines.

  7. New York New York
    The biggest city ever
    Skyscrapers as tall as big ben
    Its not dull but very bright and colourful.
    It is full of busy roads and its never late.
    Its as busy as a busy bee.
    NEW YORK NEW YORK
    That’s the place I’m talking about
    Its the best better than the rest.
    It has happiness an fun

  8. In New York city!
    We walk infront of the bus,
    But it won’t stop for us,
    We try to talk ,
    But they will just walk away.

    The colours are so bright,
    And they don’t use light,
    Just to make the weather so bright.

    The sun is so weak,
    So the moon naggs it to eat,
    People are so kind, so they just share to make it so colourful.

    The city’s so unique,m
    Just like my own boutique.

    It’s like the city uses baby loation,
    But it’s just their colour motion,
    Their lake is like a rainbow Ocean,
    So that’s why everybody knows their location.by Leena

  9. New york , new york , has so many lights and people. I always wanted to be in the biggest cites in the world . New york is so big millions of children can be lost . New york has so many cars and so many cites I do not think any one would wont to leave because they will be having so much fun .

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