Year 5: Tuesday 14th July: Home Learning: English

Today is your creative writing task. Tasks 1,2,3 and 5 can be done on paper or in your book.

PLEASE COMPLETE TASK 4 ON THE BLOG!

Good morning Year 5.
Today I have set you a similar task to that which you completed last week with the little stone door. This week I challenge you to uplevel your work. Were there any features you could have added to your story? Use the Bronze, Silver and Gold challenge to guide you (and use the document showing each writing style to help too). Can you do better than you originally thought? Push yourselves for your last piece of fiction writing this academic year!

Task 1: Answer the questions and use your imagination, you can keep your answers simple. If you’re not sure about what beast or creature could be coming out of the door use this website to help: https://kids.kiddle.co/Legendary_creature click on the link of one of these and use it as your inspiration.

(If you have seen Shrek, you could apply that story to this task)

Task 2: You have been given the words:
as
however
and

Take the sentence that starts with ‘Ben…’ and fill in the ____ blanks with one of those 3 words.

Task 3: Make these 3 sentences better by adding descriptive language!

Task 4: Use all the knowledge you have gained over this term to write a story. Use the sentence “One day, the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…”

Bronze: Capital letters, full sentences, full stops.

Silver: Expanded noun phrases, adverbs, fronted adverbials & a simile.

Gold: Metaphor/Personification, relative clause, subordinate clause with subordinate conjunction

Task 5: Draw a picture of the tree OR draw a picture of the creature.

80 thoughts on “Year 5: Tuesday 14th July: Home Learning: English

  1. Task1:
    I need help on the questions

    Task2:
    Ben and Claire said the beast was terrifying.Jane however liked him as he was being kind to her.

    Task3:
    The old door suddenly started to opened and slowly the beast started to come out.
    The enormous beast had big, sharp, scary teeth and big log claws
    He looked terrifying but was kind

    Task4:
    I need some help on the story

  2. ‘independently’
    one day three teenagers went hiking in the forest as they had heard rumours that a mysterious beast had been lurking around looking for food. they had also known were the creature lived, it was in a gloomy, abandoned area in the forest. suddenly, BANG! every thing was silent..
    ”it must be the creature.” exclaimed one of the teens.
    ”we must find it and kill it!” said another one of them.
    one of the teenagers got out his binoculars from his enormous, green back pack, he looked through the binoculars and could see something behind one of the hollowed and oddly shaped trees, the tree had an old creaky door which no one dared to touch. suddenly, one of the teenagers screamed… the other two turned around and saw the most ugly and the most disgusting thing in there life it was a troll! ”RUUUUN!”
    shouted the second teen. one of them stood paralyzed staring at the creature as the other two watched him get eaten in whole by the troll.

  3. Out came the beast. It roared like the hailing wind that never occurred. The beast was very kind though. The beast built a poster that says “Who wants to be my friend, I want to play with someone.” A little boy came and said, “Let’s play hide and seek.” A few hours later men came with pitchforks and torches. They said “Stay back beast.” but the little boy told them to stop that he was nice and they did. They became friends.

  4. Inside live a girl.
    Her house is dark and the sign was put on by the girl.
    Local people send their kids there when they misbehave but they never return.
    There is no light of lamp lit.
    There are no neighbours at all.
    There are only kids inside.
    I would never be silly so I won’t have to go inside.

  5. The massive Mushy doors that looked disgusting haven’t been dared to be open for decades not one person has even gotten near to it because of it’s spooky outlook, Suddenly the doors began to open with a groan. Next thing I know there are two doors that leads me out of here the first door has 100 angry hornets that if you even try to peep inside they will all sting you. The second door is full of ferocious fire ants . I chose the second door and ran across the ants and finally escaped

  6. I did task 1, 2, 3 in my homework book.
    Task 4:
    One day, the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan. Then the terrifying Sasquatch came out.
    ”The door must be broken.” he thought, then he looked in the past.
    ”It is a hundred years old, so that would make sense.”
    The Sasquatch thought about what he would do next.
    ”I have to go to the city” he thought. ”But first, I will send a quick telepathic message to the door maker, so he isn’t terrified when I come.”
    (The Sasquatch can send a message to anyone in his thoughts.)
    He concentrated his mind and tried politely to message the door maker.
    “Hello Dear Sir, I trust I find you in good health. I’m sorry to disturb you, but is it possible for you to make me a new door. Please, take your time and just send me a message when it is ready, and I will come to collect it. Thank you kindly.”

  7. One Day the heavy creaky wooden door opened the child dwarf and adult
    dwarf stepped out and took a deep breath. Everyone was hiding. the dwarfs said “yes finally no one is here we can finally breath yay”
    one person giggled and the dwarf said who’s there the crowed pushed the guy who giggled and the dwarf said “whats funny. then a tree started to growl and a thunderstorm started and they got scared and the not scared people went into the dwarfs house and the scared people ran to their houses.

  8. Task 1:
    1)I think maybe a creature like Shrek would live there.
    2)I think the house would look a bit old and cosy.
    3)I think the creature put it there because he wanted to be left alone.
    4)I think that the local people think that the beast is horrible and evil.
    5)I think that the lamp would be lit every year in memory of his friend/pet (a dog), who got killed by the locals.
    6)I think the beast doesn’t have neighbours because people hate him.
    7)I think the beast used to live with the pet, but then it got killed so the beast lived alone.
    8)I think that I wouldn’t go up to his door because I would get in trouble and I would also be scared.
    9)I think that the beast is actually really nice, he just doesn’t have the chance to show it.
    —————————————————-
    Task 4
    The creaky old doors hadn’t been opened for years. The beast has always lived inside, but nobody dared to visit. Noises that echoed from the gaps in the door had haunted those nearby. Nobody new what the narrow mossy steps led to nobody new what was lurking within.

  9. One day the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan, the unknown beast was coming out after ages. Its curtains were always closed. But strangely today they were opened, so were the windows. They were usually all closed but today they were wide open. The green slimy beast and his friends came out. This creature was a huge dragon. People came out to look. But… HE SEEMED REALLY FRIENDLY! He walked straight past them with just waving at them and walking straight past.

  10. ‘independently’
    one day three teenagers went hiking in the forest as they had heard rumours that a mysterious beast had been lurking around looking for food. they had also known were the creature lived, it was in a gloomy, abandoned area in the forest. suddenly, BANG! every thing was silent..
    ”it must be the creature.” exclaimed one of the teens.
    ”we must find it and kill it!” said another one of them.
    one of the teenagers got out his binoculars from his enormous, green back pack, he looked through the binoculars and could see something behind one of the hollowed and oddly shaped trees, the tree had an old creaky door which no one dared to touch. suddenly, one of the teenagers screamed… the other two turned around and saw the most ugly and the most disgusting thing in there life it was a troll! ”RUUUUN!”
    shouted the second teen. one of them stood paralyzed staring at the creature as the other two watched him get eaten in whole by the troll.

  11. One day the heavy, wooden doors began to open with a groan the doors were dark and dusty. Suddenly, when the doors opened it started to groan.
    When the doors were fully open it felt like something was coming towards us with something sharp and dangerous so we decided to stay together and not let go off each other not even for a second. Then after a few minutes we heard footsteps it was getting louder and louder until we saw something coming from the wooden door. We decided to run fast before the monster comes to us…
    After a while of running we found another wooden, dusty door but this time there was a window, we looked through the cracked window and we saw a hand print it was huge like a monsters hand print.
    We we’re afraid to open the door because off what we saw through the other door and how creepy it was. We decided to not open the door with cracks.
    After an hour we another two doors together but it was not that bad as the other ones but it was more creeper their were red eyes looking through the windows. They were red,creepy and looking dangerous so we RAN as quick as possible.

  12. The pitch black night , the wind howled like a pack of wolfas ben was going home ,he sore a tree but no ordinary tree it had doors on the door it say
    private then there was a scream for the tree . On the widow there was a blood hand marks on the door. All of a sudden there were red eye like a pool of fire look at Ben then he ran to home but no one was at home he searched the house no one to be found then the door slammed it was the beast then he hid in the basement in a box.

    • Good effort Kiyan.
      You have not included an opening to your story.
      “The pitch black night”
      Improved: “On a pitch, black night” or “During the pitch black night”
      wolves not ‘wolfas’
      Saw not ‘sore’.
      Please include punctuation.
      “On the widow there were bloody handprints printed on the glass”.
      “All of a sudden, there were Scarlett red eyes”.
      Up level this sentence please: “then he ran to home but no one was at home he searched the house no one to be found then the door slammed it was the beast then he hid in the basement in a box”.
      Remember:
      – Capital letters
      – Commas
      – Full stops.

  13. The old creaky door opened the little boy and his father looked at it and saw nothing until they heard a monstrous voice that said down her.And without saying a word they were knocked out cold.The little boy woke us ,he thought he had just woken up from a deep sleep until he looked at his phone and saw that he had been there for 1 year.He started to panic for hours so he woke up his dad and explained what he had found out but before he could finish there was huge bang on the door.

  14. One day the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…
    No one knew this mysterious day would come. The old, half broken door
    handle was moving and the sun was starting to set. The grey clouds were
    caving in, all of a sudden, you could hear a loud thunder. Out of nowhere,
    the door flung open and nothing was no one or nothing there. Did the person already escape from the haunted, abandoned door?

  15. One day,the heavy,wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan a mean looking thing walked out of the door and said “hello how has your day bean.” The giant asked. The children asked In a perlite way “do you want to come with us.” The giant said yes please. They went back to the village happy ever after.

  16. Task 4
    One day the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…
    a soft,brown bear approached me and i began to run with fear wondering where my parent were the huge bear grabbed my dad and i began to cry but then some man ran to us and put the bear in a cage and gave back my dad and told use to run…

  17. The old door that didn’t open in years was the door of the legendary dragon 🐉 everyone refused to do near that door because if they did they would get cut in half by the dragon. One day a boy thought he was very smart so he said he’ll kill the dragon in 1 hour he got ready and put on every peace of wood and metal at the bottom and got dragon biggest fear larva he thort it was impossible to get larva so everyone helped him get the larva as soon as they got to the volcano they split up some people set up traps at the village and hide the dragon came it got stuck then the boy did a surgery to the dragon so he would be good and protects them. The end

  18. My story:
    One day the creaky old wooden doors began to open these doors were huge ,how could anyone open then they were so heavy. Anyway while opening 3 children Ben , Claire and Jane were strolling past and from about a mile away they could hear doors opening as loudly while walking they seen a black ,scaled thing what was it they then came closer to it they still didn’t know when suddenly it grabbed all three of them and the creature said “ Will you play with me ?” They didn’t know what was going one how were they going to cope.
    I have completed tasks 1,2,3,and 5

  19. I think a horrible monster will pop out and scare everyone In his path, all the kids would have nightmares cause it is that terrifying.
    The house would be haunted and pitch black inside and whoever put that sign up lives there obviously and it is red so it could be made out of blood.
    The people think that he should move cause he is scaring all the other people.
    No one noes If the lamp has ever been lit because no one ever goes there anymore cause they stay In there own village and doesn’t come out.
    The beast doesn’t look like he has neighbours and It does look like he is alone without any friends to keep him company.If I lived In the village nearby I would go and meet hi, It would be very risky but he had no company.I think the beast would be terrifying but friendly because he just wanted a friend.It could apply to the beast because he could be scary but very friendly.If I was the beast I would go and meet the people and make them know I am feiendly and make friends as well.

    • Next In the story the beast goes and makes friends but the people In the village doesn’t want to be friends with a monster accept 1 person the person said “sure I’ll be friends with you ….but promise me you won’t try and gobble me up, ok”
      “Yes my fellow human I’ll do everything In my power to protect you I won’t let you down.” So they went off and started doing random thing. Then they went to the beasts house/tree and the beast gave the human a welcome gift after that he gave the human a house tour and the human said “this Is a very nice house 🏡 .” The beast went to make them some food but then all of assudan there was people outside his house shouting “Give us our own friend back you thief.” The human went outside and started saying “don’t worry I’m In good hands, so leave us alone.” The people suddenly vanished and the beast could get back to his cooking 🍳. He was making chicken legs with a touch of spice. The beast had a plan to make the human like him even more than he did so he decided to take him to…….

      • Great effort Harley. Check your spelling ‘assudan’ this should be ‘a sudden’. I wonder what this monster looks like? Add some details of what the monster looks like.

  20. Question Time:
    1)I think a nice old monster who lives in the tree.
    2)I think the monster put the sign on the door.
    3)I don’t think the lamp is ever lit.
    4)The beast doesn’t have neighbours.
    5)I think the beast lives alone.
    6)I think the beast is nice but people are scared and think he’s mean.
    7)This could apply to the beast.
    Sentence Challenge:
    Ben and Claire said the beast was terrifying Jane,however,liked him as he was kind to her.
    Sick Sentences:
    1)The door creaked open as the beast came out.
    2)He looked terrifying however he was gentle.
    Story Starter:
    One day, the heavy wooden doors cheeked open…The monster had finally come out of his house.After 10 years,he had come out.

  21. 1)
    There might be a beast who is living in there.
    2)
    I think it might be a mess inside the house as he doesn’t tidy it up.
    3)
    It’s lit every night so the beast can see where is house is in the middle of the night.
    4)
    No the beast does not have neighbours as he lives on his own
    5)
    I think the beast is a nice but mean person.
    6)
    No I would not approach the door as he might do something bad to me.
    7)
    I think the beast is a mean person as though he could be a very nice person.
    8)
    It means don’t judge it by how it looks like so if you thought the beast was nice he could do something bad could happen.
    9)
    Personally I would stay home and avoid seeing people.
    Task 2
    1)
    Youse these words to make these sentences
    And
    However
    As
    Ben and Clair said the beast was terrifying. Jane however liked him, as he was kind to her.
    Task 3
    1)
    The door opened and the beast came out.
    The black door opened and a hairy, giant beast came running out.
    2)
    The beast had big claws and teeth.
    The giant beast had sharp claws and massive teeth.
    3)
    He looked scary but was kind.
    He looked very scary but however he was kind in a nice way.
    Task 4

    • Task 4
      Write a story
      The creaky old doors hadn’t been opened for years. The beast has always lived inside, but nobody dared to visit. Noises that echoed from the gaps in the door had haunted those nearby. Nobody new what the narrow mossy steps led to nobody new what was lurking within.

      One day the heavy, wooden doors began to open with a groan…

      • A good start Braydon, well done. I wonder what is lurking within? Careful with your spelling of ‘new’, it needs to changed to ‘knew’. How did you get on with rest of the task?

  22. Task 1:
    1)I think maybe a creature like Shrek would live there.
    2)I think the house would look a bit old and cosy.
    3)I think the creature put it there because he wanted to be left alone.
    4)I think that the local people think that the beast is horrible and evil.
    5)I think that the lamp would be lit every year in memory of his friend/pet (a dog), who got killed by the locals.
    6)I think the beast doesn’t have neighbours because people hate him.
    7)I think the beast used to live with the pet, but then it got killed so the beast lived alone.
    8)I think that I wouldn’t go up to his door because I would get in trouble and I would also be scared.
    9)I think that the beast is actually really nice, he just doesn’t have the chance to show it.
    10)I think the saying could apply to the beast because everyone treated him poorly just because he LOOKS scary.
    11)I would hide away because everyone would be too rude.

    Task 2:
    Ben and Claire said the beast was terrifying. Jane, however, liked him because he was kind to her.

      • *very unexpected story warning*
        Task 4:

        The creature looked down upon a little girl, who looked very excited.
        “Hello Mr Beast!” said the girl excitedly.
        “Jane! How nice it is to see you again! What brings you here?” asked the beast in surprise.
        “I just thought it would be nice to see you again. It’s my birthday today, I was wondering if you would like to come to my party…?” Jane asked sweetly.
        The beast’s mind flooded with horrible memories. The faces of the locals. The screams of the children. It was a great risk going outside, let alone a local’s party!
        “I-I’m sorry child, I just can’t…” he said, creeping back into his house.
        “But-“
        Slam went the door.
        The beast went back inside his cosy house, wishing this day never came. Mr Beast used to get bullied as a child because of his scary looks. Really, the locals were ruder than them. All of them, except for Jane. His life was a nightmare. Worse than that.
        ‘I mean, I could give it a shot I guess…?’ he thought. Quickly, he rushed around the room looking for a gift. He picked up an old seashell and rushed out the door.
        “Mr Beast.. are you really going to come?!” asked the girl excitedly.
        “Hmm” replied Mr Beast.
        As they walked through the village, locals looked up to him in disgust.
        “Ew, what’s she doing with HIM?” “Why is he here?” went the locals.
        “Aaah!” screamed one. Then went another. Jane navigated the beast to his house and they went inside.
        “She’s here!” came a childish voice.
        “But what’s he doing here…?” came another.
        Why did he even come? This, for the beast, was going to be another nightmare come true.

  23. As the doors opened, it started cracking. Once it was fully open, it started collapsing to the ground. The first body part that came into sight was his demon red eyes. The massive grin following the stretch got louder as everyone saw him. Gasps were heard across the town. Every citizen he looked at took a step back. Screaming from the children’s of the town and yelling. At the far back was the police pushing their way through the crowd. They aimed at the beast as he stepped forward. One police officer took a shot and the beast yelped in pain. It never felt the same around humans again…

  24. One day, the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…
    A thin, grey wolf 🐺 stared around at whatever had disturbed him. He had sharp, pointed claws and small teeth, but they were also very sharp. He had dark green eyes, but the strangest thing about him was that he had wings! They were long, and had blue feathers coming from the grey skeletal part. However, when the wolf looked down, he saw 3 small mice, quivering and shaking.
    “Oh! What a pleasant surprise…” the wolf grinned menacingly, baring his sharp fangs. One of the mice grinned back sheepishly.
    “H-hello, mr wolf, sorry to disturb you, but we urgently need a place to stay, so…”
    “May we stay for the night?” Another mouse asked timidly.
    The wolf nodded politely, and opened the door a crack bit more.
    “Come along…into my house.” The mice scuttled inside, and the wolf licked his lips. “Part one of my plan… done!”
    The mice sat patiently on a small chair. The cunning wolf, who’s mouth was almost watering, suddenly burst out laughing, startling the mice.
    “Oh you poor, POOR creatures… I don’t have a place for you to stay. But, OH NEVER MIND! I’M HUNGRY!!” Suddenly, the wolf snatched one of the mice in his huge paws, and held him way above his head. He opened his jaws, revealing all of his teeth, glittering with saliva. He dropped the mouse in, and SNAP!
    He shut his mouth, as the other mice stared in horror. He gulped, and the mouse was gone.
    “N-no! He’s just playing a-a trick on us!” One mouse squeaked. The wolf shook his head, and opened his mouth, which was empty. Then, he whispered, “I’m not full yet, though.”
    He grabbed another mouse, opened his jaw, and the mouse fell in. This time, the tail stuck out of his mouth, and he slurped it up like spaghetti. He turned his head, to face the final mouse. The mouse was paralysed in shock, and the wolf grabbed him. This time, he wrapped his long tongue around the mouse, and swallowed him again. Once they had all home down, he gasped for air. “Ah, silly, silly mice. Don’t they know, never trust a hungry wolf?” He cackled, and bounded up to bed, his stomach finally full.
    By chloe 🖤

  25. One day the heavy wooden door slowly opened with a groan shiny beast with big eyes looking around angrily as he steps outside his house. All the children started rushing to pick their toys up so they can run when the shiny beast walked towards them and smiled and watched them play.

    • Rehaan, you are missing punctuation in your writing.
      Your writing:
      One day the heavy wooden door slowly opened with a groan shiny beast with big eyes looking around angrily as he steps outside his house. All the children started rushing to pick their toys up so they can run when the shiny beast walked towards them and smiled and watched them play.

      Improved:
      “One day, the heavy wooden door” – how can you describe the door? Apart from heavy, what about the way it looks… what colour is the door? How does the door feel?
      “slowly opened with a shiny beast. The beast had big eyes like” – could you use a simile here? Big eyes like…
      “As he stepped outside, with a stern look on his face, all of the children rushed to pick up their toys, running as fast as they can. When all of a sudden, the shiny beast walked” – how can you up level ‘walked’?
      “towards them” – how did he walk towards them? You could use another adverb here.
      “and smiled as he watched them play”.
      Please go back over this. Read it through and make improvements where I have commented. Thank you!

  26. {*~ 📒🖤 Task 4 Story Task~*📚🖤}
    The beast That Had No Friends…
    One day, the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…
    All of a sudden Sarah and Alex were amazed with what they saw with their eyes . There was a mangly beast with ferocious dagger looking teeth dirty scratched fur and blood-shot eyes with dangerous knive looking claws. Sarah screamed and ran as fast as she could with every singls breath she could take . Alex didnt bother neither did he even care so with alot of courage and bravery, He went up to the beast with a huge gulp… However the Terrifying Beast became into a friendly happy sweet beast and cuddled Alex.. But Sarah ran and gave the beast a huge cuddle then scratched Poor Sarah!
    The end..?
    From Rehan 😄😄👍🏻

  27. ♠️Story♣️
    The beast that everyone was scared 😟 of came out at night and people had nightmares 🦁about him but he was a good beast only one person was his friend they went hunting🦌 together and she had to prove that he was good “Everyone I’m going to prove to you that he’s good”😇
    “What Do you mean?” 🧐
    “I said he is good and I’m not wrong. We go hunting together and he keeps me safe he’s only my friend because you guys won’t be his friend so be his make him welcome”.🥶

  28. Sick sentences:
    The big , bulky door opened and a. Scary , tall beast came out stumbling towards them.
    The enormous, hairy beast has scary rotten teeth and he had claws the size of a dagger.
    One day, the creaky , old door slowly began open to with a groan a big , scary beast came stammering out. It was as tall as a giant and had big, point dagger like teeth.

    Ben, Claire and Jane stared a hole in the door as it was creaking open they wandered what was on the other side of the door , they were worried about getting eaten by a huge man beast . They would be the first people on the world to manage to find out what was behind the mysterious door , there was a very big rumour stating the first people to find what was behind the door would win £10,000 from the Queen of England. She wanted to know because it ate many citizens of Coventry, many families were confused about the sudden disapearence of children. The door finally opened and a huge shadow appeared snatching Ben in a matter of seconds. Ben was screaming for help but a helpless Ben got eaten by the mystery figure.
    “You… M..Monster.” Said Jane stammering.
    She was frightened to death.
    “Your Next” said a low pitched voice that sounded like it belonged to a giant, beast.
    He grabbed Jane…

    The End.

  29. As the door opened a filthy beast made its way through. The wretched beast towered over the jungle but had the power to shrink or grow. The beast was never seen before and for the beast it had never seen humans before.It did not understand the people as for him he has a different language. Although they did not understand the beast they took it as a threat and decided to kill him. When the Gremlin saw them he retreated.He did not harm them but decided to show mercy his appearance was what let them think that he will attack him but his personality was what they should of seen first.

  30. The doors had not been open for years.No one would ever sneak in there.From the gaps in the door you could hear people screaming.The creature had lived there for years and years.Nobodynewwho and what kind of animal was living in there.Everyone wanted to go through the doors to see what is living there or who is living there.One day the doors creaked open with a big groan and you could smell a stinky breath.The stinky creature came out and jumped on all If them…

    • Adam, would like to see you use some fronted adverbials and similes. How did the breath smell like? Be careful with your typing. Look at your sentence ‘Nobody knew…’

  31. The door opened out came an ugly creature that was ugly as a troll it jumped in to a giant mud puddle. His nose was bigger than your head and it’s face looked like a baby face. Suddenly he saw a royal servant.
    “What are ya doin’ in my swamp!”shouted the thing.
    “You have been challenged to fight a gladiator.”replied the royal servant.
    In 5 hours he put on his armour and went inside the colosseum.
    The crowds were cheering for their champion. It punched him in the face and already the warrior was down. The things career only started.

    • Good try Aidan. However, I know you can give this another go and improve.
      How did the door open?
      You could start with something like:
      “With the gush of the wind, the door flew open”.
      You are missing a couple of full stops.
      “Suddenly, he saw a royal servant”.
      “What are ya doin’ in my swamp!” shouted the thing – adverb could be used here. Shouted aggressively? Shouted loudly?
      “5 hours later…”
      “He put on his armour and entered the colosseum”. Again, an adverb could be used here. How was he feeling? Brave? Courageous? Powerful?
      You could use any of these adverbs:
      – bravely
      – courageously
      – powerfully
      The crowds were cheering for their champion.
      “It punched him in the face” – what punched him in the face?
      and already the warrior was down. Can you up level “already the warrior was down”?

  32. Who might live inside the tree?
    Maybe a little beast called the minotaur lives in there.

    What would the house look like?
    The house looks a bit wrecked because they wreck things with their heads.

    They think it’s dangerous so they say don’t go near them.

    Do they ever turn that light on?

    At night they turn it on only when the outside is clear but when there’s fixed or human they turn it off so they don’t get spotted.

    Does the beast have neighbours?

    yes it does and guess where they live …. They live in the minotaur house they live in the same house as him.

    If you were in a village and saw that door? What would you do?
    I would go and meet the minotaur he’s not dangerous because a very tiny.

    What do you think the beast is like?

    The beast is like nice and kind.

    What does don’t judge a book by its cover mean?

    It means when you see someone not looking nice from his face maybe try to see what his personality is like.Also when you see a book and think it’s bad always read from it a little then see if you will like it or not.

    Would you go approach a human.

    I would stay inside only if they needed help then I will go help them.

    Sentence challenge
    Ben and claire said the beast was terrifying.claire however liked as he was nice to her.

    The mysterious door opened and out the beast came.
    The tiny beast had big horns and terrifying claws.
    He commissary but he was very nice.

  33. Task 4
    One day the heavy, wooden doors slowly began to open with a groan…
    No one knew this mysterious day would come. The old, modern door
    handle was moving and the sun was starting to set. The grey clouds were
    caving in, all of a sudden, you could hear a loud thunder. Out of nowhere,
    the door flung open and nothing was their. Did the person already escaped from the haunted, abandoned door?

  34. Deep and dark, in the marsh, stood out a tree little did people know it belonged to the beast of the swamp…One day Lord Faarquard wanted to make a excavation and take down the swamp as extended land. He and his troops were met with a horrible stench. Most of them wielded axes and some had spears, swords, catapults and shields. They chopped down most of the swamp. But they met a problem a massive tree sat in the middle it was to thick to chop. A rumbling sound grew bigger and bigger until it knocked everyone off their feet.Lord Faarquard told everyone to rush the building slaying what anything was inside. Suddenly, the door slowly began to creak open, a huge dark figure emerged…Red eyes opened. Lord Faarquard was expecting a huge beast. But instead came out a ogre called Shrek. Just because he was an ogre he was not friendly . WHY ARE YOU IN MY SWAMP!!!!!A huge gale of wind struck the men pushing them back. Instantly, all the men pulled back their fortifications and ran for their lives. When the men disappeared Donkey showed his face. What’s with the screaming Shrek. Some people entering my swamp. The End

  35. Sentence challenge!
    Ben and Clair said the beast was terrifying!
    Jane,however liked him as he was kind to her.

    Sick sentences:

    The big , bulky door opened and a. Scary , tall beast came out stumbling towards them…

    The ginormaous , giant beast has scary rotten teeth and he had claws the size of a knife…

    One day , the heavy , wooden dppprs slowly began to po n with a groan….. a big , subtitle beast came growling out. If the door with claws as big and sharp as knifes the door bashed
    D closed again . The children ran to the door and tried to rag it open but the beast got there before them and to the children’s surprise… th ebeast kindly opens the door with a smile.

  36. I think an evil dwarf lives in the tree because the doors don’t look that big.

    I think the house would have a stench of blood and look all black and grey with spider webs in the corners of the house.

    I predict that the lamp will never be lit because it looks ancient and broken.

    The beast might not have neighbours because it looks like the tree is in an empty place

    The beast lives alone because it looks like a really small house unless it teleports you to a new house in a new dimension.

    I probably wouldn’t go to meet the beast because you never know if there’s any traps to get you stuck inside.

    It would probably look like a short man dressed in dusty clothes and a grey beard.

    Ben and Claire said the beast was terrifying.
    Jane,however,liked him.As he was kind to her.

    The door slowly opened and the eerie beast walked out.

    The enormous beast had dagger like claws and sharp teeth covered in dark red blood.

    He looked eerie ,however,he was kind.

    • Good effort Marcel, well done.
      However, some of your sentences need improving.

      A few tips:
      Make sure you include a comma in your sentences.
      Example sentence:
      “ I think the house would look black and grey, with a strong stench of blood and hanging spider webs in the corners of the house.”
      “However, Jane liked him, as he was kind to her.”
      Please have a go at up levelling some of your sentences.
      I know you can do it Marcel! Think of your powerful adverbs and adjectives.

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