Year 5: Tuesday 23rd June: Home Learning: English

Good Morning Year 5. Today is your fiction writing task.

Please complete task 4 in your blog comment.

Task 1: Look at the picture and answer the questions. Use your inference skills.

Task 2

Look at the sentence at the bottom. Find a way to split it into two sentences that make sense.

Task 3

The 3 sentences with the blue arrows are not very good. You have to use your awesome writing skills to make them better. Rewrite the sentences with more detail and better features in them. Try adding a relative clause, as this is what we studied in SPAG last week.

Task 4: DO THIS TASK IN YOUR COMMENT

This is your creative writing task. You can use the sentence to the right of the picture if you would like OR you can start the story in whatever way you like. Think about this:
– whats the town like? (good place for expanded noun phrases)
– is she normal or weird?
– is she chasing the cat or following the cat?
– is the cat taking her somewhere?
– does she need to get the cat back for someone?
– is she magical? If so, what are her powers?

WRITE THE STORY ON THE BLOG PLEASE

Task 5

109 thoughts on “Year 5: Tuesday 23rd June: Home Learning: English

  1. Task 4 – story starter .
    All off a sudden she felt alive .Tonight was going to be a night to remember for sure . On the other hand , someone was watching Bella with her companion Mumbles (Bella’s Cat ). Everywhere and anywhere she went the mysterious person watched Bella with her magical fingers .

    Once Bella got home , her parents stood looking worried .
    Disappointed Bella’s Mum said “, Where have you been Bella “?
    “Ummmmmm I”, replied back Bella .
    ” Yes TELL US “, crossly said Bella ‘s Dad .
    “I took Mumbles for a walk because he kept meowing meowing and scratching me “, lied Bella .
    ” Well you need to get to bed and have a good night rest because tomorrow is school “, answered Mum.
    Replied Bella “, OK “.

    As fast as she could , Bella brushed her teeth and hoped into bed . The person , who had been watching her earlier was watching her again through the window . The person climbed in through the window and did some kind of evil , powerful and strong witch spell on Bella’s magic fingers that would not let Bella perform any magic again .

    The next morning , Belle tried to use magic to make her bed but instead it made a hole inside her bed . Bella was confused . Next, she tried to use magic to to help her put on her school uniform . Her uniform had a hole inside . She was devastated . She knew someone had taken over her powers but who ?

  2. “Whoa that was close” she whispered as she walked on the tiles which were about to break. She quickly bent down and saw that she was right. In here eyes she could see the whole city was about to get defeated.

    She knew that she didn’t want to save her parents as they were cruelly,horrid and most of all mean and made her their slave. She had enough so didn’t try to warn them.

    She switched back to the normal eyes and wanted to escape. Suddenly she did the biggest jump she had done by far. She thought she wouldn’t make it but she did.

    She whispered to her cat “Molly were nearly there.We have escaped this dump.”

    A swap of questions hit her mind
    What if there was no place to stay?
    Where was shelter ?
    Who was going to look after her ?
    But then she said ” this was the right thing to do.”

  3. Bella said some random words and wings appeared. She was flying. Her cat jumped on to her arms and they went exploring. While they were in the air they saw a beacon of light. Bella flew over and dropped her wings on the hard, rocky ground. They saw an orb on a pedestal. Bella took it off and an alarm rang. She heard a crowd of banging footsteps. A security guard said ’’Hey kid, you’re not supposed to be here. Go away.” Bella picked up her wings and flew off with her cat.

    Before she headed off she secretly went behind the base and heard the guard talking. ”Phew, we were close to getting busted. I hope that kid doesn’t return. No one knows that the orb is a jewel that we stole. Boss will not be happy if we get busted.

    Little did they know that Bella recorded the whole thing on her phone. Bella went to the police and showed them the recording. The police rushed off and caught them. They had been arrested and Bella was on the news.

  4. Question time
    1. I think Bella and her companion are running away from the evil that lurks behind them.
    2. A companion is someone or something who travels with you.
    3. Bella’s companion is the cat because I can infer from the picture that the cat and Bella are with each other going somewhere.
    4. I don’t think that Bella’s cat is a normal cat I think that it is a human but has been cursed.
    5. Bella’s magical powers are that she has another world that she can go to.
    6. I think Bella is trying to go back to the normal world.
    7. I don’t think that Bella’s parents know about her powers because they would have been there with her.
    8. If I was Bella I would use my powers in a dangerous situation.
    9. I think she is walking on the rooftops because maybe she doesn’t want to be spotted.

      • Sick sentences
        Bella whose magical powers could change the world was walking with her mysterious companion across the rigid tiles.
        Bella held her arms out while walking across the rooftops trying to keep her balance.

        • These are great answers, you have clearly thought about the questions, however (and it is in giant pink boxes) task 4 was supposed to be done on the blog and the rest can be in your book. The reason for this is on Wednesday you will be asked to edit and improve your story on the blog. From your answers and creative thinking on the questions I can see your story had the potential to be brilliant. Never miss an opportunity to show people you’re brilliant!

  5. “Whoa, that was close!” Bella said in shock while looking up at a tower that contained a hideous beast in it. While walking and jumping around frantically she was about to face a highly disruptive obstacle that was as tall as a skyscraper! She caught hold of her cat which was her most trusted companion and jumped as high as she could with her superpowers and reached over the wall. Behind them was a soldier that was chasing them from behind. Hysterically, they cheered together, but it didn’t stay very long… An arrow flung past them, they looked behind and it was an entire army! “Oh no!” She screamed!
    While this happened the cat got very distracted. It was the laser on the gun. The little companion was drawn to it! Once again she reached down and grabbed her cat. For the first time today they were on the run…

    • Improved version:
      “Whoa, that was close!” Bella shouted whilst looking up at the tall tower which held a hideous beast captive. Bella walked and jumped around frantically, she was about to face a highly disruptive obstacle that was as high as a skyscraper! Suddenly she looked behind her and saw that there was a furious soldier racing towards them. Immediately, she caught hold of her cat which was her most trusted companion and bounced as high as she could because of her wondrous superpowers and reached over the wall. Finally, they got away, they cheered together, however, their celebration didn’t last very long… An arrow flung past them, they looked behind and it was an entire army! “Oh no!” She screamed!
      During this frightful event, the cat got very distracted. There was a laser being shone from one of the soldiers which the little companion was drawn to! Once again Bella reached down and grabbed hold of her cat. They needed to run…

  6. All of a sudden she felt alive.As her gorgeous long black hair
    flew in the fresh wind.
    Balancing on the wobbly tiles she almost fell but used her powers to get back up savely the black , fluffy cat meowed in the wind sniffing
    the bueatiful air and standing majesticy on the roof top.

    • Some good ideas, perhaps tomorrow you can expand on it a bit?

      Spelling mistakes: savely / bueatiful / majesticy

      1 more hint: try add some adverbs or even use one as a fronted adverbial.

  7. I did all the other tasks in my homework book.
    Task 4
    It was an evening of the year 1212. The sun was going down and the autumn fog was spreading through the town. School finished, and on the rooftop, Bella was travelling to their secret, abandoned arena with her companion. The black cat was in front and leading the way.
    “Are we there yet, Mother?”, the cat heard Bella think.
    “Nearly, daughter.”, replied the cat.
    Bella’s mother was an experienced witch, which was taking her child to the first private lesson of witchcraft. The girl was advancing cautiously, excited to discover her powers…

  8. Once upon time there was a big,dirty village with mushroom houses.There was a girl. she wasn’t normal and she wasn’t weird but she was a human with dangerous superpowers and she impresses a lot of people with them.
    There was a cat which was black and the girl was following it.The cat was taking the girl somewhere important.The cat was going to take the girl somewhere but the cat whispered sadly ”After I take you to your place I have to go back to my rightful owner otherwise he will be very angry…” The cat paused and said ”sorry” The girl declared ”awww please stay with me cat” suddenly The girl exclaimed in a very shy voice ”hey cat I have super powers and they are invisibility and fire balls to attack.” The cat said I already knew you had powers I was watching you everyday…..

  9. Bella had always been different to the other people at school. They looked at her strangely and she would often hear them whispering about her and when they thought she wasn’t some times they whispered when they knew she was listening. Every evening ,when Bella returned home her big journey began all her worries from school were banished from her own mind . Bella had another life . A life ,that was a secret .A magical life
    All of a sudden ,she felt alive in a complete different world tonight was going to be the best night ever that she would always remember.

  10. Bella was a victim because she was different to everyone else and everyone was being mean to her except from the teachers and her mum and dad. The teachers and her parents said it does not matter if you are different but it’s actually fun and different if you are different it does not matter what everyone says just follow your heart and be happier. Then she was happier and everyone was angry that she was happier.

    • This story has a lovely message Luqman. Tomorrow you will be asked to improve it, would be lovely to see you add some more details. Perhaps you can tell us why she is different?

  11. In the spooky abandoned town which people have not lived there for centuries. Bella was thinking about herslf.She thought ‘Am I normal.Why does everyone hate me. I guess I should use my magical powers to make me feel better’. She followed her cat as it was her companion and her only friend. So they careful walked across the building and jumped of it.
    She followed the cat home she was very tired. After hours of walking they were nearly there.As they were walking back home, Bella was worried about the fact no one liked her. A few minutes later, Bella got back home with her cat. Then Bella started to feel sick…

    • This is good. Your first sentence has a relative clause, but your main clause isn’t finished, Example:

      In the spooky abandoned town, which people have not lived there for centuries, Bella was thinking about herself.

      If you wrote it like this ^ then you would have a full Multi-clause sentence correctly punctuated.

  12. The huge odd town is magical
    she is weird because she is following a random black cat
    she looks like she is following the cat
    the cat is taking her to a sacred place to get ultamate power
    she does not need to give the cat back to someone as she does not know who the cat belonged to
    she is not magical yet as when the cat takes her to the sacred place she will be really powerful

    • Good try Zavian, could you use PEE skills/inference skills to show how you got your answers? Please complete the other tasks and email your work.

  13. Once there was a village, that had a small community which, meant that there wasn’t many people living in that village. There lived a delightful little girl called Bella she was always wandering around the Village because her personality was a little peculiar and her personality was that she was very curious and very energetic person. It was the next day and she was outside once again she knows everyone in the village but an obscure looking person that was wearing a black hoodie and a black mask he or she was always coming by her house. One day Bella went out to figure out who it actually is but when she got closer she saw that the weird-looking person was wearing a witch’s hat but when she asked who the lady was and she replied with, she was a Witch so Bella got quite scared and then she climbed up the roof but she slipped and the tiles were making her fall and she got hurt so the witch came and helped her and healed her with her potions and the witch turned out to be a nice witch she only has potions to heal people that get hurt so Bella asked the witch to heal all the people in her village and so the witch did what Bella asked and everyone soon recovered from their sicknesses.

    The End

    • There are some lovely ideas in here and you have used subordinate conjunctions really well. I am very proud.

      Tomorrow you will be asked to improve it. Let me make a couple of suggestions:
      1) when the witch speaks add inverted commas and create direct speech.
      2) Your middle section is 1 very very long sentence. Try splitting it into 2 or 3 (they will still be multi-clause sentences as you have put in so much wonderful detail).

  14. Bella was always the victim of gossiping and back chatting as she was not a normal witch. She has a peculiar star shaped scar on her shin. None of the witches or wizards ever knew how she got it. All Bella knew was that she got it when her mother mysteriously dissappeared one night. Bella wanted to know what had happened afer all these years.

    Bella lived in an orphanage . She was never allowed outside. But Bella was a daredevil. Every night, she snuck outside and went on a walk. So today, Bella d

      • So today Bella did the same thing. But tonight was going to be a night to remember. Bella and her faithful companion Tommy the midnight black cat went on their walk. Suddenly, Tommy ran away! Bella chased after him but he was too fast! Tommy ran away out of sight. Then out of nowhere, Bella heard a faint meowing. It was coming from the house on the top of the hill. That was the haunted house were nobody ever went and those who did never came out.
        Bella used her superhuman sense which allowed her to see through anything.She her cat but she also saw a human like figure lying down on a bed. Bella rushed to the house collected Tommy and quietly walked into the bedroom. Somebody was lying on a bed. A woman. Bella flung the covers off the woman and after all these years. It was her mother…

  15. Question time
    1. Bella and her cat went to an haunted street.
    2. Companion means a person who travels with you.
    3. Bella’s companion is a cat.
    4. I think Bella’s cat is an normal cat.
    5. Her magical powers are flying.
    6. I think she is going to her grandmas house.
    7. I don’t think her parents know about her magical powers.
    8. She is walking on the rooftop because she has flying powers.

    Task 2
    Bella has magic hands in her fingertips. For year she had performed the
    most incredible feats.

    Task 3: sick sentences
    As carefully as she could,Bella walked over the old, modern tiles.
    When the cat led the way, she slowly reached her arms out so she won’t
    fall.
    As she was balancing, it started to get so windy that her hair started
    fly in her face.

    Task 4:
    In the haunted town, where there modern, old houses are, there was a little girl who was flying on rooftops but no one knew that she had magical, mysterious powers. She had a black cat that was leading Bella
    to an haunted street,where no one stepped foot into the town.

    • Well done. You must have more confidence because you stressed about the last task and it left you with not much time. The sentences you have done are really good.

  16. Bella had extreme, powerful magic in her finger tips: for many years she had performed the most amazing, incredible feats. This is the sentence challenge

    Sick sentences :
    Bella walked gracefully, over the smooth tiles.

    She carefully held her smooth arms out.

    Her sented hair blew in the powerful wind.

    Task 4:
    Bella was unique to other children and everyone also was different to her she always looked strangely to the other people around but they are all so different to her.

    Every night evening, Bella returns home and she begins to strats with her normal real life . Every day Bella alwalys gets so much worries of the children but they are banished from her beautiful mind .

    • In your last task, the grammar is a little wayward. The first sentence should be two different ones really. Can you spot where you would put the full stop?

  17. Task1
    1)I think that Bella and her companion are going to a witch village.
    2)Companion means someone beside them.
    3)I think that Bella’s companion is the black cat.
    4)I think that Bella has telekinesis and flying.
    Task 2
    Bella had powers in her fingertips.for many years she performed incredible feats

    Task 3
    Bella quietly scrambled over the brown, broken titles so she can get to her house because of the hot , raging lave.
    Walt’s balancing on a roof top , Bella stretched her armes out so she wouldn’t fall to the hard , hot ground

    Task 4
    In the town there was old , Woden houses and viny, tall towers.On her way back from school Bella was walking on a roof top.She was a normal girl with chaotic powers. Walt’s Bella was walking and saw a random cat so she started to follow the black cat.

  18. Task 1
    I think that Bella and her companion is going to her house.
    Companion means someone who goes with you on an adventure.
    Bella’s companion is a cat.
    I think that Bella’s cat is not a normal cat.
    I think her powers are to shoot fire and water from her hands.
    I think she is going to her home.
    I think her family doesn’t know about her powers.
    I would my water power to make a swimming pool.
    I think she walking on the roof because she is looking for her house
    Task 2
    Bella had magic in her fingertips. For years she had performed the most incredible feats.
    Task 3
    Carefully, Bella strode across tough ,brown tiles.
    While balancing on the roof, she held her skinny, little arms out.
    Rapidly, her long, pitch black hair roared in the powerful wind.
    Task 4
    Bella had always been different to the other people at school. They looked at her strangely and she would often hear them whispering about her and when they thought she wasn’t there. Sometimes they whispered about her even when they knew she was listening.
    She hurried home as quick as a flash. Suddenly, she saw a cat.Without warning the cat jumped on a roof but unlike others she had magic powers to jump high and shoot water and fire from her fingertips. With all her power, she jumped on top of the roof and followed the cat to a magical place which know one but people who had powers like Bella, hid under a rock.One had telekinesis one had strength and one had speed.

    • We looked at the last paragraph together and made some corrections:
      She hurried home as quick as a flash. Suddenly, she saw a cat.Without warning the cat jumped on a roof but unlike others she (Who the cat or Bella?) had magic powers to jump high and shoot water and fire from her fingertips. With all her power, she jumped on top of the roof and followed the cat to a magical place which had people with powers like Bella, hid under a rocks .One had telekinesis one had strength and one had speed.

  19. The wind blew wildly through the town, leaves lifting from the ground, twigs waving around like arms. Bella was a magical girl, who had magical powers and could fly and balance with ease. This helped her to fly around to people in need. Her town, however, was very dead and dull. There were tall, dark towers that shot up into the sky 🌌, and small, dreary houses covered in dirt as they were so old. Bella had found a beautiful, coal black cat 🐈 with magical blue eyes. She called the cat Galaxy. However, galaxy wasn’t a regular cat. This cat could talk, and recite magical spells. Bella had used galaxy as her sidekick or companion, and now they explored the city by tiptoeing over rooftops, but her family suspected nothing.
    One day, Bella wandered all over the town, and came across a small, deserted forest 🌳. It was dark and dingy, and there were strange, purple streaks flashing throughout the trees. She thought it was very cool, so she decided to have a little stroll inside. When she was inside, she saw her cat, Galaxy, hissing at the trees. Bella was starting to get a little bit scared, so she decided to run. As she ran, she tripped over a large thorn sticking out of the ground. Galaxy the cat guarded Bella as she scrambled to her feet. She ran with galaxy along side her, and she finally escaped the scary, dark forest. Bella suddenly saw two bright, glowing eyes start to run towards her. Startled, she stumbled to her family’s house with galaxy, and swore to never go to the forest again.

    By Chloe 💜

  20. Bella had been different to other people if some one trys to fight with her she use her powers so everyone got scared and stayed away from her so one day she got so angry and set up a fire and ran away with her cat.

    • There is some nice ideas in here, but you have written it as one sentences. Please try to add in some full stops. Tomorrow you will be asked to improve this. Try adding a bit more information :D

  21. Task 1:
    1)I think Bella and her companion are going to a witch town.

    2)Companion means when someone joins you on an adventure.

    3)I think Bella’s companion is her black cat.

    4)I think that Bella’s cat is not a normal pet.

    5)I think her super powers are telekinesis and flying.

    6)I think she is walking on rooftops because she wants to train for her witch friends.

    Task 2:
    Bella had magic in her fingertips.She had performed the most incredible feats.

    Task 3:
    One day, Bella walked over the tiles on the roof and rushed to keep her balance with her arms out because the wind blew her hair.

    Task 4:
    I think the town I weird because it is really dark.

    I think she is weird because in the picture it looks like she has black eyes and i think she is evil.

    I think she is following the cat to a witch town.

    I think the cat is talking her to a witch town.

    I think she is just walking to a random place.

    I think she is magical and her powers are telekinesis and flying and they can help her get up to high place and to get people out her way.

  22. Bella The Dark haired little girl 👧 had got super powers she didn’t tell her parents. One night the menace girl 👧 snook out for an adventure. With her companion the cat 🐱 could fly so she flew over there 👉She had a great adventure climbing Until A mythic monster came alive and breathed a purple beam so they quickly flew back but the cat had no energy…….

  23. Task 2:
    Bella Had magic in her fingertips.For years she had performed the most incredible feats.

    Task 3:
    Bella walked over the brittle tiles Cautiously at night time.
    She held her arms out to help her get more balance on her feet.
    Her Dark hair had blew in the Foggy 🌫 wind.

  24. 1. I think Bella is going on an adventure with her cat .
    2. Companion means a person that travels with you.
    3. Bella’s companion is her cat. I know this because in the picture, she is with her black cat.
    4) I think Bella’s cat is not a normal animal, because she has super natural.
    5.

  25. I think Bella and her companion are going to a magical land because as she is walking the background is lighting up too.
    Companion means someone who does things with someone or goes to places with someone.
    Bella’s companion is a black cat.
    I don’t think that the cat is a normal animal because it has glowing eyes and no normal cat has bright, glowing eyes.
    I think bellas magical powers are to be able to fly or to balance with ease because she is walking on a very slim roof.
    I think her family didn’t know about her powers because other wise they would be very worried and wouldn’t let her go outside on her own.
    If I had magical powers like Bella, I would fly all around the word and it would be soooo fun!
    I think she might be walking on rooftops because she is protecting them or she is testing out her powers.
    By Chloe 💙

    • Task 2:
      Bella’s cat was a dark shade of black 🖤:it had magic in its paws 🐾 and misty eyes.
      Task 3:
      Cautiously, Bella tiptoed across the narrow tiles.
      She had her arms spread out like a bird 🦅 soaring through the sky, her cat’s elegant paws 🐾 pattering against the roof.
      Her thick, brown hair blew wildly in the harsh wind.

  26. Task 1:
    1)Yes I Can.
    2) The person that goes with them
    3) The companion is the Cat 🐱
    4)I Don’t think 🤔 so
    5)she might be able to climb 🧗‍♂️ buildings.
    6)She might be going on a hunt.
    7) The Parent Definitely Don’t Know that she has powers
    8) I would go on lots of adventures.
    9) She is going on adventures with her companion.

  27. I think Bella is a witch as witches get there magical powers at the age of 12 it must be her birthday and she must now be 12 she is probably waiting for her magical powers to provoke. It looks like she is on a dangerous mission waiting for her powers to awaken. She also has her magical cat next to her which is a black cat which witches traditionally use . She probably went to school and her mother took her out so she could learn how to master the blessing within her…

    (●’◡’●)(●’◡’●)

  28. The creepy, spooky town was filled with wizards and witches.
    She is weird because she has super powers, that are extremely dangerous and can harm your life forever.
    She is following the cat because it is leading her to the most haunted house in the village.
    Yes the cat is leading her to the haunted house in the end of the tunnel.
    No the cat is stray so it does not have a owner of the cat.
    She is powerful and has magical powers, they are turning people into a frog , be invisible, and she has super speed and intelligence.
    Story:
    The stray cat led her to a old looking house at the end of the tunnel there were loads of moaning sounds coming from in front of them. Then the door croaked open like it was speaking to Bella and the cat. They cautiously entered the weird looking house. Inside it was cold and dark, there was a flashlight that had run out of power a long time ago, because of the rust and dirt on it. As they walked silently into the long deep corridor a man sneaked up behind them and stole the cat . Underneath the hood, it was a Vampire who wanted revenge on the intruders in his old house . He allowed Bella to look around because he had set a trap he wanted to eat the cat , and put it in the oven but forgot to put the oven on so the cat was actually not cooking. Bella noticed the blood on the walls and awards for being the most scariest man on the planet, Bella was confused. She started to wander that someone was in the house. Because of noise coming from the kitchen, then the noise came closer and closer until she was looking at a Vampire she screamed for help but nobody could help her but she did not now her father had installed a chip in her to have magical powers. She tried to run but she began running at the door but forgot about the cat. So she bravely went into the kitchen with her super speed and busted open the oven with her super strength. The two ran to the door and busted it open and ran towards their local police department and informed them of what had happened. The police did not believe them and dropped them home but what they didn’t know was the vampire was right behind them…

    • You have copied and pasted this from Armaan. Not only is this incredibly lazy, but it is very rude to Armaan who put in the work. This is the second day in a row I have caught you doing this, and Mrs Sharma informs me you did this last week too. Not impressed. Make sure this is the last time!

  29. I think Bella and her companion are going to a haunted,Eerie and dark town.

    I think a companion is a friend who likes to go on adventures with you.
    Bella’s companion is here cat.

    Bellas cat might not be a normal cat because he has all black fur like witches cats.

    i think that Bella’s magical powers are that she can fly.

    I predict that she is chasing her cat.

    i dont think her parents know about her powers.

    I think shes walking on rooftops because her cat is running from her.

    Bella has magic powers to fly:shes been training for years to come to this moment.

    Slowly,Bella walked over the creaking tiles.
    She held her arms out like a bird ready for take off.
    Her long black hair blew in the whistling wind.

  30. I have completed the rest in my homework book.

    Story starter :
    While walking on the rooftops Bella was thinking about not telling her parents about her magical powers . Sooner or later the truth was going to get revealed and Bella was going to be in trouble.She needed to tell them but first she needed to make a plan and how to do it . However , while she was walking she seen a building on fire and as she had magical powers she flayed over to the house . When she got closer she seen a shadow in the window it looked like a man and a woman screaming so she flew all the way over to the building and noticed it was no ordinary people it was here mum and dad and they had saw everything this way Bella was in trouble but then she had no worries of telling them she had powers .

    • Super stuff Shivani, well done! “She seen” doesn’t make sense though. What is the past tense for ‘see’? Also, I feel there are some words here which you could easily up-level to make them more powerful and engaging for the reader. What do you think?

  31. Task 1
    Companion means a good friend. Bella’s companion is a black cat. I think Bella has magical powers. However, I don’t think she is aware that her cat has powers too. I think Bella’s powers have something to do with the fire behind her. So I think it is air or fire. I think she is going the direction everyone else went. I think only a part of her family know she has powers but are keeping it a secret. I would use it to save a city or something that keeps people safe when they’re in trouble. I think she is walking along the roof tops to get to safety with her cat.
    —————————————————-
    Task 2
    Bella had magic in her fingertips for years she had done magic.
    —————————————————-
    Task 3
    Bella walked across the slippery but slated tiles with her favourite cat.
    She held her arms out to get more balance as she passed the tiles.
    Her hair blew hardly in the wind forcing her to move another direction
    I am going to draw Bella now after I finish my things
    —————————————————-
    Task 4
    That she had magic powers for 2 years now and then her cat ran away so she had to go running and looking for 2 hours and hen found her killed on the floor she was very upset and went home and coasted another friend
    —————————————————-
    Task 5

    • Sarina, if you read the instructions properly, you only needed to do task 2 on the blog. Your story has some good ideas, but 1 sentence isn’t a story. Tomorrow I expect you to expand on this and add more detail.

  32. All of a sudden, Bella had felt weird she had super powers.That night she had became a giant.She stepped on a old house with a cat with her and funnily destroyers the village and ran far far away to destroy more.The next day, she saw 👀 a girl who was being bullied just like her.She felt bad about it and took her with her so she couldn’t be teased at and so she joined her quest.Finnaly, they had found thousands of other children around the world 🌎 who were being teased and bullied at took them and became friends.
    THE END 😃😎

    • Well done Inaaya! I’d like you to up level some of your sentence openers and your conjunctions. There’s a lot of ‘and’ & ‘so’ being used here! Remember- it’s all about the reader and how they will enjoy reading it. Make it exciting, interesting and powerful for them!

  33. All of sudden she felt alive. Tonight was going to be a night to remember as mysterious Bella walked over the slippery, rocky roof tiles. She looked scary balancing with her dark long hair in the wind blowing her back but nothing was stopping her and her cat. Her family is unaware of her powers thinking she is in her bedroom but she escaped from her bedroom window onto the roof. Bella was tired of not having any human friends and finally found the spell to change wild animal to a person. She headed towards the cold, dark forest where she found a long shiny snake. Bella said to her cat “ nothing can stop me from having a friend” HA Ha she laughed. She turned the snake into cute girl her age who will just follow her instructions.

  34. Companion means a good friend. Bella’s companion is a black cat. I think Bella has magical powers. However, I don’t think she is aware that her cat has powers too. Bella was standing on the roof of a house in this old brick village. The houses had small swirly designs on the roofs.She might die if she walks on the roof.

  35. Task 3
    Bella walked across the slippery but slated tiles with her favourite cat.
    She held her arms out to get more balance as she passed the tiles.
    Her hair blew strongly in the wind forcing her to move another direction
    I am going to draw Bella now after I finish my lunch.

    • Marvin, you were asked to do task 4 on the blog not 3. Can you do the correct task on the blog please as you will need this tomorrow.

  36. companion means a friend
    Bellas companion is a cat
    no, I think it is a magical cat
    to fly
    I think she is going to find something else magical
    no
    to hide from the people
    Bella had magic in her fingertips for years, she had performed the most incredible feats.
    Bella walked over the creeky tiles.
    she held her boney arms out.
    her soft hair blew in the dress breeze.
    so she made her way to the village to open the chest with the key to the chest that she always puts her jewelry so on the way there she lost her cat but found her in a bush .
    .
    .

    • I feel there is a lot of missing punctuation here Adela. It feels very rushed to me and you know as well as I do that when you rush, you make lots of silly mistakes in your work that you wouldn’t make if you took your time more. Can you up-level this please?

  37. The creepy, spooky town was filled with wizards and witches.

    She is weird because she has super powers, that are extremely dangerous and can harm your life forever.

    She is following the cat because it is leading her to the most haunted house in the village.

    Yes the cat is leading her to the haunted house in the end of the tunnel.

    No the cat is stray so it does not have a owner of the cat.

    She is powerful and has magical powers, they are turning people into a frog , be invisible, and she has super speed and intelligence.

    Story:

    The stray cat led her to a old looking house at the end of the tunnel there were loads of moaning sounds coming from in front of them. Then the door croaked open like it was speaking to Bella and the cat. They cautiously entered the weird looking house. Inside it was cold and dark, there was a flashlight that had run out of power a long time ago, because of the rust and dirt on it. As they walked silently into the long deep corridor a man sneaked up behind them and stole the cat . Underneath the hood, it was a Vampire who wanted revenge on the intruders in his old house . He allowed Bella to look around because he had set a trap he wanted to eat the cat , and put it in the oven but forgot to put the oven on so the cat was actually not cooking. Bella noticed the blood on the walls and awards for being the most scariest man on the planet, Bella was confused. She started to wander that someone was in the house. Because of noise coming from the kitchen, then the noise came closer and closer until she was looking at a Vampire she screamed for help but nobody could help her but she did not now her father had installed a chip in her to have magical powers. She tried to run but she began running at the door but forgot about the cat. So she bravely went into the kitchen with her super speed and busted open the oven with her super strength. The two ran to the door and busted it open and ran towards their local police department and informed them of what had happened. The police did not believe them and dropped them home but what they didn’t know was the vampire was right behind them…

    • This is BRILLIANT Armaan. Well done and thank you for reading the instructions.

      You’ve missed a few opportunities to use commas for fronted adverbials and expanded noun phrases, so when you do this tomorrow can you add these too please.

  38. What’s the town like?
    The town is very sketched because it looks like a haunted town which no one lives in except witches.
    Is she normal or weird?
    She is not normal because she has magical powers and looks very scary and weird.
    Is she chasing the cat or following the cat?
    She is following the cat because in the text it says her companion which is the the cat.
    Is the cat taking her somewhere?
    I think the cat is taking her somewhere because it seems like she is following it.
    Does she need to get the cat back for someone?
    I believe she isn’t taking the cat back for someone but I think the cat is hers.
    Is she magical? If so, what are her powers?
    She is magical. I think her magical powers are climbing things and not falling of.

  39. Task 1
    Companion means a good friend. Bella’s companion is a black cat. I think Bella has magical powers. However, I don’t think she is aware that her cat has powers too. I think Bella’s powers have something to do with the fire behind her. So I think it is air or fire. I think she is going the direction everyone else went. I think only a part of her family know she has powers but are keeping it a secret. I would use it to save a city or something that keeps people safe when they’re in trouble. I think she is walking along the roof tops to get to safety with her cat.

  40. Bella is going to home from school.

    Companion means that someone is with someone .

    Her companion is a cat .

    I don’t think so because her cat is black which means she is witch .

    I think her power is teleportation,magic wand , disguises .

    I think she is going to find someone.

    I don’t think at her family knows about where power .

    I would use it for good .

    She is going home .

    • Thank you Kiyan. This would be even better though if it were in full sentences. Also, I’d like to see task 4 with lots of amazing descriptive vocabulary. Make me proud!

  41. Task 1
    They go to school and then little kids talk about her in a kind but mean Way as well

    A very close Freind

    Bellas companion is the cat.

    No I don’t because you can see that she’s ready to atack

    She has magic fingertips that cast people if she needs help

    I think she’s going back home from school

    I would use them if I was naught I would cast people

    Maybe because she might get killed if she walks on floor.
    Task 2
    Bella had magic in her fingertips.for years she had done magic.

    Task 3
    Bella walked over the kreaky old tiles.

    Bella had her arms out like she was a bird.

    Her hair blew in wind like it was a tree in a storm.

    Task 4
    That she had magic powers for 2 years now and then her cat ran away so she had to go running and looking for 2 hours and hen found her killed on the floor she was very upset and went home and coasted another friend and then runs away for ever

    • 1. Bella and her companion are going on an adventure to capture treasure.
      2. Companion means the person going with you, or by your side.
      3. Bella’s companion is the cat. I know this because in the picture, she is with a cat.
      4.Bella’s magical powers are flying because in the picture it looks like she is about to fly.
      5. I think Bella is going to fly and get treasure.

  42. Bella was standing on the roof of a house in this old brick village. The houses had small swirly designs on the roofs. The houses were covered with moss. There was a bright light in the distance like the sun had fallen. Bella had her trustworthy cat following around here. The walls were made of smoothened stone which was painted white.

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