Year 5: Wednesday 10th June: Home Learning: English

Good morning Year 5.

Today your task is to use fronted adverbials with the appropriate punctuation. You have 4 tasks today. 3 in your book, and the last one in your blog comment. These tasks are on this blog at the bottom, clearly labelled.

COMMENT: Use your story from yesterday and improve it with fronted adverbials. WRITE IT IN THE COMMENTS

Adverbs

An adverb is simply a word that describes a verb (an action or a doing word).

They come before or after a verb.

  • He quickly ate his lunch.
  • He ate his lunch quickly.

Adverbials

Adverbials do the same job as adverbs. They are phrases instead of single words.

He ate his lunch as quick as a flash.

They come before or after a verb.

  • He quickly ate his lunch.
  • He ate his lunch quickly.

Fronted Adverbials

Fronted adverbials are adverbs or adverbial phrases that go at the beginning of a sentence and describe the verb (action) that follows.

In the blink of an eye, the storm clouds gathered!

There are different types of fronted adverbial that can be used to change the description of the action in a sentence. These include fronted adverbials of:

  • Time – In the early morning, the storm clouds gathered.
  • Frequency – Every evening, the storm clouds gathered.
  • Place – Above the castle, the storm clouds gathered.
  • Manner – As quick as a flash, the storm clouds gathered.
  • Degree – Terrifyingly, the storm clouds gathered.

Watch the 2 videos on this website to refresh your memory on what a fronted adverbial is: https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/zjbny9q
YOU DO NOT NEED TO DO THE TASKS ON THIS WEBSITE, YOUR TASKS ARE ON THIS BLOG AT THE BOTTOM.

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Task 1:

Write out the sentences with the comma in the correct place to show a fronted adverbial.

Task 2:

Write out the paragraph in your neatest handwriting and add the commas in where you see a fronted adverbial.

Task 3:

Look at the picture of London Marathon. There are 9 sentence starters. You must pick 2 sentence starters from each column (so 6 sentences in total) and finish the sentence.

Task 4:

Improve your story from yesterday of ‘The Wanderer’. (If you haven’t done that task, may I suggest you go back to yesterday’s English and so that one first)

1. If you posted your story on the blog like you were asked you should have received feedback. Go back and read it. (If you didn’t follow the instruction, you missed out on feed back, this is why it is important to read the blog.)
2. Rewrite your story of The Wanderer and add fronted adverbials and adverbs with the verbs.
3. Look our for other ways to improve it. Did you include expanded noun phrases with your two adjectives separated by a comma e.g the biting, frosty wind / the dark, hooded cloak / the ghastly, crooked mountain. If not, add some expanded noun phrases. Did you miss any punctuation?
4. If you aren’t sure of anything, remember there is the list of features on yesterday’s blog and you can google use of commas, apostrophes and other such things.

If you find your comments are getting deleted half way through, try writing it in word or in notes first then copy and paste your work over.

Write your story about The Wanderer in the comments!!!

101 thoughts on “Year 5: Wednesday 10th June: Home Learning: English

  1. Mysteriously, the old, magical wanderer heard a deep call to him from across the lands. It spoke to him and said ” You must go to the next village it is starting to snow.” Exhausted, the old man picked up his long, magical staff and headed north to the old, unknown village. Suddenly, he was attacked by a green, slimy beast. The travelling Wanderer held his staff in the air. He said a spell. Thunder came crashing down on the beast like a cave in blocking the way out. The magic wanderer continued his journey.

  2. a) Baffled by a the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the misunderstood bridge troll, waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year the people put on their costumes, and partied at the carnival

  3. Task 4
    Before the snowflake hit the ground , the wanderer had to visit his next village . Walking on his two feet like a soldier , the wandered got there before snow came falling down . The terrified , petrified , shocked public , who were staring at the wanderer , ran as fast as they could and locker all there house doors and windows . Darkness was falling fast , the wandered looked and looked everywhere but what was he looking for ?

    Since he left his staff behind , they wandered of like bees. Suddenly , someone bravely grabbed the hood of his cloak and pulled it down . That thing under the cloak was known to be a demon for years . Confused , the public looked . Dust lay on the ground . What if the man was invisible ? What if he was fake ?

  4. Taking a break, the man sat down on the rough rock trying to reach the village in time.As he sat down it started to snow ‘oh no’ the man thought in stress I better get a move on before there a hurricane.Suddenly, he heard a noise from the distance ”Who is that shouting!” he demanded.”It’s me Harry,your brother I’m here to get you back to the village”he yelled.So he quickly got up and ran to him,he was relieved that his brother came to the rescue.Nobody knew who was under the hood,except his brother Harry.
    So they quickly ran to the village as soon as possible but they
    were too late they monster had already came and recked the place down

  5. baffled by the mathematical problem,the professor felt frustrated.
    under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    once a year, the people wear costumes and partied at the carnival.
    almost certainly, evas team would win the sports day.

  6. I did all the tasks.

    After a while, the mysterious man stood up slowly and started walking quietly towards … somewhere. In his mind, he could clearly feel the fear and pain coming from the poor, helpless people. Perfectly confident, he walked in the direction of the victim village. He only knew in which way he must go. In the end, where was the trail going to lead him? He didn’t know. Who had caused all the fear? He didn’t know…

  7. Day by day, went by as the man was still on the rock sitting on the rock covered in moss. All he did was sit he always had his hood on very few people even saw the look of his face. Suddenly, the man heard a calling to him from and he turned his head the bitter icy wind to listen.

  8. Task 1:
    Baffled by the mathematical problem,the professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge,the troll waited patiently for the three goat’s.
    Once a year, the people put on their costumes and parted in the carnival.
    Before the holidays the Year 6 pupils celebrated in their junior school.
    Almost Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

  9. Taking a break, the man sat down on the rough rock trying to reach the village in time.As he sat down it started to snow ‘oh no’ the man thought in stress I better get a move on before there a hurricane.Suddenly, he heard a noise from the distance ”Who is that shouting!” he demanded.”It’s me Harry,your brother I’m here to get you back to the village”he yelled.So he quickly got up and ran to him,he was relieved that his brother came to the rescue.Nobody knew who was under the hood,except his brother Harry.
    So they quickly ran to the village as soon as possible but they
    were too late they monster had already came and recked the place down…

  10. My edit:

    Slowly,the Wandered sat on the tall mountain side and muttered words to him creepily.wearily, he fell asleep laying on his stick.Suddenly,a noise furiously spoke and woke up the mysterious man, he woke up frightened and scared as he thought it was a werewolf because it was full moon tonight , he quickly grabbed his ancient staff and ran to the wind.He never went to that mountain side ever again and vanished in the dark.
    THE END

  11. Task 1
    Baffled by the mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival.
    Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2
    Through the bushes, kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed, a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion! it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box, he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode! inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.

  12. TASK 1
    Baffled by the mathematical problem,the professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge,the troll waited patiently for the three goat’s.
    Once a year, the people put on their costumes and parted in the carnival.
    Before the holidays the Year 6 pupils celebrated in their junior school.
    Almost Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

    TASK 2
    Through the bushes,Kian searched and searched through the bushes.He looked under the bushes but he couldn’t find the potion.He sat down with his head in his hands depressed and a drop of water dropped down his cheek.He went to dry the drop but he realised it wasn’t a drop.Confused,he looked up and there it was the magical potion it was hanging in a potion bottle like a jack in a box Kian lept up and grabbed it.As Kian hurriedly ran back,his feet started to hurt and his lung’s felt like they were gonna explode.Inside his hands, is the only thing that can save his village.

    TASK 3
    As he was running,the weather got hotter and hotter.
    below the beating sun, thousands of people were running.
    On their T-shirt, it says a random number which is called out by the judges.

  13. a) Baffled by a the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the misunderstood bridge troll, waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year the people put on their costumes, and partied at the carnival.
    d)Before the holidays the year 6’s had a farewell celebration, at there junior school.
    e) Almost certainly Eva’s team, would win the upcoming sports day
    —————————————————-
    Task 2
    Through the bushes, kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed, a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion! it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box, he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode! inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.
    —————————————————-
    Task 3
    1)On Sunday 23rd of April The Marathon was announced by the government.
    2) As the crowd cheered the runners started working together to do the sprint.
    3)below the beating sun was a load of people running the great marathon.
    4) feeling exhausted the runners helped each other.
    5) without slowing they finished the marathon.

  14. Task 1 ‘place a comma the fronted adverbials in each sentence’
    a) baffled by the mathematical problem the professor felt frustrated.
    baffled, by the mathematical problem the professor felt frustrated.
    b) under the bridge the misunderstood troll waited for his goat friends.
    under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited for his goat friends.
    c) once a year the people put on their costumes and party at the
    carnival.
    once a year, the people put on their costumes and party at the carnival.
    d) before the holidays the year six pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    before the holidays, the year six pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) almost certainly Eva’s team would win on the upcoming sports day.
    almost certainly, Eva’s team would win on the upcoming sports day.

    • That’s good and I look forward to seeing it, but can you please check what I have asked everyone to put in their comment, as this allows us to give immediate feedback if needed. Thank you.

  15. The wanderer
    Some say he possess mystical powered. Some say he is a source of pure evil. Others say he spreads joy to the places he visits. Very few people know who he truly is. The wanderer sat alone on the mountainside , leaning against his staff for support. Slowly but surely, storm clouds were gathering and it was his intention to reach the next village before the first snowflakes fell. He stood as the sky was becoming an even duller and even greyer colour. Without warning, hail came thrashing down violently. Within seconds, lightning struck. Thunder growled like a lion. Suddenly a white blinding light hit him. Lightning. He had been hit by lightning. No one ever knew who he was. It will always remain a mystery…
    Then, out of nowhere, the man woke up. He sat up straight and he was surprised he was in a village. Confused, he asked a man closeby what had happened with a deep voice. The man explained that a farmer had spotted him whilst walking his cows on the mountains and gave him a potion that he made to revive you. The wanderer immediately asked for the farmer. Just like that, a short, strong man appeared. The wanderer thanked him and allowed him to see who he truly was. Anxiously, the wanderer took of his mask. The farmer was shocked. It was his long lost brother…
    THE END

  16. Once Upon a Time there was a man and he was finding somewhere to sleep so The man sat down on the filthy and irregular rock, It seemed as if it was going to begin to snow so he was trying to find warmness and safety and while he was walking he located a village but when he entered the village there was no one there so he went inside one of the houses and went to rest.

    Nevertheless, the following day, there was a strange character standing outside, he was wearing a black obscure hoodie. He was wandering in circles around the house as if he was lost and he was wandering around the house next to the one I waited inside and it gave me shivers down my spine.
    He didn’t discern me until I unexpectedly released a glass ornament that shattered, from a bunk bed, he seemed as if he was locating someone or something so I was operating him and his actions he thought no one was here he thought that a cat just dropped the ornament that I broke shortly before. Furthermore, I wanted to go outside so I did and when I dashed outside he was fleeing off so I watched him and followed him, he turned around at the corner so I went to but then he startlingly disappeared.

      • ok

        Once Upon a Time, there was a man and he was finding somewhere to sleep, so The man sat down on the filthy and irregular rock, It seemed as if it was going to begin to snow, therefore, he was trying to find warmness and safety and while he was walking he located a village, but when he entered the village there was no one there, so he went inside one of the houses and went to rest.

        Nevertheless, the following day, there was a strange character standing outside, he was wearing a black and obscure hoodie. He was wandering in circles around the house as if he was lost and he was wandering around the house next to the one I waited inside and it gave me shivers down my spine.
        He didn’t discern me until I unexpectedly released a glass ornament that shattered, from a bunk bed, he seemed as if he was locating someone or something, so I was operating him and his actions he thought no one was here he thought that a cat just dropped the ornament that I broke shortly before. Furthermore, I wanted to go outside, so I did and when I dashed outside he was fleeing off so I watched him and followed him, he turned around at the edge, so I went to but then he startlingly disappeared.

        This is my correct commas story.

  17. a) Baffled by a the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the misunderstood bridge troll, waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year the people put on their costumes, and partied at the carnival.
    d)Before the holidays the year 6’s had a farewell celebration, at there junior school.
    e) Almost certainly Eva’s team, would win the upcoming sports day

    • Saskia, please have a look at questions b-d again. The comma is not quite right. Also please complete task 2 and 3 in your book and write your story on the blog.

  18. Long ago ther was a wizard called merlin people dont know if hes good or bad so some of them called him unpleaseant and others called him enjoiable when he walkes around.One he climed the mountain at night time he looked at the magnificent stars and he notice some thing it was getting cold and colder he saw it was a teriible storm and clouds surrounding it he knew that he hade to go to his next adventure before the snow crystal fell down.

    • Good effort Falikou. Please check your work. Merlin needs a capital letter as it is a proper noun. Remember to use fronted adverbials. There are examples that you could include above, make sure that you include a comma after the fronted adverbial. Check your spellings for ‘hade’ , ‘climed’ , ‘walkes’ and ‘enjoiable’

  19. A) Baffled by the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.

    B) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.

    C) Once a year, the people put on their costumes and partied their way to the carnival.

    D) Before the holidays, the y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.

    E) Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

    • You have got these correct, but did you miss the big pink boxes asking you to re-write your story? I’d like it if you could write your story of the wanderer on the blog with fronted adverbials please?

  20. The Wanderer.
    Some say he possesses mythical powers. Some say he is a source of pure evil. Others say he spreads joy to the places he visits. Very few people have ever seen what’s beneath the hood. Very few people know who he TRULY is.
    The wanderer sat alone on the mountainside 🏔🗻, leaning against his staff for support. Storm clouds were gathering, and he intended to reach the next village before the first snowflakes fell ❄🌨. He stood on his feet ready to travel forward. He looked around for the last time before he left. The sky began to dribble rain as the clouds began to gather around together. The wanderer as they call him was making began to make his way to the next village before the rain ⛈ heavily or begin to hail. Suddenly, thunder lightning struck.
    In a rush 🏃🏻‍♂️ 💨 , he began to run he then remembered he had a magic staff so he did his magic and of he was to the next village. He said with his staff in his hand, “Abracadabra abrakazoo take me to the next village of Aque. ”
    He was now in the next village. But… In that village, it was snowing. What would happen next…? And who will ever know? Well, that wouldn’t be me!🤷🏻‍♀️

    Without warning ⚠️, all of the people of the village had come out. They were not supposed to see him. Very few people had seen him and the others just treated him as if he was just like those old myths. He was there to spread joy and hope in to everyone’s heart ❣. But they had seen him some took their phones 📱 out to take picture. The new was going to spread. And fast 💨 !!! What was he going to do. He can’t take his hood of because he would reveal his face. But he could pretend that he was someone else and that he was just dressing up as the mysterious myth they had heard 👂 . So, he said what he had said. They then went back into there homes 🏠. With not a single suspicion. He grabbed his staff and twirled it around and said “Abracadabra abracazoo make this village be as happy 😃 as you. Oh magic staff make this happen bring hope and peace ✌️ but also love 💕 to people’s hearts.” What would happen next.
    THE END
    I have completed the tasks.😺😸😁

  21. The man was all alone in the deep dark woods he liked it because he could get up to no good.so he enjoyed the time he had alone but all of a sudden, he got an acing pain in his back he let out a menacing screech and the people, in the village ran away screaming so he ran to the village like a flash. and he once again got an acing pain and screamed he send the people away further so he claimed his territory and moved in and made his very own town.

    • Some nice ideas in here, but without clear full stops and capital letters it isn’t clear if you have used any fronted adverbials or not. Could you try re-writing it please?

    • Good effort Adela. Please remember to use capital letters and full stops when needed. Check through your work again and improve where necessary, thank you.

  22. I have completed all of these tasks in my homework book.

    New story with fronted adverbials :
    Almost unbelievable, the wanderer was still roaming around in the cold and miserable rain . He knew he had to get to the next village and fast he had been tracking his lord for many , many years he had gone missing .Without a sound ,he met a man and they hadn’t met each other before . The wanderer clearly said “ Hello do you know where the happy village is ?”
    “Umm yes it is just 5 minutes away from here “Explained the man .
    Within 5 minutes ,he reached the village and asked some people if he had seen his Lord and they had said that they seen him going towards the mountains . As quick as a flash, he raced towards the mountains and there was only a couple of minutes until sunrise, if they were out at sunrise they would turn ill so they had to reach there land so they can be safe .2 minutes left, until sunrise he was know pushing with all his might he was running as fast as he could , the wanderer could see their land and a man with a black cloak he raced towards the cave and there he was he found his leader and they all celebrated .

    The End!

  23. Old:

    As the snow fell , the wanderer had a rest from travelling. He was very tired . He knew that he had to travel again in the morning. His staff signalled that there was going to be bad weather the next day and the staff was running out of power. The wanderer had no choice but to walk to the next village .

    In the morning the wanderer had woken up early so he could get to the other village before the storm came. About half an hour into the long,hard journey a gush if wind wizzed past him . He knew that the storm was coming ,so he summoned the power of the staff to take him to the next village . He had got there ,but his staff had not. In the portal the staff burned and turned into dust .

    New : As the white, soft snow fell , the wanderer had a rest from travelling. He was very tired . He knew that he had to travel again in the morning. His staff signalled that there was going to be bad weather the next day and the staff was running out of power. The wanderer had no choice but to walk to the next village .

    In the early hours of the morning the wanderer had woken up early so he could get to the other village before the storm came. About half an hour into the long,hard journey a gush if wind wizzed past him . He knew that the storm was coming ,so he summoned the power of the staff to take him to the next village . He had got there ,but his staff had not. In the portal the staff burned and turned into dust.

    A)Baffled by the mathematical problem, the scientist felt frustrated.

    B) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.

    C) Once a year, the people put on their costumes and celebrated at the carnival.

    D) Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their primary school.

    E) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day

    Kian looked through the bushes

    On Sunday 23rd April the London marathon had got underway.
    While the large crown cheered on the brave , determined. The runners ran towards the end of the marathon.
    Behind all the metal barriers the excited fans cheered on.
    On the runners T- Shirt there was a sponsor and a number.
    Feeling exhausted from the running, he was determined to win.
    Without slowing down he sprinted to the end of the marathon.

  24. Through the bushes, kian searched. Under all the rocks, he hunted but couldn’t find anything. Felling depressed, a drop of water fall down his cheek kian reached up and saw it was not a tear. Confused, he looked up and saw exactly what he was looking for the magical potion! It was dangling from a tree, in a bottle kian leapt up and and grabbed it.

  25. Baffled by the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat freinds.
    Once a year, the people put on their costumes and parriex at the carniva.
    Before the holidays, the y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

  26. Task 1 
    a) Baffled by the mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival.
    d) Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2 
    Through the bushes, Kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed, a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion! it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box, he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode! inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.

    • OK, so trying to repost by removing Chloe’s name is just getting silly now isn’t it. At this point Ryan, we are starting to ask ourselves why you even bother logging in if you are just going to copy other people’s work?

    • Ryan, I am very disappointed that you have clearly copied another student’s work on this blog. I know you are capable of doing the work yourself at the high standard we expect. We are doing a lot to support you to help you with your learning and make sure you get the best out of it, so it would be appreciated if you could give your best. I want you to take your time in completing this task to your best ability and then email us your work once completed. I hope to see this at the end of the day. Thank you!

      • So sorry this is on like Ryan copying someone’s work, I don’t know what came over him today. He is redoing it and will send it by the end of the day. Thank you

      • Slowly, day by day passed as the strange man was still sitting on his humble rock not exposing his identification.Roughly,the mountain wind collapsed on to him.Eligently,his purple long coat flew around his body keeping him comfy.Lengend has it that,only people courageous enough to approach was not the species of human but dangerous live creatures as he looked after for them greatly.Every day, all the man would ever do is purchase a limited amount of food to satisfy him. After that, he would just gaze and gather his slimy and over grown beard. Nobody knew, but the man was a human it was just that no one had ever seen his identity. Every quiet day, the town below the windy mountain would send hordes of people with pitchforks, torches and any weapon that they could find; to chase him off the mountain. Most of the time, Some men even called him a witch.Calmly, this mysterious man did not proceed forwards to attack the.Mysteriously, all he did was gaze at the beautiful morning sun and hear the beautiful tweeting of the pleasing wild life.
        The End.

  27. Task 1 
    a) Baffled by the mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival.
    d) Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2 
    Through the bushes, kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed, a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion! it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box, he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode! inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.
    By Chloe 

    • Well at least in this attempt at stealing someone else’s work you kept their name in it, so they can take the credit. However, if you keep crediting the people whose work you steal, you won’t have a very fruitful career in plagiarism will you?

  28. Task 1:
    Baffled By The mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    Under The bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival
    Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at there junior school.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2:
    Through the bushes kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.

  29. Task 1
    Baffled by the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    Once a year, the people put on their costumes and partied at the carnival.
    Before the holidays, the Y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

  30. 1.Baffled by the mathematical problem, the scientist felt frustrated.
    2.Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    3.Once a year, the people put on their costumes and partied at the carnival.
    4.Before the holidays, the y6 pupil had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    5.Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.

    The creepy man on a dark empty mountain sat their looking down below with his powerful staff inhaling the ice cold air it like he was making strong spell and cursing things.

  31. Task 1
    1. Baffled by the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    2. Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    3. Once a year the people put on their costumes and partied at the carnival.
    4. Before the holidays, the Y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their Junior school.
    5. Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

    Task 2.
    Through the bushes, Kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he just couldn’t find the potion, he sat down with his head in his hands. Feeling depressed, a drop of water rolled down his cheek. Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the drop wasn’t a tear. Confused, he looked and saw exactly what he was looking for…the magical potion! It was dangling from a tree in a potion bottle. Like a Jack-in-a -box, Kian leapt up and grabbed it, as Kian hurriedly ran back, his feet hurt and his lungs felt like they might explode. Inside his hands he held the one thing that could save everyone in his village.

  32. Task 1 💛
    Baffled by the mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival.
    Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2 💚
    Through the bushes, kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion . He sat down with his head in his hand . Feeling depressed, a drop of water fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion! it was dangling from a tree in a bottle. Like a jack in a box, he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt and lungs felt like they might explode! inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.
    By Chloe 💙

  33. It was a cold stormy day,
    people say that theirs a myth strolling around are village and people say that no one should sit next to him while he is singing laaaaaaaaaaaaaa or you will be talking to him forever and when you come back you will look like him and everone is going to be scared.

    • Great Sahar, well done! Please email your completed work to us. Can you share some of the fronted adverbials you have used on the blog please.

  34. 1)On Sunday 23rd of April The Marathon was announced by the government.
    2) As the crowd cheered the runners 🏃‍♀️ started working together to do the sprint.
    3)below the beating sun was a load of people running the great marathon.
    4) feeling exhausted 😩 the runners helped eachother.
    5) without slowing they finished the marathon.
    6)on there T-shirt was their name and number for the marathon.

        • I’m Spending More time on my English blog now. I’ve corrected these questions.
          3)Below The beating sun the great Humans Were running the marathon greatly.
          4)Feeling Exhausted 😩 the runners thought to theirselves and helped others who were feeling exhausted too.
          5) Without Slowing The Runners Very Happily finished the marathon.
          6) On there t-shirts were there numbers and names for the crowd to see their family members.

  35. Baffled by the mathematical problem, the profesors felt frustrated.
    b) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat freinds.
    c) Once a year, the people put on their costumes and partied at the carnival.
    d) Before the holidays, the y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day

    2)

    3 On Sunday 23rd, April the London marathon started
    While the people were running, the crowd was cheering.
    Behind the metal barriers, were hundreds of people.
    On their t-shirts, were numbers.
    Feeling exhausted, of running he still carried on
    Without slowing, he ran fast.

    • The man sat on the ground the wind whistling his legs shaking it felt so cold it started snowing. He stood up and walk. After a while he sees a village and Cary’s on walking when he reaches the village he saw a house with no one in so he went in a lived their untill he sees a monster and runs away.

  36. Task 1:
    Baffled By The mathematical problem,The professor felt frustrated.
    Under The bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat 🐐 friends.
    Once a year, the people put on there costumes and partied at the carnival 🎡
    Before the holidays, the year 6 pupils had a farewell celebration 🎉 at there junior school 🏫.
    Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day.
    Task 2:
    Through the bushes kian searched and searched. Under all of the rocks, he hunted but he couldn’t find the potion 🧪. He sat down with his head in his hand 🖐. Feeling depressed 😞 a drop of water 💧 fell down his cheek.
    Kian reached up to dry his eyes 👀 and realised the water was not a tear.
    Confused he looked up and the looked up and seen what exactly he was looking for. The magical potion 🧪 it was dangling from a tree 🌲 in a bottle. Like a jack in a box 📦 he leapt up to grab it. He hurriedly ran and his feet hurt 🤕 and lungs felt like they might explode inside his hand he was holding something that could save his village.

  37. Story before:
    The ground soon became white From the snow flakes.
    “Right..“ he said. “ I have to start walking to the next village!” He soon got up and started trampleing over mountains. He got to the summit of the mountain when … he tripped on a rock and nearly fell of a cliff but he managed to hang on. He climbed around the mountain and he saw the village. “ there it is” he said as he walked towards it.

    The ground soon became a light , fluffy white from the iridescent, cold snow flakes.
    “Right…” he said in a mysterious voice. “ I have to start walking to the next village before I get covered in these so called ‘snow flakes’ .”
    He soon got up and started trampling over the mountains . He soon got to the summit… of the mountain when he tripped and his staff fell of the mountain to its unpleasant death. “NO” he said but it was to late.
    He saw the village over the hill and he went to wards it. The village looked suprisingly damaged….. and all of the people look like they were in terror and trouble. “Right he said” as he got his staff and charged to the deadly village.

    • Story before:
      The ground soon became white From the snow flakes.
      “Right..“ he said. “ I have to start walking to the next village!” He soon got up and started trampleing over mountains. He got to the summit of the mountain when … he tripped on a rock and nearly fell of a cliff but he managed to hang on. He climbed around the mountain and he saw the village. “ there it is” he said as he walked towards it.
      _________________________ new story
      The ground soon became a light , fluffy white from the iridescent, cold snow flakes.
      “Right…” he said in a mysterious voice. “ I have to start walking to the next village before I get covered in these so called ‘snow flakes’ .”
      He soon got up and started trampling over the mountains . He soon got to the summit… of the mountain when he tripped and his staff fell of the mountain to its unpleasant death. “NO” he said but it was to late.
      He saw the village over the hill and he went to wards it. The village looked suprisingly damaged….. and all of the people look like they were in terror and trouble. “Right he said” as he got his staff and charged to the deadly village.

  38. 1 a) Baffled by the mathematical problem, the scientist felt frustrated.
    b) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat freinds.
    c) Once a year, the people put on their costumes and parriex at the carnival.
    d) Before the holidays, the y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win for sports day
    2 Through the bushes. Under all if the rocks. Feeling depressed. Confused he looked up. Inside his hands.
    3 On Sunday 23rd, April the marathon started.
    While the crowd, cheered they all ran
    Behind the metal barriers, were hundreds of people.
    On their t-shirts, we’re numbers.
    Feeling exhausted, he carried on.
    Without slowing, he sprinted.
    4 The mans staff, gave him amazing powers as he stood on the massive rocky mountain. His spells, had to be cast on the same mountain. The mountain he cast spells on, was filled with creatures. Many were friendly. But some, would eat you when you came close enough.

    • Oliwier, good try but please complete all of task 2 and 3 in your book and email it. Task 3 see if you can link your sentences and expand them. Task 4 can you expand on this story.

  39. The man sat quickly on to the jagged rock. He didn’t dare to put down his staff as he had to stay alert . The wander had slayed dragons and is all mighty but had never faced this…
    Slowly, his heart beated faster as it came closer to dawn . Today was the eclipse that could end the world only it was there to stop it . Nobody else had known but this morning was going to change everything

  40. Task 1
    a) Baffled by the mathematical problem, the professor felt frustrated.
    b) Under the bridge, the misunderstood troll waited patiently for his goat friends.
    c) Once a year, the people put on their costumes and partied at the carnival.
    d) Befor the holidays, the Y6 pupils had a farewell celebration at their junior school.
    e) Almost certainly, Eva’s team would win the upcoming sports day.

  41. In the winter, there was a wired man sitting in the cold I went outside with two big blankets and gave the man one or the blankets it was big ,purple.

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