Year 5: Wednesday 17th June: Home Learning: English

Today, you are going to recap how to use a relative clause. You have X tasks to comeplete.

BLOG COMMENT: REWRITE YOUR STORY FROM YESTERDAY IN THE COMMENTS!

What is a relative clause? Read the slides below to help you recap:

Watch the 3 videos and read the information on this website to help: https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/zkcd7sg (You don’t need to complete the tasks on here, as there are tasks on the blog below.)

Now read the slides.

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Task 1

There are 2 simple sentences on the sheet. You need to write these as 1 sentence making the second sentence into a relative clause. The sheet helps you by telling you which relative pronoun to use.

Task 2

Now you need to add a relative clause at the end of a sentence. You need to work out what subject is being referred to, for example: in the first sentence Australia is the subject of the relative clause. (If you don’t know who wrote Jayne Eyre or you don’t know any other facts about it, google it!)

Task 3

Task 3 is now reversing the process. You must change these sentences with relative clauses into 2 simple sentences.

Task 4

Go back to the story about the Storm Troopers you wrote yesterday. I would like you to edit this and find 2 nouns where you can add extra details about them and make a relative clause. (If you have not completed yesterdays task you must go back and do this first).

EG: The Storm Trooper, who could not aim his laser blaster accurately, missed the Jedi Knight.

Write your edited story with your relative clause in your blog comment.

80 thoughts on “Year 5: Wednesday 17th June: Home Learning: English

  1. A beautiful,bright day and a fight commenced. The weather changed from beautifully,bright warm🌤to a gloomy,scary night with lightning. 🌩But who cares as they wanted the fight to go on,which was not safe as lightning could of really hurt them. ⛈

    As the weather changed,which was alot harder to fight, more lightning struck.🌩 They were stubborn and wanted to not risk there life with a battle but then with lightning. They started to fight and in the thunder and lightning and the jedi saw that they could have more power so they started to take control. ⚔

    More laser and bombs were thrown and the more people were injured they knew they could not let them of lightly. The fighters,who were all angry,got up and started to fight again. They gained more and more power. But it took a little change.

    They thought they became kings of the battle and thought they won👑.
    But did they?

  2. Task 4
    Looking like a world war , they gathered there fighting equipment. This leader (who was in charge of the Jedi group) said ‘Charge !’ This meant it was time to fight . Swiping , slashing , slicing The storm troopers , who were undefeatable were now winning so far . Suddenly , aircrafts were zapping lasers looking like lighting through the aqua , cloudy sky .

    However, The storm troopers leader , who had a grenade with him through it on the ground . The storm troopers knew what it was . As fast as they could , the storm troopers ran and BOOM!! All bodies lying on the floor like zombies . The storm troopers leader told the storm troopers to gather on their ship and never return .

  3. The long days go past as the storm troopers guarded the old creaky house for any enemies. The blue cloudy sky was roasting with magnificent aircrafts flying to space.
    Aircrafts landed on the rocky bumpy runway and carefuly landed.
    Soon the Air was clear of Aircrafts as they all when up.

  4. The invasion had begun faced upon the white cloud stormtroopers the jedi knew they had to act quickly…
    They were hurrying threw the cloudy air it was forced to go slowly they were threw the sky but no one new where they were going. The people were hurrying threw the blaze of Shazam or the the goodness of the power in the freezing cold rain like a shower in the the bath tub but did little people know that they were making a whole different world for people to live….

  5. The Invasion begun with being surrounded by white storms. The jedi knew exactly what to do and how to act. The invasion begun with dangerous fighting and being represented with white flags. The jedi was thinking really hard how to stop the fighting. Suddenly, they started fighting even more ( There were more than 1 humans killed by the storm and fighting).
    With the STORM there was light too.

    • With the storm was with lightning too.
      The lightning was so dangerous that it hit 3 people on one time.
      They were fighting in the rain. They got all wet like having a shower and getting wet wet wet.

  6. I have done ✅ task 1 in my book

    Task 2
    1)Australia is a very large country, where kangaroos live.
    2)’Jane Eyre’ is a famous English novel, which is written by Charlotte Bronte.
    3)I’m going to high school next year, when the summer holiday is over.
    4)Tigers’ fur is patterned in stripes, which helps them to camouflage.
    5)Harry looks just like his dad, whose Prince Charles.

    Task 3
    1)Joseph never looks smart for school.Who has always got messy hair.
    2)My cousins live in the USA.It is a long way to go for a visit.
    3)These three boys can share the science prize.They have worked so well on their project.
    4)The Peak District is a national park in Derbyshire.Many people like to go on holiday there.

  7. The invasion had begun. Faced with row upon of white, clad storm troopers, the Jedi knew they had to act quickly…

    Crash! The plane crashed into the base. The armoured, dangerous soldiers, who fled the destroyed base, ran into battle. The Jedi fled the base and ran to battle. They fought the storm troopers. They failed. They needed to evacuate so they stole a ship and fled.

    “What are we going to do said a member of the Jedi.”
    “We have to keep fighting said the leader, Yoda.”
    They found a abandoned, dusty base, which had a lot of health kits and weapons. They took everything and returned to the fight. With some weapons they defeated the storm troopers. Then the leader of the enemies showed up. Darth Vader and his son Luke was on the Jedi team.

    Him and his son fought. The Jedi was behind Darth Vader and struck his back. Then Luke hit him in the face and they won.

    • Aamir good to see today you have included one relative clause in your story. Did you read my feed back on yesterdays work? if not please do and edit your work.

  8. The invasion had begun surrounding us was stormtroopers aiming fire at us, we froze in terror, we had started a war. I called my army but all I could hear was the sound of my heart thumping inside of my chest.
    When my crew had arrived they froze and watched as the stormtroopers descended we were amazed by…wait what is that holding that device it is another stormtrooper the last one. The stormtrooper stood for a second in thought then he strided towards us with his robotic arms still holding the device. Why did he do this?

    • Well done, Anis. An interesting start to your story! Remember to include relative clauses and commas. Where do you think in your story could you include these? I like that you left the reader with a rhetorical question adding more suspense!

  9. Story starter:
    The invasion had begun . Faced with row upon row of white-clad storm troopers, the Jedi knew they had to act quickly . Otherwise the storm troopers would attack there buildings and living area . “ We need to run back to our office and find out what we can use to win victory !” Suggested Jedi .So they all ran back to the office trying to find something that they can use.Meanwhile, the storm troopers were stomping towards them almost getting surrounded . At the office they were searching all of the draws and cupboards to defeat the troopers . “I got it ,a potion that defeats the troopers all we have to do is spray it onto the floor in the direction there coming . Then they go boom! “Explained Jedi .
    So that’s what they used ,different glass bottles to spray it ,all in cars racing towards the road going as fast as they can they sprayed the potion everywhere. The storm troopers slipped and they all fell apart and didn’t go boom! So Jedi’s plan was wrong ,but in the other hand they were free from the storm troopers and lived happily ever after .
    THE END

    • new
      The Jedi leader was struggling with a plan to attack the Sith . He sent Anakin and Obi-Wan-Kenobi to fight the stormtroopers who had no reason to interrupt, the normal , kind life of the civilians. Kylo Ren led a group of stormtroopers into the Jedi base trying to take over the planet . As the stormtroopers made their way to the Jedi’s base. Obi-Wan-Kenobi took out half the stormtroopers , Anakin took out the other half , but then they had to face Kylo Ren .
      When the 3 men fought each other ,their lightsabers glowed , Kylo Ren took Anakin down and looked to finish him off but Obi – Wan -Kenobi intervened and blocked the lightsaber with his lightsaber.
      The 2 fought on as Anakin recovered from the shot to his leg, soon Anakin recovered to join his mentor, in the battle to defeat their rival .
      Anakin then took revenge on Kylo Ren and took him down and finished him off ,later on at the Sith base , they treated Kylo ,and healed him.
      New story:
      The Jedi leader, who was a very clever man, was struggling with a plan to defend the Jedi base. He sent the brave yet young Anakin and Obi-Wan-Kenobi to fight the stormtroopers who had no reason to interrupt, the normal , kind life of the civilians. Kylo Ren led a group of stormtroopers into the Jedi base trying to take over the planet . As the stormtroopers made their way to the Jedi’s base. Obi-Wan-Kenobi took out half the stormtroopers , Anakin took out the other half , but then they had to face Kylo Ren .
      When the 3 men fought each other ,their lightsabers glowed , Kylo Ren took Anakin down and looked to finish him off but Obi – Wan -Kenobi intervened and blocked the lightsaber with his lightsaber.
      The 2 fought on as Anakin recovered from the shot to his leg, soon Anakin recovered to join his mentor, in the battle to defeat their rival .
      Anakin then took revenge on Kylo Ren and took him down and finished him off ,later on at the Sith base , they treated Kylo ,and healed him.

  10. It was approaching night fall on Coruscant . When the civilians heard a low humming ; which they ignored until it got louder and louder in the blink of and eye a star destroyer leaped out of hyper space then another one and then another one until and entire fleet of them rested on Coruscant’s atmosphere. The civilians ran. The fleet of Coruscant took off securing the battle up in the air. but the ground assault came hundreds of storm troopers came of off the ships flooding into the great planet. Purge troopers the worst of them all came. There were not a lot of Jedi left so General Leia Organa ( Luke’s sister) and her Rebels joined the fight. The remaining Jedi assured the Padawan to run but they knew they could not win the fight without them. Meanwhile, up in the air Poe Dameron lead the force of X wings, Y wings and A wings. Down on the ground, purge troopers advanced on the Jedi and their Padawan taking them down. When the battle looked bad the Second Sister Inquisitor came to the battle, Brandishing her double – blade spinning light saber. The battle lasted hours but both forces were damaged enough and none of them could risk to lose so once the sun set once again the Galactic Empire fled the fight. At the end Coruscant had to rebuild the big city.

    • Some great ideas Aboubakar, well done.
      The ending could be made more exciting. How can you improve this further to fully engage the reader?

  11. The invasion had begun. Faced row upon row of white – clad storm troopers, the Jedi knew they had to act quickly. It was now or never. The Jedi, who were experienced galactic warriors, were hunting in pairs. Suddenly, there was a BANG as a ship came crashing down. Like went on in search of the evil Lord. Darth Vader. He had found it. He had found the Sith’s lair. Just like that, Luke found Darth Vader. Luke reached for his emerald, green light saber and lunged at the dark Lord. However, Darth Vader, who had quick reflexes dodged the attack. It was his turn. Luke also dodged his attack.Darth Vader had a lapse of concentration. It was Luke’s chance. Darth Vader got a light saber to the chest. He was defeated. Luke was victorious. Without warning, Darth Vader took of his mask. After all these years , the truth had been revealed…

  12. I did all the tasks and my mum will send a picture of them soon.
    Edited story:
    The sky was bright and blue and the day was sunny too. Quick buzzing, space ships, who were ready to start a war, were flying through the white, fluffy clouds. Some of them landed smoothly onto the long, white runway, which trembled underneath them. The doors opened, and some angry, armed troops, who were invading the planet, started marching out. The ground, which couldn’t carry all the pressure anymore, started shaking, and the large spacious buildings did too.

    • Is who the right relative clause Velin? That’s a good effort; but remember you would use “who” if it was a person, not a thing… think of a more appropriate relative clause for the space ships 👍🏽

  13. All of a sudden siren was ringing because and invasion had begun. The vile , vicious. storm trooper was firing there blasting there guns but the Jedis were dogging their lasers.Then the darkness silts dark Vader battles the Jedi knight. The fight was not over dark Vader won . In the blink of an eye , Luke comes in he fight his father dark Vader . The lightsaber was close “Luke come to the dark side “said dark Vader
    “No dad I never come to the dark side “shouted Luke
    Luke, who kick his father lightsaber, sliced his father arm off.

    • Good effort Kiyan and well done for giving this a try.
      So that your starting sentence makes more sense, include ‘the’ or “Sirens were ringing”. Could you up-level this perhaps?
      Also, make sure you use the correct ‘there/their/they’re’, as you have used the incorrect one.
      Please go back and make changes for improvement, then comment the improved version on the blog, thank you!

  14. where there are forest fires
    which wrote novels
    I’m 16
    helps them camouflage
    a celebrity
    Joeseph who has messy hair is scruffy for school
    my y5 teacher comes from France.
    they were ready to charge and they got there fists prepared

  15. It was a humid day but surprisingly, an invasion had come. A lot of stormtroopers lined up outside Jedi base. All of a sudden, they were starting to emerge around the whole area. The stormtroopers who were very evil and corrupt, they advanced towards the base without stopping. Some of them were demolishing parts of the city to make them surrender. The stormtroopers found it challenging to make the Jedi troopers to Yield But they carried on they were fighting and they were starting to surrender themselves and they were trying soo hard but in the end, it was a total defeat!

    • Great effort Hishaam, well done! :)
      The last sentence is very long. I would suggest either using a comma and conjunctions or splitting the sentence into two, creating a separate sentence.

  16. The invasion had begun. Faced with row upon row of white clad storm troopers, the Jedi knew they had to act quickly to save their lives the storm trooopers ran and scared the whole city and police were shooting them and were dodging every single bullet that was fired.

  17. The invasion had begun.All of a sudden, faced with row upon row of white clad Storm troopers, the Jedi had to act fast as they were running out of time.Slowly,day by day.Hour by hour. They had run out of ideas and had nothing else to do but try to land on the runway as it was their only option left. Suddenly, an idea 💡 struck into the jedi’s mind the only way to land on the runway was to make them think they are coming on it. With straight up thinking, the Jedi took a Decoy fighter jet and landed it on the runway and them lined up behind it.Without thinking twice,The white clad of menacing Storm troopers shot the fighter jet. Then whilst the white clad were reloading the fighter jets to action and and destroyed the white army of Storm troopers. And just like that the galaxy🌌 was saved once again. The End.

    • This is a really good effort Ryan, well done!
      Please go back and read over what you have wrote, making improvements. Some parts of your writing can be up-levelled.
      Challenge:
      Use some more adverbs.

  18. The invasion had begun who Faced with row upon row of white storm troopers. The Jedi knew they had to act quickly to save their lives. Quietly the worried Jedi whispered “lets use our plan”. Suddenly the white cloud turned into grey and the stormy clouds gathered together and bright blue light, Bang! The aircraft started flying around firing and storm trooper came out. Jedi used the back up plan where he sprayed his gas while the Jedi had a mask on. Storm troopers fainted while the aircraft crashed into pieces.

    • Hi Rehaan,
      I am glad you have given this a go and you have some good ideas. However, you have not used many story writing features, such as adverbs and better adjectives. Go through your work and think of how you can up-level some of your writing. Also, your starting seems very similar to another student’s. Please come up with your own ideas and then share your work with us. Thank you!

  19. The sky was blue and the fluffy clouds made it white. The blue,enormous spaceships blasted through the sky. Suddenly, the massive door opens and millions of armed storm troopers come out. They were prepared for the last battle.when the storm troopers kept on looking more serious they thought the Jedi would give up and lose the fight. But the Jedi was clever and confident so they believed in them self and they also knew what to do.

    Australia is a very large country where you can find a lot of diversity.
    ‘Jayne Eyre’ is a English novel which is very famous.
    I’m going to high school next year when I pass.
    Tigers fur are patterned with stripes which let’s them camouflage.
    Harry look’s just like his dad whose hair is blonde.

    TASK 3
    Joseph who always has messy hair. Never looks good.
    My cousins are in usa its a long way.
    These three have worked good they can take the prize.
    The peek district where a lot of people are is called a park in Derbyshire
    my Y 5 teacher is called madame merlot.

    • Your Y5 teacher is called Madame Merlot?! That’s a strange name for me! Good work Ryan you have tried really hard with this and I can tell from your expanded noun phrases and fronted adverbials. Could you include a relative clause in your story? Well done :)

  20. Task1:

    1) Chocolate which contains feel good chemicals. Chocolate originated in South America.

    2) The Queen who is one of the richest women in the world. She owns several castles

    3) Struggling

    4) At 8 O’Clock last night when I went to bed. I had finished my homework then.

    5) Phillip Pullman who is my favourite author. Wrote clockwork

    Relative Clauses are extra words that add on a sentence to describe who they are , where did they come from , what are they those things to describe the personality.

  21. 👻Task 3👻

    1)Joseph never looks smart for school.Who has always got messy hair.

    2)My cousins live in the USA.It is a long way to go for a visit.

    3)These three boys can share the science prize.They have worked so well on their project.

    4)The Peak District is a national park in Derbyshire.Many people like to go on holiday there.

  22. Old story:
    The Jedi leader was struggling with a plan to attack the Sith . He sent Anakin and Obi-Wan-Kenobi to fight the stormtroopers who had no reason to interrupt, the normal , kind life of the civilians. Kylo Ren led a group of stormtroopers into the Jedi base trying to take over the planet . As the stormtroopers made their way to the Jedi’s base. Obi-Wan-Kenobi took out half the stormtroopers , Anakin took out the other half , but then they had to face Kylo Ren .
    When the 3 men fought each other ,their lightsabers glowed , Kylo Ren took Anakin down and looked to finish him off but Obi – Wan -Kenobi intervened and blocked the lightsaber with his lightsaber.
    The 2 fought on as Anakin recovered from the shot to his leg, soon Anakin recovered to join his mentor, in the battle to defeat their rival .
    Anakin then took revenge on Kylo Ren and took him down and finished him off ,later on at the Sith base , they treated Kylo ,and healed him.

    New story:

    The Jedi leader, who was a very clever man, was struggling with a plan to defend the Jedi base. He sent the brave yet young Anakin and Obi-Wan-Kenobi to fight the stormtroopers who had no reason to interrupt, the normal , kind life of the civilians. Kylo Ren led a group of stormtroopers into the Jedi base trying to take over the planet . As the stormtroopers made their way to the Jedi’s base. Obi-Wan-Kenobi took out half the stormtroopers , Anakin took out the other half , but then they had to face Kylo Ren .
    When the 3 men fought each other ,their lightsabers glowed , Kylo Ren took Anakin down and looked to finish him off but Obi – Wan -Kenobi intervened and blocked the lightsaber with his lightsaber.
    The 2 fought on as Anakin recovered from the shot to his leg, soon Anakin recovered to join his mentor, in the battle to defeat their rival .
    Anakin then took revenge on Kylo Ren and took him down and finished him off ,later on at the Sith base , they treated Kylo ,and healed him.

  23. The invasion had begun. Faced upon with row upon row of white-clad stormtroopers the Jedi knew they had to act quickly…

    The Jedi knew that there was going to be an invasion and a battle, which only one could win. The thing is he didn’t know when it was going to happen. Having to act quickly, he called all his friend to help him. In his surprise, they knew about the invasion as it struck their base first while Jedi went to go for a walk. So, they decided to wait behind the bin to hide but also help him fight them off when they came.

    They had fought off all of the stormtroopers and were now ready to help their friend, who had once helped him before. The stormtroopers, who were now really getting annoyed now, began to yell and fight. R2-D2, Tarrful and all his other friends came to help him and they all fought together. What would happen next? I DO NOT KNOW! SO WHO WILL KNOW!? 😕🤷🏻‍♂️🤷🏻‍♀️
    THE END!!!👧🏻😊
    I have done the other tasks.

    • An interesting story Tahseen but it moved very quickly. They waited behind a bin to help them fight off all the stormtroopers, but then almost immediately they had fought them all off! As if it was no big deal whatsoever! A whole army of stormtroopers, just like that!? Surely you could have described it in more detail!? The excitement, the noise, the chaos of the battle?

  24. The invasion had begun. Faced with row upon row of white 🏳️ clad storm ⛈ troopers, the Jedi knew he had to act quickly… As more and more storm troopers shot 💥at his aircraft, the Jedi became more and more powerful. Using lasers and ships, the battle between the two forces became more ferocious. Suddenly, a large CRASH 💥came from the side of his ship! He felt the ship tumble and fall to the ground, *soaring quickly down like a tornado* . The Jedi escaped out of the ship, which had now caught fire *and was smoking like a barbecue* 🔥. Storm ⛈ troopers crowded around him *their masks like evil demons*, and he suddenly realised; he had to fight them by himself. ⚔️
    By Chloe ✨💜
    (The edited parts are in asterisks *)
    I didn’t really know how I could make this better (trying not to boast or anything 😅)

  25. The Jedi’s Were prepared for the big war . So They came out of the house. BANG! The building had shedded into pieces Like a Snake. They Quickly jumped into There aircrafts suddenly SHOTS FIRED! 🔥 At the dark side. millions of stormtroopers had fell to the ground and died. The Jedi landed on the runway and took cover from them. Suddenly A Meteor Had Fell Into there Area….
    Bang! Suddenly a Jedi Woke up……
    It Was the healer he quickly healed everyone.
    Days Passed On They created a new base for them. It was well protected.

    I

    • Callum You have not included relative clause to your story. Here’s an example to use relative clause in one of your sentences. Please fill in the gaps.
      Suddenly, a meteor, which ………., fell into the …..,…..area.

  26. ☠️Task 2☠️

    1)Australia is a very large country, where kangaroos live.

    2)’Jane Eyre’ is a famous English novel, which is written by Charlotte Bronte.

    3)I’m going to high school next year, when the summer holiday is over.

    4)Tigers’ fur is patterned in stripes, which helps them to camouflage.

    5)Harry looks just like his dad, whose Prince Charles.

  27. I have completed task 1,2and 3 in my homework book and will email it in later.

    Story from yesterday.+relative clauses :
    The invasion had begun . Faced with a row upon of white -clad storm troopers the Jedi had to act quickly. Otherwise,the storm troopers would attack there buildings and living area . “We need to run back to our office and fast ,which will let us destroy the troopers.We have to find a weapon or something to destroy the troopers.” Suggested Master Jedi.So they all ran back to the office trying to find something that they can use.Meanwhile,the storm troopers ,who were stomping towards their direction ,could now be heard from a mile away this means they were getting closer and almost getting surrounded… Over at the office they were still looking everywhere in cupboards and draws .” I got it a magical potion that defeats the troopers all we have to do is spray it onto the floor in the direction that there coming in . Then they go boom! So that’s what they used different glass bottles to spray it , all racing in cars towards the road going as fast as they can they sprayed the potion everywhere. The storm troopers slipped and fell apart but didn’t go boom! So Jedi’s plan was wrong but in the other hand they were free from any storm troopers and lived happily ever after .
    THE END !
    I have added some relative clauses into the story.

  28. Oliwier, this is good, is it your edited story? The task for today is to edit your story and include a relative clause. Please email your completed work in.

  29. Task 3:
    Joseph never looks smart for school has always got messy hair.
    My Cousins live in the USA which is a long way to go.
    These Three boys can share the science 🧬 prize because they worked hard on there project.
    The Peak District Where people like to go on holiday is a park.
    My yr5 teacher comes from France Name is Madame Merlote

  30. 😡Task 1😡

    1)Chocolate, which originated in South America, contains feel good chemicals.

    2)The Queen, who owns several castles, is one of the richest women in the world.

    3)Australia, where kangaroos come from, have many unusual animals.

    4)At 8 o’clock, when I had finished my homework, I went to bed.

    5)Phillip Pullman, who wrote Clockwork, is my favourite writer.

  31. Task 2:
    Australia Is A Very large country, Where Koalas 🐨 Come from
    Jane Eyre Is a Famous British Novel, Which Is Written by Charlotte Brontë
    I’m Going to High School Next Year, When Coronavirus Ends.
    Tigers Fur Is Patterned, Which Helps Them Camouflage.
    Harry Looks Just Like His Dad, Whose Prince Charles

  32. Task 1:
    Chocolate, That Originated in South America, Contains feel good chemicals.
    The Queen, She Owns Several Castles, And is one of the richest women in the world.
    Australia, Kangaroos come from here, And Has Many unusual animals.
    At 8 o’clock, I Have Finished my homework then, I Went To Bed.
    Phillip Pullman, He wrote Clockwork, Is My Favourite.

  33. Explanation
    Relative clauses come directly after the noun they are referring to. This might be at the end of a sentence or embedded into the middle of a sentence. If embedded into the middle of a sentence, the relative clause is usually surrounded by commas.

    I have done task 2.

  34. The fight had begun. The stormtroopers were ready to fight. Thousands of dreadful stormtroopers were lined up in front of the Jedi base. The faceless stormtroopers were walking closer to the Jedi base trying to make the Jedis surrender but what they didn’t realise was that the clever Jedis were behind them. After winning the fight the Jedis took the defeated stormtroopers inside and made copies of the stormtroopers so they can go undercover…

    • Please write your edited story with relative clauses, Ryan. This needs to be completed on the blog. I look forward to seeing this. Please email all completed work in. Thank you.

  35. Story from yesterday!
    The invasion had begun
    Faced with row upon row of white – clad storm racers. The Jedi new they had to act quickly. The Jedi ran to there base like their lives depended on it. They quickly found their bomb blower On a car and they flew up to The storm racers and the Jedi tried to blow a ship up he pressed the button and a bomb flew out he drove away quickly but the clad racer’s fate had
    .already been decided .the bomb hit his car and blew him up.
    Story now:
    This was the moment they were dreading..
    The invasion had begun.
    Faced with row upon row of white – clad storm racers. The Jedi new they has to act quickly

    • Sorry I posted that 😳
      There lives depended on this very move they were about to make…..
      They found their bomb blower and they took their blue invisible jet and flew it up to the sky then when they we’re To the enimy ships they became uninvisible and caught them off gaurd he shot the bomb which landed in the middle Enimys hand (literally) the Jedi flew away fast the pun from behind them they heard a triumphant BOOOOOOMMM.

  36. The invasion had begun. Thousands of stormtroopers lined up in front of the Jedi base. The Jedi who didnt know about the invasion, had to act fast. The stormtroopers started marching up to the base ordering the Jedi to surrender. The
    clueless stormtroopers didn’t see that behind them were hundreds of Jedi troopers . Then out of now two unknown figures holding Green and blue lightsabers disarmed the stormtroopers. They took the stormtroopers inside and let them go keeping the weapons. Next day the smart and smeaky Jedi made two exact copies of stormtrooper uniforms to go undercover…

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