Year 5: Wednesday 24th June: Home Learning: English

Good Morning Year 5,

Today is your SpAG day. You are going to be revising the 3 main ways to use apostrophes.

COMPLETE TASK 4 ON YOUR BLOG COMMENT PLEASE

Contractions

You can use apostrophes to show that you have omitted (left out) some letters when you are joining words together.

Example

You can join the words ‘you’ and ‘are’ together:

  • You + are = you’re

The apostrophe takes the place of the removed letters. In this example, the letter ‘a’.

Sometimes, you will need to rearrange the letters a bit when you contract the words.

Example

  • Will + not = won’t

Using contractions like these makes your writing easier to read and more informal.

Next, learn how apostrophes are used for possession by watching this video clip.

Possessive apostrophe

An apostrophe can be used to show that one thing belongs to (or is connected to) something. This is called a possessive apostrophe.

Take a look at some examples

Singular possession – when something belongs to only one person/thing.

Example – The cat’s tail was fluffy.

Cat is a singular noun so you need to add an apostrophe and ‘s’ to show that the tail belongs to the cat.

Example – Charles’ cat was naughty.

Charles is a singular noun that ends in an ‘s’, so you only need to add an apostrophe to show that the cat belongs to Charles.

Plural possession 

Plural possession is when something belongs to more than one person/thing.

Example – The brothers’ feet were muddy.

Brothers is a plural noun that ends in an ‘s’, so you don’t add another ‘s’ after your apostrophe. You can just add an apostrophe to show the feet belong to the brothers.

Example – The children’s toys were broken.

Children is a plural noun but it doesn’t end with an ‘s’ so you need to add an apostrophe and ‘s’ to show that the toys belong to the children.

Watch the video’s here to help you: https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/zdsthbk

YOU DO NOT NEED TO COMPLETE THE TASKS ON THIS WEBSITE AS I HAVE SET SOME BELOW.

Task 1: contractions

Contract these words by using an apostrophe and use them in a sentence.

Task 2

Someone has put the apostrophe in the wrong place. Can you correct it?

Task 3

These nouns only represent 1 person, animal or thing. You need to make the noun into more than 1, then you need to add an apostrophe to show possession. Look carefully at the example.

Task 4

Write this on your blog comment please.

Rewrite your story from yesterday with an example of each of these:

– contraction with an apostrophe
– single possession with an apostrophe
– plural possession with an apostrophe

95 thoughts on “Year 5: Wednesday 24th June: Home Learning: English

  1. Task 4
    All of a sudden she felt alive . Tonight was going to be a night to remember for sure . On the other hand , Someone’s eyes were watching Bella with her companion Mumbles ( Bella’s cat ). Everywhere and anywhere she went the mysterious person watched Bella with her magical fingers .

    Once Bella got home , her parents’ stood looking worried and angry .
    Disappointed Bella’s Mum said “, Where have you been Bella ?”.
    ” Ummmmm I “, replied Bella .
    ” Yes TELL US “, Crossly said Bella’s Dad .
    ” I don’t like Mumbles . I took him for a walk because he kept meowing and scratching me “, lied Bella .
    ” Well you need to get to bed and have a good night rest because tommorow is school “, answered Bella’s Mum .
    Replying Bella annoyed “, OK “.

    As fast as she could , Bella’s teeth were brushed and she hoped into bed .The person , who had been watching her earlier was watching her again through the window and did some kind of evil , powerful and strong witch spell on Bella’s magic fingers that wouldn’t let Bella perform any magic again .

    The next morning , Bella tried to use magic to make her bed but instead a hole was in the bed . Bella was confused . Next , she tried to use magic to put on her school uniform . Her uniform had a hole inside . She was angry . She knew someone had taken over her powers but who ?

    • This is good work Lakesha, but it is incredibly late at night. I would suggest you do your work earlier and be in bed at this sort of time. Remember we need to stay healthy at the moment and sleep is a big part of that. Stay safe :D

  2. Bella’s Voice let out some random words and wings appeared. She was flying. Her cat jumped on to her arms and they went exploring. While they were in the air they saw a beacon of light. Bella’s wings flew over and she dropped her wings on the hard, rocky ground. They saw an orb on a pedestal. Bella had the urge took it off and an alarm rang. She heard a crowd of banging footsteps. A security guard said ’’Hey kid, you’re not supposed to be here. Go away.” Bella picked up her wings and flew off with her cat.
    Before she headed off Bella’s curiosity made her secretly hide behind the base and listen to the guard talking. ”Phew, we were close to getting busted. I hope that kid doesn’t return. No one knows that the orb is a jewel that we stole. Boss will not be happy if we get busted.
    Little did they know that Bella recorded the whole thing on her phone. Bella went to the police and showed them the recording. The police rushed off and caught them. They had been arrested and Bella’s heroic act was on the news.

  3. The girl suddenly felt alive,as the wind sailed along the sky.
    Carefully she balanced along the wobbly roof tiles shaking.
    Her black cat didn’t have a problem walking it sniffed the fresh
    air as it traveled down its nose.Soon she got to the end and
    jumped down to safe her family.

  4. Do not= don’t
    Did not=didn’t
    it will=it’ll
    she will=she’ll
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are interesting.
    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s habitat was grassy and dry.
    The volcano’s summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was to ripe.
    STORY?!
    Once upon time there was a big,dirty village with mushroom houses.There was a girl. she wasn’t normal and she wasn’t weird but she was a human with dangerous superpowers and she impresses a lot of people with them.
    There was a cat which was black and the girl was following it.The cat was taking the girl somewhere important.The cat was going to take the girl somewhere but the cat whispered sadly ”After I take you to your place I have to go back to my rightful owner otherwise he will be very angry…” The cat paused and said ”sorry” The girl declared ”awww please stay with me cat” suddenly The girl exclaimed in a very shy voice ”hey cat I have super power’s and they are invisibility and fire ball’s to attack.” The cat said I already knew you had power’s I was watching you everyday…..

  5. I have done the first the tasks in my book.📖 ✔️

    Task 4:
    The Story Of Bella, The Mysterious, Magical School Kid!
    Bella had always been different to the other children 👦🏼👧🏼👱🏻‍♀️👱🏻school. They looked 👀 at her strangely, and she would often hear 👂 them whispering about her when they thought 💭 that she wasn’t there. Sometimes they whispered about her even though they knew that she was listening 👂.

    Every evening when Bella returned home 🏠 , her real life began. The every day worries of school and other children were banished from her mind. Bella had another life. A life that was a secret. A life’s that was magical.

    All of a sudden she felt alive. Tonight was going to be a night to remember…

    She set of at amazing 😉 speed. She was ready for a brand new adventure. She went of to the woods. She took out her wand and her broom. But she had to make sure nobody was watching. She wouldn’t ever dare to share her secrets.

  6. Task 1 contractions

    1) Do not 2) Did not
    1) Don’t 2) Didn’t

    3) It will 4) she will
    3) It’ll 4) she’ll
    —————————————————-
    Task 2
    1)The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    2)Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    3)Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    4)Mr Walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    —————————————————-
    Task 3
    1) The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    2)The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry.
    3)The volcanoes summits were all covered in snow.
    4)The mango’s flesh was too ripe.
    —————————————————-
    Task 4
    I have done task 4 in my book and i will send it

  7. ‘task 1-contractions’
    1) (normal word) do not (contraction) don’t
    2) (normal word) did not (contraction) didn’t
    3) (normal word) it will (contraction) it’ll
    4) (normal word) she will (contraction) she’ll

    ‘task 2-apostraphe correction sentences’
    1) (incorrect sentence) the bikes brake’s were very squeaky.
    (correct sentence) the bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    the difference between the two sentences is that the first sentence (incorrect one) has an apostrophe on the word ‘brakes’ this is incorrect as apostrophes are mostly used for possession and for shortening word but the sentence was meant to place the apostrophe in the word ‘bikes’ so the sentence will explain how the brakes of the bikes belong to it.

    2) (incorrect sentence) jimm’ys pizzas are the tastiest.(correct sentence) jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest. the difference between the two sentences
    are that the first sentence (incorrect one) has incorrectly placed an apostrophe in the wrong part of the word ‘jimmys’ whereas, the next sentence has placed the apostrophe correctly on the word ‘jimmys’.

    3) (incorrect sentence) Yorksires’ weather can be wet and cold.
    (correct sentence) Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold. in the first sentence the apostrophe has been placed incorrectly in the word ‘yorkshires’ but, in the next sentence the apostrophe has been placed correctly in the word ‘yorkshires’

    4) (incorrect sentence) Mr Walshs lesson’s are always fun. (correct sentence) Mr Walsh’s lessons are always fun. in the first sentence, the apostrophe has been placed in the wrong word but in the next sentence the apostrophe has been placed in he correct part of the sentence.

  8. Bella was always the victim of gossiping and backchatting as she was not a normal witch. She had a peculiar star shaped scar on the shin of her leg. None of the other witches or wizards knew how she had got it. Not even herself. All Bella knew was that she got it when her mother mysteriously disappeared one night. Bella wanted to know how she got it after all these years

    Bella lived in an orphanage. She was never allowed outside. But Bella was a daredevil. Every night, she snuck outside and went on a walk. So today, Bella did the same thing. But tonight was going to be a night to remember. Bella’s faithful companion tommy the midnight black cat went on their walk. Suddenly, Tommy to away! Bella tried to catch him but he was to fast! Tommy ran away out of sight. Then out of nowhere Bella heard meowing. It was coming from the house on top of the hill. The haunted house where nobody entered and those who did never came out. Bella used her superhuman sense which allowed her to see through anything. She saw Tommy but she also saw a human like figure. That person was on a bed. She rushed to the house collected Tommy and quietly crept into the bedroom. It was a woman. She flung off the covers and after all these years it was her mother….

  9. Task 1:
    Don’t
    Didn’t
    It’ll
    She’ll
    Task 2:
    1)The bikes brake’s were very squeaky.
    2) Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    3) Yorkshier’s weather can be wet and cold.
    4)Mr walsh’s lessons are always interesting
    Task 3:
    1)The boys shoes were all dirty.
    2)The lions habitats is grassy and wet.
    3)The volcanoes summit were all covered in snow
    4)The mangos flesh was to ripe.

  10. 1.) The boy’s shoes were dirty.
    2.) The Lion’s habitat was grassy and dry.
    3.) The volcano’s summit was covered in snow.
    4.) The mango’s flesh was too ripe.

  11. Don’t
    Didn’t
    It’ll
    She’ll
    1.I don’t want to go to the shop,
    2.The boy didn’t want to go to the shop.
    3.It’ll be hard for Ron he’s only 5.
    4.Stop it she’ll cry
    Tsk2
    1.The bike’s brakes were squeaky
    2.Jimmy’s pizza’s were tasty
    3. Yorkshire’s weather was bad

  12. Did not = didn’t
    Do not = don’t
    She will = she’ll
    Task 2
    The bikes brakes were very squeaky
    Jimmys pizzas were very tasty
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold
    4 Mr Walsh’s lessons are always Intresting

  13. Task1:
    1)do not =don’t
    2)did not =didn’t
    3)it will =it’ll
    4)she will =she’ll
    Task2
    1) The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    Task3
    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry
    The volcanoes summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.
    Task4
    In the town there was old , Woden houses and viny, tall towers.On her way back from school Bella was walking on a roof top.She was a normal girl with chaotic powers. Walt’s Bella was walking and saw a random cat so she started to follow the black cat. The cat was walking over the houses’ rooftops.

  14. Task 1
    Do not-don’t
    Did not- didn’t
    It will-it’ll
    She will-she’ll
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.
    Task 3
    The boys’ shoes were all dirty.
    The lions’ habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcanos’ summits were all covered in smog.
    The mangos’ flesh was too ripe.
    Task 4
    There was a little girl named Bella.she’s not just an ordinary girl. She has
    Powers. Bella’s
    mysterious, magical powers are flying. Bella’s parents never knew she had powers. Almost every night, Bella always flew on the rooftops with her black cat.Also she has a black , fluffy that lead her to a haunted street.

    Lead her to an haunted street

  15. Task 4:
    I think the town I weird because it is really dark.
    I think she’s weird because in the picture it looks like she has black eyes and i think she is evil.
    I think she is following the cat to a witch town.
    I think the cat is talking her to a witch town.
    I think she is just walking to a random place.
    I think she is magical and her powers are telekinesis and flying and they can help her get up to high place and to get people out her way. She had one of the witches’ brooms. The cat’s beautiful red colour

  16. Task 1)
    Do not = don’t
    Did not = didn’t
    It will = it’ll
    She will = she’ll.

    Task 2)
    1. The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    2. Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    3. Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    4. Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.

    Task 3)
    1. The boys’ shoes were all dirty.
    2. The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry .
    3. The volcanoes’ summits were all covered in snow.
    4. The mangos’ flesh was too ripe.

    Task 4)
    Bella was unique to other children and everyone also was different to her she always looked strangely to the other people’s around but they are all so different to her.
    Every night evening, Bella returns home and,she begins to strats with her normal real life . Every day Bella alwalys gets so much worries of the children’s but they are banished from her beautiful mind .

    Written by Riqbah Zohaib🌷🌷

  17. Task 1
    Don’t
    didn’t
    It’ll
    She’ll
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.
    Task 3
    The boys’ shoes were all dirty.
    The lions’ habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcanoes’ summits were all covered in snow.
    The mangos’ flesh was too ripe.
    Task 4
    In Bella’s school she was very different. They looked at her strangely and she would often hear them whispering about her and when they thought she wasn’t there. Sometimes they whispered about her even when they knew she was listening.
    She hurried home as quick as a flash. Suddenly, she saw a cat.Without warning the cat jumped on a roof but unlike others she had magic powers to jump high and shoot water and fire from her fingertips. With all her power, she jumped on top of the roof and followed the cat to a magical place which know one but people who had powers like Bella, hid under a rock.One had telekinesis one had strength and one had speed.”you’re Bella right”Said the speedy one.

  18. Do not= don’t
    Did not=didn’t
    it will=it’ll
    she will=she’ll

    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are interesting.

    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s habitat was grassy and dry.
    The volcano’s summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was to ripe.

    STORY?!
    Once upon time there was a big,dirty village with mushroom houses.There was a girl. she wasn’t normal and she wasn’t weird but she was a human with dangerous superpowers and she impresses a lot of people with them.
    There was a cat which was black and the girl was following it.The cat was taking the girl somewhere important.The cat was going to take the girl somewhere but the cat whispered sadly ”After I take you to your place I have to go back to my rightful owner otherwise he will be very angry…” The cat paused and said ”sorry” The girl declared ”awww please stay with me cat” suddenly The girl exclaimed in a very shy voice ”hey cat I have super power’s and they are invisibility and fire ball’s to attack.” The cat said I already knew you had power’s I was watching you everyday…..

  19. Bella was walking along a dirty roof top to get home .
    “How was your day? “asked her mum
    “I didn’t have a good day !”replied Bella.
    As she was going to her room and Rose started follow her to her bedroom. Suddenly, her powers were evolving now she could now teleport herself as well become invisible.A few hours later , she found Rose dead on her floor , the knife was still on the floor too .
    “Mama, Papa!” she shouted then she started cry . Rose’s blood was on the knife…

  20. Task 🥇
    Do + not= don’t
    Did+not= didn’t
    It+will= it’ll
    She+will= she’ll
    Task 🥈
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.
    Task 🥉
    The boys’ shoes were all dirty.
    The lions’ habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcanoes’ summits were all covered in snow.
    The mangos’ flesh was too ripe.
    Task 4️⃣
    The wind blew wildly through the town, leaves lifting from the ground, twigs waving around like arms. Bella was a magical girl, who had magical powers and could fly and balance with ease. This helped her to fly around to people in need. Her town, however, was very dead and dull. There were tall, dark towers that shot up into the sky 🌌, and small, dreary houses covered in dirt as they were so old. Bella had found a beautiful, coal black cat 🐈 with magical blue eyes. She called the cat Galaxy. However, galaxy wasn’t a regular cat. This cat could talk, and recite magical spells. Bella had used galaxy as her sidekick or companion, and now they explored the city by tiptoeing over rooftops, but her family suspected nothing.
    One day, Bella wandered all over the town, and came across a small, deserted forest 🌳. It was dark and dingy, and there were strange, purple streaks flashing throughout the trees. She thought it was very cool, so she decided to have a little stroll inside. When she was inside, she saw her cat, Galaxy, hissing at the trees. Galaxy’s tail waved in the wind 💨. Bella was starting to get a little bit scared, so she decided to run. As she ran, she tripped over a large thorn sticking out of the ground. Bella’s feet twisted and she crashed to the ground. Galaxy the cat guarded Bella as she scrambled to her feet. She ran with galaxy along side her, and she finally escaped the scary, dark forest. Bella suddenly saw two bright, glowing eyes start to run towards her. Startled, she stumbled to her family’s house with galaxy, and swore to never go to the forest again. Bella’s mother questioned why her foot was so grazed, but Bella just said she bumped her leg. She decided not to speak a word about the forest…🌳🌳🌳
    By Chloe 💜

  21. Task 1
    Do not= don’t
    Did not= didn’t
    It will= it’ll
    She will = she’ll
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold
    Mr walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    Task 3
    The boys’ shoes were very dirty.
    The lions’ habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcanoes’ summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.

  22. Bella had magical powers, she’d had the for 2 years now! But unfortunately she couldn’t use them finding her beloved cat. She was desperate to find her cat exhaustedly and about to give up she found her cat who was lazily lying on the floor across the street. Bellas cat bounced towards her. Jumping for joy Bella smiled

  23. Once there was a village, that had a small community which, meant that there wasn’t many people living in that village. There lived a delightful little girl called Bella she was always wandering around the Village because her personality was a little peculiar and her personality was that she was very curious and very energetic person which meant that she loves exploring. But following day and she was outside once again she knows everyone in the village but then she saw an obscure looking person that was wearing a black hoodie and a black mask he or she were always coming by her house. One day Bella went out to figure out who it actually is but when she got closer she saw that the weird-looking person was wearing a witch’s hat, but when she asked who the lady was and she replied with, ” I am a Witch.” So Bella got quite alarmed, so then she climbed up the roof but at that moment, she slipped and the tiles were making her fall and she got hurt so the witch came and nursed her and treated her with her potions and the witch turned out to be a nice witch she only has potions to heal people that get hurt so Bella asked the witch to heal all the people in her village and so the witch did what Bella asked and everyone soon recovered from their sicknesses.

    The End

    • I accidentally posted it.

      Once there was a village, that had a small community which meant that there wasn’t many people living in that village. There lived a delightful little girl called Bella she was always roaming around the Village because her personality was very unique and her personality was that she was very curious and a very energetic person which meant that she loves exploring. But the following day and she was outside once again she knows everyone in the village but then she saw an obscure looking person that was wearing a black hoodie and a black mask he or she were always coming by her house. One day Bella went out to figure out who it actually is, but when she got closer, she saw that the weird-looking person was wearing a witch’s hat, but when she asked who the lady was and she replied with, ” I am a Witch.” So Bella got quite alarmed, so then she climbed up the roof. But at that moment, she slipped and the tiles were making her fall and so she got hurt, so the witch came and nursed her and treated her with her potions. She turned out to be a nice witch, she only has potions to heal people that had gotten injured or sick, so Bella asked the witch to heal all the people in her village and so the witch did what Bella requested and everyone shortly after recovered from their sicknesses.

      The End

  24. Task 4
    Bella The Dark brown haired little girl 👧 had got great super powers (and, but, so) she didn’t tell her parents. One ☝️ night the sneaky menacing girl 👧 snook out for an adventure with her companion the cat 🐱 (which) could fly so she flew over there (where is there? Describe it please.) 👉She had a great and fun adventure climbing Until A mythic dark monster came among us (them – as it is third person) and breathed a purple majestic beam so they quickly flew back but the cat had no energy from flying here …….

  25. Task 1:
    A) Don’t
    B) Didn’t
    C) It’ll
    D) She’ll

    Task 2
    The Bike’s were very squeaky
    Jimmy’s Pizzas 🍕 are the best
    Yorkshire’s Weather can be wet and cold
    Mrs Walsh’s Lessons Are Always interesting

    Task 3:
    The boys shoes were always dirty
    The lions 🦁 habitat is grassy and dry
    The Volcano’s Summits were all covered in snow
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.

  26. Task 1:
    Do not = Don’t
    Did not = Didn’t
    It will = It’ll
    She will = She’ll
    Task 2:
    1)The bike’s brake were very squeaky.
    2)Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    3)Yourshire’s weather can be wet and cold 🏔.
    4)Mr Walsha’s lessons are always interesting.
    Task 3:
    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s 🦁 habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcano’s summit were all covered in snow.
    The Mango’s flesh were too ripe.

  27. Don’t
    I don’t want to go to school today.
    Didn’t
    I didn’t go to school yesterday because I was sick.
    It’ll
    It’ll be Wednesday tomorrow.
    She’ll
    She’ll be very happy when it’s her birthday.
    Task2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky
    Jimmy’s pizzas are very yummy.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr walshe’s lessons are really fun
    Task3
    The boy’s shoes were dirty.
    The lion’s habitats is grassy and muddy.
    The volcanoes summits were covered in snow.
    The mangoes flesh was to dry.
    Task4

    • Old story
      That she had magic powers for 2 years now and then her cat ran away so she had to go running and looking for 2 hours and hen found her killed on the floor she was very upset and went home and coasted another friend and then runs away for ever
      New story
      She just realised she had magic finger tips for years and wanted to celebrate her birthday and for once she got a special present a new cat also wanted to celebrate her brothers birthday as well.

      • Good effort, Braydon. You need to add more detail to this. You need to add apostrophes for singular and plural possession. Please also add your contracted word. Please rewrite this and add to this.

  28. Task 1
    Did not-didn’t
    Do not-don’t
    She will-she’ll

    Task2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky
    Jimmy’s pizzas were very tasty
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are very interesting

    Yorkshire’s weather can wet and cold

  29. The boys’ shoes were dirty.
    The lions’ habitat was dry and grassy.
    The volcanoes’ summit was covered in snow.
    The mangoes’ flesh was too ripe.

  30. In the spooky abandoned town which people have not lived there for centuries,Bella was thinking about herslf.She thought ‘Am I normal.Why does everyone hate me. I guess I should use my magical powers to make me feel better’. She’s followed her cat as it was her companion and her only friend. So they careful walked across the building and jumped of it.
    She’s followed the cat home she was very tired. After hours of walking they were nearly there.As they were walking back home, Bella was worried about the fact no one liked her. A few minutes later, Bella got back home with her cat. Then Bella started to feel sick…

  31. I did all the tasks.
    Edited Version:
    It was an evening of the year 1212. The sun’s rays were fading and the autumn fog was spreading through the town. School finished, and children’s parents were waiting patiently for them outside. On the rooftop, Bella was travelling to their secret, abandoned arena with her companion. The black cat was in front and leading the way.
    “We’re here, aren’t we, Mother?”, the cat heard Bella think.
    “Nearly, daughter.”, replied the cat.
    Bella’s mother was an experienced witch, who was taking her child to the first private lesson of witchcraft. The girl was advancing cautiously, excited to discover her powers…

  32. I have completed task one ,two and three in my homework book and will email it in later.

    While walking on the rooftops Bella was thinking about not telling her
    parents about her magical powers . Bella’s magical powers were unique and not every person had this she was lucky girl.Sooner or later the truth was going to get revealed and Bella was going to be in trouble.She needed to tell them but first she needed to make a plan and how to do it . However , while she was walking she seen a building on fire she didn’t bother at first but when going she seen some people in there and as she had magical powers she flew over to the house . When she got closer she seen a shadow in the window it looked like a man and a woman screaming so she flew all the way over to the building and noticed it was no ordinary people it was here mum and dad and they had saw everything this way Bella was in trouble but then she had no worries of telling them she had powers.

  33. Bella was a victim because she was different to everyone else because she always wanted to be the best student in history and she was not normal like everyone else thats why everyone was being mean to her except from the teachers and her mum and dad. The teachers and her parents said it does not matter if you are different but it’s actually fun and different if you are different it does not matter what everyone says just follow your heart and be happier. Then she was happier and everyone was angry that she was happier. She is now
    HAPPIER

    • Luqman, please read through work and see where you can add the contractions or any possessions with an apostrophe. For example:- does not would be doesn’t. Also complete tasks 1-3.

  34. Task 1
    Do not= don’t
    Did not= didn’t
    It will= it’ll
    She will = she’ll
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s wheather can be wet and cold
    Mr walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    Task 3
    The boy’s shoes were very dirty.
    The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry.
    The volcaanoe’s summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.

  35. Task 1
    1. Do non is don’t.
    2. Did not is didn’t.
    3. It will is it’ll.
    4. She will is she’ll.
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    Task 3
    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry
    The volcanoes summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.
    Task 4
    Bella the magical girl was standing on the roof of a house in this old village. The houses had small weird designs on the roofs. The houses were covered with moss. There was a bright light in the distance like the sun had fallen. Bella had her trustworthy companion cat which she was following. The walls were made of smoothened stone which was painted brown. Her or her cat weren’t scared of being on the roof. Bella’s beautiful black hair was moving in the wind.

    • Good work Harun. Please use range of sentence openers and you have missed commas in some places. Please edit and improve and send it to us.

  36. Don’t
    Didn’t
    She’ll
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.

  37. Task 1
    1. Do not= don’t
    2. Did not= didn’t
    3. It will= it’ll
    4. She will= she’ll

    Task 2
    1. The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    2. Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    3. Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    4. Mr Walsh’s lessons are always interesting.

    Task 3
    1.The boys’ shoes were all dirty.
    2. The lions’ habitat is grassy and dry.
    3. The volcanoes’ summits were all covered in snow.
    4. The mangoes’ flesh was too ripe.

    • Bellas’ companion the sly, sneaky cat had claws as sharp as daggers clinging onto the roof tiles trying to keep it’s balance. “We have to keep going” announced Bella trying not to look back from the evil that lurks behind them. When they had arrived where they had started the excitement had kicked in they would finally be able to go back to the normal world. Right when they thought they would go back they were surrounded by angry men wanting her to stay “what are we going to do?”

  38. Story:
    The stray cat led her to a old looking house at the end of the tunnel there were loads of moaning sounds coming from in front of them. Then the door croaked open like it was speaking to Bella and the cat. They cautiously entered the weird looking house. Inside it was cold and dark, there was a flashlight that had run out of power a long time ago, because of the rust and dirt on it. As they walked silently into the long deep corridor a man sneaked up behind them and stole the cat . Underneath the hood, it was a Vampire who wanted revenge on the intruders in his old house . He allowed Bella to look around because he had set a trap he wanted to eat the cat , and put it in the oven but forgot to put the oven on so the cat was actually not cooking. Bella noticed the blood on the walls and awards for being the most scariest man on the planet, Bella was confused. She started to wander that someone was in the house. Because of noise coming from the kitchen, then the noise came closer and closer until she was looking at a Vampire she screamed for help but nobody could help her but she did not now her father had installed a chip in her to have magical powers. She tried to run but she began running at the door but forgot about the cat. So she bravely went into the kitchen with her super speed and busted open the oven with her super strength. The two ran to the door and busted it open and ran towards their local police department and informed them of what had happened. The police did not believe them and dropped them home but what they didn’t know was the vampire was right behind them…
    New story:
    The stray cat led her to a old looking house at the end of the tunnel there were loads of moaning sounds coming from in front of them, then the door croaked open like it was speaking to Bella and the cat. They cautiously entered the weird looking house. Inside it was cold and dark, there was a flashlight that had run out of power a long time ago, because of the rust and dirt on it. As they walked silently into the long deep corridor a man sneaked up behind them and stole the cat . Underneath the hood, it was a Vampire who wanted revenge on the intruders in his old house . He allowed Bella to look around because he had set a trap he wanted to eat the cat , and put it in the oven but forgot to put the oven on so the cat was actually not cooking. Bella noticed the blood on the walls and awards for being the most scariest man on the planet, Bella was confused. She started to wander that someone was in the house. Because of noise coming from the kitchen, then the noise came closer and closer until she was looking at a Vampire she screamed for help but nobody could help her but, she did not now her father had installed a chip in her to have magical powers. She tried to run but she began running at the door but forgot about the cat. So she bravely went into the kitchen with her super speed and ,busted open the oven with her super strength. The two ran to the door and busted it open and ran towards their local police department and informed them of what had happened. The police did not believe them and dropped them home but what they didn’t know was the vampire was right behind them…

    • Great effort Armaan, very interesting indeed. However, I still feel you have missed opportunities to improve your story. You have missing punctuation, or punctuation used incorrectly. You have used an apostrophe for a contraction- well done! But, you have missed the opportunity to use apostrophes for possession. I also think some of your description could be up-levelled. Can you improve your story further?

  39. Task 1
    Don’t Didn’t It’ll She’ll
    Task 2
    The bike’s brakes were very squeaky.
    Jimmy’s pizzas are the tastiest.
    Yorkshire’s weather can be wet and cold.
    Mr Walsh’s lessons are very interesting.
    Task 3
    The boy’s shoes were all dirty.
    The lion’s habitat is grassy and dry
    The volcanoes summits were all covered in snow.
    The mango’s flesh was too ripe.
    Task 4
    Bella was standing on the roof of a house in this old brick village. The houses had small swirly designs on the roofs. The houses were covered with moss. There was a bright light in the distance like the sun had fallen. Bella had her trustworthy cat following around here. The walls were made of smoothened stone which was painted white. Here or her cat weren’t scared of being on the roof. Bella’s hair was moving in the wind.
    I did not know where to add plural possession.

    • Great effort Oliwier. Please check task 3 again- you need to create plural possession with the apostrophes. For example, not just one mango but many mangoes. For task 4, think of an extra sentence you could include which would use a plural possessive apostrophe. Take your time- it isn’t a race! I think you could also rearrange your sentences about houses to achieve a plural possessive apostrophe. See if you can improve it.

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