Year Three Literacy Task – Stories with familiar settings.

To edit sentences using adjectives.

Dunc

Duncan has described his tree house for his homework. His teacher was not happy with these adjectives he used. Below is a list of adjectives used by Duncan to describe his tree house:

nice, tall, big, little, good quiet, smooth, brown.

Use a thesaurus to find better adjectives and write your own description of the tree house using the picture to help you.

20 thoughts on “Year Three Literacy Task – Stories with familiar settings.

  1. Duncan tree house was a very nice big brown house.It was a smooth house which was nice and peacefull for duncan he enjoyed the peace and quiet. He also had a nice view to look at and the sounds of the birds which he liked to hear in the early mornings.

  2. One boiling hot I was tied so I went to sleep and then I hear my mum and dad
    Was calling me for breakfast I was incredible tied.then I went I had breakfast
    Then i went back to my tree house then I came in it smells amazing I could hear
    My friends calling me to go and play with them.i said sorry I am busy.i saw a black
    Adourble bird top of my roof. I can smell my mum baking but I did not know what
    It was they did not tell me what it was until she finished so it was a surprise and
    It was ……………….. A …………….. CUPCAKE it was delicious😄😄😄!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. Duncan’s tree house is huge like an elephant and as high as a skyscraper. It has a great, decent straw roof. On top of the roof is a creaseless chimney with a hushed crow on it. By the tree house, climbing a tree is a micro, chocolate brown squirrel.

    • In Duncans Treehouse has a lanky brown ladder to climb.He has a huge red door under the yellow straws. Which is the roof.outside and in the Treehouse Duncan has a soft glass window.and a mute bird exploring the Treehouse on the yellow straws which is the roof

  4. DUNCAN’S TREE HOUSE IS VERY ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL.IT HAS A TALL LADDER LIKE GIRAFFES NECK.ON THE TREE HOUSE IS BLACK BIRD TWEETING. THE TREES SMELL LIKE FRESH AIR AND THE BRANCHES.THE CHIMINEY IS VERY DIRTY. THE DOOR IS A BRIGHT RED COLOUR.

  5. There was a creeky, rotten laber on the tree house.
    The sky was blue like the osen.
    The roof was made from larg yellow straw.
    There was a huge black Bird.

  6. Duncan treehouse is bendy and rough and the colours are dull and also the large door is as red as blood. However the glass window is shiny. It has white curly patterns. It is quite inside but on top of the red roof is a black sparrow. The chimney is made of bricks.

  7. One hot swetty day when I was asleep my parents were making me a surprise.I cound’t wait until I saw it.They were making my suprise when I was asleep.In the light sunny morning my parents Covent my eyes and took me outside and the was my lovely wooden tree house.(that was my suprise also I loved it)

  8. it was my birthay I lookes out of the windo and saw a decaded treehouse and my dad was fixing it.the room was poky but the out side was massive.i could see cars. I heard motbike in the distants.i could smell a scrumshus cake.the tree house was all Brownd the windo was as shiny than a diamond.

  9. Duncan’s tree house is colossal.

    His tree house is beautiful from the inside.

    Duncan has lovely and pretty leafs on the trees.

    His tree house has a lanky and tall ladder.

    It has a small and tiny chimany.

    He has a wonderful door.

  10. Duncan’s tree house is absolutely stunning , very elegant and lanky.It’s so colossal and the bird on top is so miniscule as well as the squirrel on the tree branch.the Wood on the tree house is so level and brown.

  11. Duncan’s tree house is colossal and has a straw roof. Duncan has a beautiful sorounding with lovely green leaves. Also Duncan has a lanky ladder which is really dangerous. It has a tiny chimney which is wooden and brown and it has an excellent view.

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