5 Blue performing ‘The Raven’ – Broad Heath Primary School

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Naimol A. says:

04/02/2022 at 8:55 am

Wow

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Brooke M. says:

04/02/2022 at 6:57 am

stanza 1 could be improved by not just luxor doing the actions but marayahm to.

stanza 2 could be improved by lawy looking at the camera and learning the script by heart so he doesn’t have to look at the scrip.

stanza 3 could improve the actions and the emotions to there voice also they could speak slower.

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Aisha R. says:

03/02/2022 at 7:44 pm

In stanza 1 there should be more actions than standing around saying lines.

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Safa M. says:

03/02/2022 at 6:34 pm

I could improve by changing my tone on when I’m scared on when he sais “Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door” and when I say it again I could say it more like I’m scared. I can also improve by looking scared not happy and joyful because I didn’t look scared when I was acting it.

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Joel G. says:

02/02/2022 at 9:02 am

The people in stanza 1 could have had a little more expression
In stanza 2 the angle act could have been a little better but overall it was a good act.

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Muhammed A. says:

02/02/2022 at 8:50 am

I would improve more actions and the volume for stanza 3.
I liked the actions.

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Safiyah P. says:

02/02/2022 at 8:48 am

I would improve the intonation and the use of different voice tones.

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Lawy A. says:

01/02/2022 at 7:02 pm

I could improve my lines because I had a paper to remember it .
I liked my actions .

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Lillie S. says:

01/02/2022 at 8:54 am

I would improve the emotions

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Luxor A. says:

31/01/2022 at 6:38 pm

I could improve by adding more expression into my words.

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