Year 4 Design & Technology: Bread Evaluation

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Sumaya O. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:38 pm

1. It looked good .
2. It smelled like normal bread.
3.It was chewy .
4.It was smooth .
5.nothing.
6.I change how it looks.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:58 pm
  
  What was wrong with how it looked?
  
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Yasmin A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:38 pm

(1)my bread looked cute
(2)my bread smelled like heaven
(3) my bread tasted bad
(4) it was soft and mostorise .
(5)I faced sugessting the shape
(6) if I was to make it again it will be like a star

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:07 pm
  
  Very reflective Yasmin. Why would you change the shape? What was wrong with the shape you already had?
  
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Adrian O. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:37 pm

My bread looked Amazing 🤩.
My bread smelled like nothing.
My bread though tasted … Horrendous, horrible , terrible every negative thing to the taste🥖🥖🥖😢😢😢.
It was bumpy and hard.
My problem was what shape to do.
I would change by adding no ingredients.

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:09 pm
  
  Very detailed evaluation Adrian! What could you do to improve the taste of your bread, since you hated it so much? 🤣
  
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Kinza A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:37 pm

My bread look like a circle in the middle
My bread smelled like chocolate chips
My bread tasted 1/10
My bread was as hard as rock
My hand got sticky
I would make it have more taste and less hardness

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:59 pm
  
  Why do you think your bread was hard?
  
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Hadiya M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:37 pm

My bread was amazing🤩
It had so many chocolate chips which made it look so appetising.
My bread smelt soo nice☺️👌
My bread tasted like a cake with chocolate chips

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:10 pm
  
  Wow, that sounds amazing Hadiya! What could you improve about your bread for next time? If you had to pick one thing.
  
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Carter D. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm

1.- 10/10
2.0/10
3. 1/10
4. Soft
5. No
6the taste

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:59 pm
  
  What was wrong with the taste?
  
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Ebnezere A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm

My bread look have good taste
2 my smelled amazing
3 my taste fantastic and good
4 my was soft and slightly
5 The problem was that it everything
6 If we made it soft

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:11 pm
  
  Well done Ebnezere. What could you do improve your bread? Pick one thing.
  
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Rahim A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm

1 Looked like a rotten fortune cookie
2 my bread smelled like cheese with cake
3 My bread tasted like a fortune cookie but two times better than a regular one
4 The texture of my bread was a light shining bright in my in my hand/mouth
5 my bread was slippiering down and metiling
6 I would make it not melt not touching it to much and my bread was 👍

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:12 pm
  
  Great evaluation Rahim! What could you do to stop your bread from melting?
  
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Arjun G. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm

1.unusual
2.horrible
3.Disgusting
4.smooth
5.form it
6.add less chocolate chips

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:13 pm
  
  Well done Arjun. What shape would you change your bread to, if you had another chance to make it?
  
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Ariyan S. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:35 pm

1.My bread look like twirly.
2.My bread smell like salt.
3.My bread taste like salt and it was crunchy.
4.The texture of the bread is brown and orange.
5.The problem with the bread is that it has salt .
5.I would change my bread by making it big and adding no salt.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm
  
  What toppings did you include?
  
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Musa B. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:35 pm

Neda
1.my bread looked delicious and it also looked like a cookie.
2.my bread didn’t really smell like anything it smelled like nothing and like a normal bread.
3.my bread was a bit crunchy and hard but apart from that it was very good.
4.the texture was rough and strong but smooth though.
5.I did when I was trying to make the bread shape with the dough it would always not turn to how I wanted it to look but it was okay.
6.I would change the shape because it was a bit boring it was flat.

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1. Miss Naeem says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm
  
  What other sort of shape could you have done so it wasn’t boring ?
  
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Awais J. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:35 pm

1.My bread looked nice and delicious
2.My bread smelled like chocolate
3.My bread tasted amazing and a little bit burnt but it was still nice
4.The texture of my bread was rough and soft at the same time
5.I didn’t face any problems when I was making my bread
6.I would role it longer and make it into a bigger knot

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:36 pm
  
  Sp- roll
  
  What toppings did you have on your bread?
  
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Shemaiah W. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:34 pm

How did your bread look?
My bread looked good.
How did your bread smell?
My one smelled like oil and chocolate 🍫 combined.
How did your bread taste?
It tasted like chocolate.
What was the texture of your bread like?
It was a bit spongy inside out side it was

Did you face any problems when making your bread?
None
Did you face any problems when making your bread?
I would make it bigger.🐢🐢 bread 🍞

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:37 pm
  
  Did you face any problems Shemaiah?
  
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Zakariyah T. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:33 pm

1. My bread looked like a turtle .
2. It smell delicious .
3. My bread tasted yummy and delicious .
4. The texture was soft and smooth .
5. The problem is that the chocolate chip would fall off .
6. I would make it bigger .

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:37 pm
  
  What other toppings could you use?
  
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Simeongeya W. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:33 pm

The bread looked fantastic
The bread smelled great
The bread tasted good
The texture of the was bumpy
No
The chocolate

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:52 pm
  
  Well done! What would you use instead of chocolate?
  
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Sidrah S. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:33 pm

1.It looked a bit like a cookie
2. It smelled like normal bread
3. It tasted like a regular piece of bread
4. It was smooth
5. No I did not face any problems
6. I exactly don’t know

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:38 pm
  
  What was the best thing about your bread?
  
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Sumayyah A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:32 pm

1. The bread tasted bad .
2.It smelled bad
3.It tasted like flour.
4.Bad
5.No
6.Make a knot

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:39 pm
  
  What shape was your bread?
  
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Aiza B. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:32 pm

My bread looked spongey.
My bread smelt like chocolate
My bread tasted mid
The texture was crispy
There was no problems
If I would change it I would put no toppings

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:33 pm
  
  What was wrong with the toppings?
  
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Ebeid M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:31 pm

1.My bread looked nice and creative.
2My bread smelt like chocolate And cheese.
3.My bread tasted nice and it tasted like chocolate And dough.
4.The texture of my bread wAs hard crumbly,rough and strong.
5.The problem I faced while making my bread is that some of my chocolAte chips fell.
6.If I can do it again I would a knot.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:33 pm
  
  What shape was your bread? What was wrong with it?
  
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Nick C. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:31 pm

My bread was AMAZING 🤩
My bread smelling like bread
My bread tasted like chocolate
My bread was soft and silky
I faced shaping my bread
I would change it into a circle ⭕️

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:38 pm
  
  Lovely evaluation, Nick! Is there anything that might have made shaping the bread easier?
  
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Minnah M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:30 pm

Minnah🥰🥰
1. My looked yummy.
2. I did not smell my bread.
3. My bread was delicious.
4. My breads texture was crumbly.
5. The problem that I faced when making my bread was that It was hard to make the shape.
6. If I could make my bread again I would make the shape different.

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm
  
  Well done, Minnah! What shape would you do?
  
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Eliza N. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:30 pm

1 ) My bread looked like a cute kitten 🐈🐆🐱🐯🧸💖
2 ) My bread smelt like chocolate 🍫😋 🥖🍞🥯
3 ) My bread tasted like chocolate 🍫🥖🍞🥯
4 ) The texture of my bread was as smooth as silk 👘🥻👕👚
5 ) I faced one problem I was going to use the chocolate chips as eyes but they had a little spike at the top so I put them inside instead 🤷🏼‍♀️🥖🥯🍫😋
6 )I thought it turned out well so I wouldn’t change a thing 🙂🙃💖🍫🥖🥯🍞

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:19 pm
  
  Great evaluation Eliza, is there any other shape you could make?
  
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Rayan M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:30 pm

1. The bread looked amazing.
2. The bread smells like warm.
3. At first it tasted hard.
4. The texture of the bread was hard.
5. The problem that I faced was shaping my up.
6. I would change the shape of the bread.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:34 pm
  
  What shape would you choose? Why?
  
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Jebrin Y. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:30 pm

My bread looked plain because the chocolate chips were inside.
My bread smelled lemony and salty.
I didn’t like the bread it tasted tangy and stale
The texture was hard and soft
Yes it was deciding the shape.
Not really I liked it a little bit.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:35 pm
  
  Why didn’t you like it?
  
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Charis O. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:30 pm

My bread looked normal.
My. Bread smelt like butter
My bread tasted like brochire bread
The texture was hard outside but inside it was soft
The only problem was that the shaping was hard
I would just make it a blob.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:35 pm
  
  Why a blob? What was wrong with your shape?
  
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Musa B. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:29 pm

Musa
1.My bread looked good it was in the shape of an oval and I think it was a good shape
2.My bread smelled really good it smelled like dough obviously and like chocolate chips because I put that also in it
3.My bread tasted good but when I tasted it the dough was a little to hard if it was softer it would have been perfect
4.The texture of the bread felt ok but it was a little crumbly and rough is it was smooth it would have been good
5.Yes I did face some problems because when I put the chocolate chips inside of the bread every time when I wanted to make the circle shape the chocolate chips always sticked out
6.If I would change anything on the bread what I will change is when I tried to put the chocolate chips inside I would’ve put them on top and also the shape I didn’t like the shape of my bread my shape was an oval the shape I wanted was circle

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:14 pm
  
  Very detailed evaluation, Musa! What do you think you could do to fix some of the problems you had?
  
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Tasneem S. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:28 pm

My bread looked like the galaxy chocolate
My bread smelled like chocolate
My bread tasted plane
My bread felt very hard and oily
Yes because it was hard for it to stay together
Yes I would of made it to a cookie

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:20 pm
  
  Well done Tasneem, what do you think could have made it stay together better?
  
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Emil D. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:26 pm

1.My bread looked plain but it tasted better than it looked.
2.My bread smelled like normal white bread.
3.My bread tasted like a normal chocolate sandwich.
4.The texture of the bread was hard but when I put it in my mouth the inside felt soft.
5.The problem I had was trying to fit all of the chocolate chips inside of the dough.
6.If I made my bread again I would try and make the chocolate chips melt.

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:21 pm
  
  Nice evaluation Emil, how could you have changed what you did to keep the chocolate in the dough?
  
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Muhammed H. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:26 pm

Adnan
It looked like a cookie.
I couldn’t smell it .
It taste delicious.
I didn’t like the texture.
Yes what shape should make.
I would add more taste good

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:14 pm
  
  Well done Adnan, How could you make it taste better?
  
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Isaiah W. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:25 pm

Isaiah
The bread look amazing 🤩
My bread smell like chocolate 🥖
My bead taste like gold bread🐥
My bead looked like brown bread with melted chocolate 🍫
Yes I faced the deign
I would change the deign

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:22 pm
  
  Well done Isaiah, how would you make the design different?
  
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