Year 4 Design & Technology: Bread Evaluation

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Camarni H. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:50 pm

My bread looked good
It smelled horrible
It tasted like poop
The texture was hard and rough
I did face a problem it kept sticking
The taste it was horrible

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:15 pm
  
  Well done Camarni with you evaluation. What could you do to improve the taste of your bread? What could you add next time?
  
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Sandra A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:48 pm

Eesaa A

How did your bread look like?
My bread looked like a biscuit 🍪

How did your bread smell?
My bread smelled like raisins and chocolate🍫

How did your bread taste?
My bread tasted like raisins and chocolate with bread

What was the texture of your bread like?
The texture of my bread was rough

Did you face any problems when making your bread?
No not really

What would change if you made your bread again?
I would not have any raisins.

Sandra A

How did your bread look?
Cookie Dough 🍪🍫

How did your bread smell?
Chocolate 🍫

Did you face any problems when making your bread
No really

What would you change if you made the bread again
More chocolate 🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫

How did your bread taste
Cookie 🍪

What was the texture of your bread like
Soft

Sidra M

How did your bread look
Nice to see

How did your bread smell
Tastaly

How did your bread taste
Chocolate

What was the texture of your bread
Soft

Did you face any problems when making your bread
No really

What would you change if you made your bread again
Design for more

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:14 pm
  
  Eesaa – Would you add anything else instead of raisins?
  Sandra – lovely evaluation! How much more chocolate!?
  Sidra – Can you explain clearly what you would change?
  
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Sardar O. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:47 pm

My bread looked awful. Muhammad

My bread was crispy and yummy I also liked how it looked I had chocolate chips on it and it felt soft. Marwa

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:55 pm
  
  Interesting evaluation both of you. What could you do to improve your bread next time?
  
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Ameera K. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:47 pm

1. My bread looked delicious.

2. My bread smelled really sweet.

3. My bread tasted amazing.

4. When the bread was cooked it felt soft and smooth but when it wasn’t cooked it was oily and watery.

5. I did because I was trying to make my shape of the bread but it kept breaking.

6. If I made the bread again I would change its toppings and shape.

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1. Miss Naeem says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:51 pm
  
  Lovely evaluation, Do you think too much oil and water was added to the mixture before you baked your bread?
  
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Tinuola T. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:46 pm

My bread looked like a full empanada.
My bread smelt delicious.
My bread tasted delicious but the chocolate was very strong.
The texture was squishy.
The problem was that it was indescive.

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:56 pm
  
  Great evaluation and description Tinuola! What could you do next time to be more decisive about what shape you want for your bread and what ingredients you want to use?
  
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Abigail F. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:46 pm

My bread looked like a chocolate chip cookie.
My bread smelt like burnt bread
My bread tasted like Avocado and chocolate chip.
My face made a weird look .
No salt and no yeast although I would like chocolate chip bread.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:48 pm
  
  What toppings did you use?
  
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Esa A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:46 pm

1 The bread looked good
2 My bread smelled great
3 My bread tasted like normal bread
4 the texture was good
5 the problem was that it was hard
6 I will make seeds

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1. Miss Naeem says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:53 pm
  
  Good evaluation, what could have been done different so that the bread wasn’t hard?
  
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Andreea-Maya M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:45 pm

My bread looked funny like a banana
My bread smelt like nothing, I wish it smelt like honey
It’s tasted crispy on the edge
It’s was soft and squishy in the middle
The brobblem

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:57 pm
  
  I love bananas though Maya! What could you do next time to make your bread smell like honey ?
  
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Hishaam G. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:44 pm

My bread smelled mellless
The bread tastes like chocolate
The te texture was oily

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:58 pm
  
  Interesting Hishaam. Why was your bread so oily and how can you stop that from happening next time ?
  
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Rayan M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:44 pm

My bread was soft and soggy

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 3:24 pm
  
  Well done, Rayan. How could you stop it from being soggy next time?
  
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Musa B. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:44 pm

Max
1.my bread looked okay.
2.my bread smelled amazing.
3.my bread tasted sweet and dry.
4.my bread texture was okay ✅.
5.it was so fun but allows hard.
6.I would change nothing.

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:16 pm
  
  Well done Max! Was there anything in particular that made it hard to make?
  
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Eva T. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:43 pm

My bread looked spiky and had eyes.
Where there was only bread it was smelly but where there was chocolate it was nice.
It tasted like sweet where there chocolate and where there was salty it was plain bread.
It was soft and squishy.
Deciding the shape.
The shape into a star.

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 4:59 pm
  
  It has eyes?!?! Very creative Eva! What could you have done to have a shape in mind before making the bread?
  
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Zainullah S. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:43 pm

1.My bread looked normal.
2.My bread really smelled plain.
3.My bread tastes really nice and good.
4.My bread had no texture.
5.It was kinda hard but easy.
6.I would change the texture.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:58 pm
  
  What was wrong with the texture Zainullah?
  
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Sanaa M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:43 pm

1.My bread looked like a circle🟠
2.My bread smelled like salt as always🧂
3.My bread tasted flavourful.😋
4.it was a bit hard and a bit soft
5.I didn’t face any problems
6.I would change the shape to a breadstick with chocolate chips 🍫

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:00 pm
  
  Great evaluation Sanaa! What would you do to the dough to make it into a bread stick next time?
  
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  1. Sanaa M. says:
    
    10/02/2024 at 6:40 pm
    
    I would put the choco chips in the bread and roll it into a shape of a bread stick🍫
    
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Vanessa N. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:42 pm

My bread look like square
My bread smelled like expayersd
My bread test like normal bread
My bread tester was oily
My problem was how to ship it
The way I make it .

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:01 pm
  
  Well done Vanessa, with your evaluation. What could you do next time to make sure you have the shape that you wanted ?
  
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Shumiyah H. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:42 pm

Shumiyah
the taste of the bread was so tasty 😋
it just smelled amazing l had no words
my bread looked like a pretzel 🥨
the texture of the bread was smooth and a little bit oily
I didn’t have any problems making the bread
l would make the bread a bit more better

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:17 pm
  
  Well done Shumiyah, what could have made your bread better?
  
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Mustafa A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:42 pm

My bread looked nice
My bread smelled sweet
My bread tasted sweet
the bread was hard
I didn’t have a problem with my bread
I would change anything

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:43 pm
  
  Why do you think your bread went hard?
  
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Alya M. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm

1. It looked crunchy
2. It smelled raw and bad 😣
3.it tasted plane
4. Hard
5. Yeah it was making the shape
6. No toppings

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:02 pm
  
  Well done Alya. What could you do next time to add flavour to your bread?
  
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Mohammed K. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm

My bread look like a square
My bread small like fruit
My bread tasted like sweat
My texture was like rock
My bread had no problems
I would change my bread to circle

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:02 pm
  
  Well done Imaad. How can you stop your bread from being hard like a rock?
  
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Sami J. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm

The bread looked amazing
My bread smelled delicious
The bread tasted great
My bread felt weird
A problem that I faced was that when I put the raisins and the chocolate chips was that they were falling out.
Add no raisins.

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:18 pm
  
  Great evaluation Sami! Can you explain more clearly what you mean by ‘weird’?
  
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Mustafa Z. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm

1 it looked like a bun
2 it smelt bad
3 it taste bad
4 it was hard
5 the problem was it was too oily
6 I would change I wouuld put less oil

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:03 pm
  
  Great evaluation Mustafa. What could you do next time to make the bread smell better ? What could you add?
  
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Jegor S. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:41 pm

My bread looks like cookie.
My bread smells like a disgusting cookie.
My bread tastes disgusting and gross
My bread texture is croaky
My problem was it was sticky
Make it a ball and then less chocolate chips and don’t touch it too much
From yegor

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:03 pm
  
  Well done Yegor! What could you do to stop your bread from being so sticky?
  
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Ahyan K. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

Alisha❤️
1.it looked like a dumpling 🥟
2.sweet
3.bitter and rock hard
4.rock hard and stiff
5.yes a few problems
6.I would make it less hollow
Ahyan💀
1. It looked like a croissant 🥐
2. It was sweet
3.it tasted yummy and delicious 😋
4.it was soft and hard as a rock
5.I had a little bit problems
6.If I could make it again I would make it hollow
DJ🥳
1.it looked like a boat
2.it tasted sweet
3.it tasted like a chocolate chip cookie 🍪
4.it felt like a rock 🪨
5. I didn’t have any problems at all
6.if I could change it or make it again I would put white chocolate chips 👍

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1. Miss Naeem says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:48 pm
  
  Alisha – I’m glad it tasted sweet, what could you have done differently so it wasn’t so hard?
  
  Ahyan- Good, why would you make it hollow?
  
  DJ- Lovely evaluation, Do you prefer white chocolate?
  
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  1. Ahyan K. says:
    
    09/02/2024 at 1:54 pm
    
    DJ🥳
    Yes I would prefer white chocolate 🍫
    Alisha❤️
    Maybe not have made it so holllow or airy
    Ahyan💀
    I would make it hollow because I would like to try hollow bread 🥯
    
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Ebunoluwa I. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

Ebun
1.My bread looked mouthfiling.
2.My bread smelled delicious.
3.My bread tasted amazing.
4.My bread texture was like hard and soft altogether.
5.The problem I faced was that I made it look like a cookie.
6.I would make the chocolate chip stay inside not outside the cookie.

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1. Miss Woodman says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 2:18 pm
  
  Well done Ebun, how could you have kept the chocolate in the bread?
  
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Javishan R. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

1.My bread looked really tasty and I was desperate to eat it.
2.My bread smelled like a chocolate and sugary bread.
3.It was really tasty and I could feel the chocolate melting in my mouth.
4.The top of the bread was hard but the bottom and the inside was really soft.
5.I only faced a problem where it kept on falling apart but then I turned it into a circle.

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1. Mrs Khaliq says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:44 pm
  
  Why do you think the bread went hard?
  
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Subodh K. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

1. My bread looked large
2. My bread smelled like a bakery
3. My bread tasted like cookies
4. My bread texture was in a weird shape
5. The hardest bit was adding the chocolate chips and mixing the chocolate chips
6. I will change the shape
From subodh

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:04 pm
  
  Well done Subodh, you have thought a lot about your bread when evaluating. What could you do next time to make it easier to add the toppings?
  
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Safa A. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

My bread look like a hot dog
It smells like expired and it smells weird
It tasted like a chocolate croissant
The texted was like slippery at the bottom
I faced a problem by adding to much chocolate chip in my bread
I would improve by do not add too much chocolate chip

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:05 pm
  
  Well done Safa! Why was it a problem adding chocolate chips? What would you do next time to stop this from happening?
  
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Nabiha I. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:40 pm

My bread🥖 looked nice.
My bread smelled warm.
My bread tasted sweet.
It felt hard.
The problem was the dough was to sticky.
I would change it and make it bigger.

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:05 pm
  
  Great evaluation Nabiha! How can you make your bread bigger? What would you need to do?
  
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Chavi L. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:39 pm

1.It looked brilliant.
2.The breads smell was different when smelling with dough than cooked.
3.It tasted yummy.
4.The texture was ok.
5.The problem was that the chocolate chips were hard to put inside the dough to melt.
6.I would change the shape of the dough and change the topping.

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1. Miss Naeem says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 1:43 pm
  
  I’m glad you enjoyed it , what shape and topping would you have changed?
  
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Haroon E. says:

09/02/2024 at 1:38 pm

The look was nice
The smell was bad
The tast was bad
It was hard
The problem was it was little
The size

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1. Mr Diaus says:
  
  09/02/2024 at 5:06 pm
  
  Great job Haroon. How can you make your bread bigger? What would you need to do?
  
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