3 White – Retell a story – Broad Heath Primary School

11 responses

Yoshita P. says:

23/06/2022 at 10:41 am

My favourite part was when I made dinner and when Paddington flooded the bathroom and I loved it .

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Sayda A. says:

23/06/2022 at 10:40 am

Hello my favourite part was when padditon was excited to go to the house it was a good story but it l was confused with the talking of padditon,Mrs Brown and mr brown

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Lawan R. says:

23/06/2022 at 10:34 am

My favourite part was when Paddington went into the bath because he tried to get the water out of the bath and he was screaming for help
Good job to everyone

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Yahya K. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:32 am

My favourite part in the story was when Paddington went to the bar and slipped and made a big mess, also it is when Paddington was taking the water out of the bath with his hat because it was funny.
My favourite character is Paddington as he has the main role and is the main character.

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Muhammad D. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:32 am

It was also when paddington got stuck which was also when he drew amap of the darkest of peru and he got a hole in hat.

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Hussein H. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:32 am

My favourite part was when Paddington flooded the toilet,struggling to get out the bath and when he was going to tell his story to the browns and he fell asleep.my favourite character was Jonathan because he didn’t care about anything and wanted to slide downstairs like Paddington.The skill I used to retell the story was expression.I could improve it by changing area’s to his home because he could be his aunt Lucy and have lots of marmalade.

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Minhaj A. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:31 am

My favourite part of Paddington was when he was trying to climb out of the bath tub because it seemed funny and interesting.
When retelling, I’ve learnt a skill of expression.
I could improve the story by changing the areas to a winter area and Paddington could be by the street, being cold because Mrs Brown could be more worried about Paddington and give him a little shelter to keep him safe. Instead of having a shower he might of had an hot tub to keep him warm. I would also add a simile like he was cold as snow.

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Delilah R. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:29 am

Good job everyone!

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Delilah R. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:28 am

My favourite part is when Paddington gets stuck in the bath Paddington bear is a very funny character to be in a story because he has lots of accidents !.

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Muhammad D. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:26 am

I really enjoyed retelling a story,my favourite part was when Mr Brown and Mrs Brown found a bear and named him paddington my part was the taxi driver which was an easy character role.

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Delilah R. says:

20/06/2022 at 9:19 am

This was really fun I enjoyed doing this everyone had put lots of effort and thought all the performances were great ! I enjoyed this because my group tried and we had lots of fun.

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