Year 6 14.07.20 – Why you should visit Coventry

Today we would like you to persuade people why they should visit Coventry.

Use the pictures, links and videos to support your writing.

You may present this in any format you would like. This could be a persuasive letter, a poster or a brochure. You can type it on to the blog or send your work to us via email.

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Flattery – complimenting your audience.A person of your intelligence deserves much better than this.
Opinion – a personal viewpoint often presented as if fact.In my view, this is the best thing to have ever happened.
Hyperbole – exaggerated language used for effect.It is simply out of this world – stunning!
Personal pronouns – ‘I’, ‘you’ and ‘we’.You are the key to this entire idea succeeding – we will be with you all the way. I can’t thank you enough!
Imperative command – instructional language.Get on board and join us!
Triples – three points to support an argument.Safer streets means comfort, reassurance and peace of mind for you, your family and your friends.
Emotive language – vocabulary to make the audience/reader feel a particular emotion.There are thousands of animals at the mercy of our selfishness and disregard for kindness.
Statistics and figures – factual data used in a persuasive way.80% of people agreed that this would change their community for the better.
Rhetorical question – a question which implies its own answer.Who doesn’t want success?
Think about using the above techniques to support your arguments

71 thoughts on “Year 6 14.07.20 – Why you should visit Coventry

  1. Hello there! Always worn out employed at a job you don’t like? Why wouldn’t you work at Mc’Donald or something? Well, a person of your intelligence should not deserve should attitude like this! Why not have a day out! Reasonably thinking, why not visit the one, the only Coventry!
    Oh don’t tell me why because this is the greatest, finest, yet most educational place to have a day out! Remarkably brilliant with amazing artistic works under the work of engineer! But don’t underestimate the views as I say. Lots of locations to position on your map! Why not visit the Cathedral bombed to be a fortune. Also, without your understanding, we have built a new cathedral, built beautifully, stained with colorful glass and modern art from the Victorians. So as not said, book a ticket and fly your way to an adventure. Also, want to borrow one of our industrial food? That’s a A-Okay with us 👍🏻 There are unexplained mystery’s out there, so be careful. You don’t no what’s up our sleeve…. but no worries :)

  2. Thinking of taking a break from all of the commotion? Want to go somewhere without the excessive pollution and overpopulation? Well I know just the place to go! Coventry is perfect for a nice calm environment and not only will you enjoy your visit but you will also gain educational knowledge about the extrodinary city’s history . Visit the famouse Coventry Cathedral which had been bombed in The Blitz way back in World War II. Explore the remains and the cobbled floors from decades ago. You’ll even get to see the NEW cathedral and it’s astonishing glass paintings.

    If not why not visit our wonderful museums, from ancient artifacts to fossils, we’ve got it all! Pay a visit to our Herbert art gallery and museum to inspect immaculate pieces of art and have a look at some real animal bones. Marvel at the hippopotamus teeth and the stuffed animals and birds. Maybe visit the transport museum if your more into motors and have a look at the first ever cars and bikes ever to be made.

    But if your not in the mood for this kind of stuff we have a solution! Coombe Park is a calming, natural wonderland and is filled with wildlife. Exhilarating streams and towering trees, soaring birds and colourful flower buds. You’ll be sure to have a blast .

    But if your the sporty type then come over to Coventry to watch some top notch sports!Wasps, the historic rugby team which has a history dating back to 1867, has been a Coventry club since a move from London in 2014. They now play in the Premiership at the Ricoh Arena, and boast a captain in the shape of England international Joe Launchbury.

    So visit coventry and even more landmarks for a fun time for you and why not tag along with a few others? Whether it’s your family or friends , a visit to Coventry is just the right place to go. It’s not all museums and parks but we have many other places . Coventry is renowned for its historical landmarks so be sure to visit Lady Godiva’s statue. That’s right we have a statue as well and come over for an amazing story all about it…

    • Kinzah – this is amazing! Great writing and very engaging for your audience. A couple of things – there are a couple of homophone errors – can you find them and correct? Also capital letters …

  3. You should visit Coventry because:
    number 1: There loads of places you can visit such as the cathedral or the transport museum.
    number 2:Lots of shops and a mall!
    number 3:There are lots of restaurants, etc.

  4. Persuasive text
    Coventry is a place where you should come for a trip.There is many stuff to
    see here.One special thing is we have been awarded for the City of Culture 2021.There is many more to see here you will be amazed:
    -The Cathedral
    -Herbert Art Gallarey
    -Coombe Abbey park
    -War memorial park
    -Midland air museum
    -Belgrade theatre
    -The wave water park
    -Transport museum
    It will be so fun to come here and experience many thing to do and see.
    If you come Coventry you will see the ruins and now it is all built e.g The Cathedral is is now new built.

  5. You should visit Coventry because we have wonderful landmarks such as Coventry Cathedral and The transport museum. We also have unique history which you can learn about as you go around the city.

  6. Coventry:
    Coventry is an amazing city and easy to get to as its in the middle of England. It has got brilliant tourist attractions and you can visit the old and new cathedral. All the best tourist attractions will be listed below:
    .The Coventry transport museum.
    .The Wave water park
    .The Herbert art gallery.
    .Coombe Abbey park.
    . Belgrade theatre.
    And the Coventry cathedral.

  7. Why should people visit Coventry ?

    A little bit about Coventry!

    Coventry is a city, administrative centre and metropolitan borough in England and the United Kingdom. It is built on the River Sherbourne, which remains largely hidden by infrastructure, although it can be seen by the canal. Coventry has been a large settlement for centuries, although it was not founded and given its city status until the Middle Ages; since then it has been one of the most important and largest cities of the country. The conurbation consists of the Coventry and Bedworth Urban Area, being the 20th largest in the country; the city is governed by Coventry City Council.

    The history !

    The Romans founded a settlement in Baginton, next to the River Sowe, and another formed around a Saxon nunnery, founded . AD 700 by St Osburga, that was later left in ruins by King Canute’s invading Danish army in 1016. Earl Leofric of Mercia and his wife Lady Godiva built on the remains of the nunnery and founded a Benedictine monastery in 1043 dedicated to St Mary. In time, a market was established at the abbey gates and the settlement expanded.

    Coventry Castle was a motte and bailey castle in the city. It was built in the early 12th century by Ranulf de Gernon, 4th Earl of Chester. Its first known use was during The Anarchy when Robert Marmion, a supporter of King Stephen, expelled the monks from the adjacent priory of Saint Mary in 1144, and converted it into a fortress from which he waged a battle against the Earl. Marmion perished in the battle.It was demolished in the late 12th century and St Mary’s Guildhall was built on part of the site. It is assumed the name “Broadgate” comes from the area around the castle gates.

    By the 14th century, Coventry was an important centre of the cloth trade, and throughout the Middle Ages was one of the largest and most important cities in England. The bishops of Lichfield were often referred to as bishops of Coventry and Lichfield, or Lichfield and Coventry (from 1102 to 1541). Coventry claimed the status of a city by ancient prescriptive usage, was granted a charter of incorporation in 1345, and in 1451 became a county in its own right. The plays that William Shakespeare witnessed in Coventry during his boyhood or ‘teens’ may have influenced how his plays, such as Hamlet, came about.

    Visiting Coventry!

    There are many things to whilst visiting Coventry:
    *Visiting the Herbert Art Gallery
    *Visiting the Cathedral
    *Visiting the Transport museum


    You don’t have to visit a museum or a gallery or even a cathedral you can go shopping at places like :

    *Pound land
    *West Orchards (shopping Center / Mall)
    *Gallagher Retail Park

    If you dont want to walk around you can get the:
    Dessert places!

    *Cake Box
    *Jam Jar
    *And many more

    Places to eat
    *Mc Donalds
    *Frankie & Benny’s
    *2 Tone
    *Bagle Brunch

  8. Come to Coventry has amazing people and amazing parts of Coventry like town and the world will see you can learn about Lady Godiva also you can go to the Herbert art gallery to look at interesting pictures I learn about them.

  9. Are you looking for a peaceful vacation for the whole family to enjoy? Well look no further. Welcome to Coventry.
    Not only is Coventry a wonderful place with incredible history but it was elected the city of culture 2021. Did you know that Coventry will also be the host city for the Commonwealth Games 2022? Well you do now. Additionally, Coventry has been titled one of the top 10 cities in Britain. Some of the landmarks in Coventry are the Coventry cathedral, the transport museum, the herbert art gallery and much more.

  10. Welcome to Coventry.
    Please visit Coventry once in your lifetime, if not, then live here. It is in the middle of the country so it is easy to get there from any direction. Coventry is a place of wonder, joy and excitement. Its history dates back to the second world war where it was a major city in the Industry. It created many weapons and vehicles for the British army and because of this, the German Luftwaffe had bombed Coventry on the night of 14 November 1940 where the city’s cathedral had been destroyed.The ruins are still there but there is a new cathedral next to it. After World War II, Coventry rebuilt itself again and became a great city again. Coventry will be UK City Of Culture in 2021 and will host the Commonwealth games in 2022. You don’t need to worry about education because there are plenty of excellent rated schools by Ofsted and Coventry also has its own university.
    Tourist attractions:
    • The Wave water park
    •Transport museum
    •Herbert art gallery.
    •Coombe Abbey park.
    •War memorial park
    •Midland air museum
    •Belgrade theatre.
    • Coventry Cathedral

    • Fantastic work Muhammad, some amazing places to visit in Coventry!

      How easy is it for people to travel to Coventry if they live in other parts of the UK? Which methods of transport could they use?

      • Coventry is a fantastic city of attractions. It has been elected the 2021 city of culture. Thousands and thousands of different people with different cultures come here and see the most attractive landmarks. Coventry has one of the best universities in England.
        Tourist attractions:
        • The Wave water park
        •Transport museum
        •Herbert art gallery.
        •Coombe Abbey park.
        •War memorial park
        •Midland air museum
        •Belgrade theatre.
        •Coventry Cathedral
        •Lady Godiva statue

  11. Why you should visit Coventry :
    1) Because they are wonderful schools and your children can get great education here.
    2) You can make great memories as there many great buildings to take pictures with .
    3) The hotels which are here have nice service and they provide you with most things.
    4) Coventry is a place full of different types of culture which means different cultures own restaurants. So this means you can try foods from all over the place but your in Coventry.

  12. Persuasive text:

    Come to Coventry…

    Coventry is well- known for the bombing of the Coventry Cathedral which was left in ruins after a WWII bombing. Their is a 20th-century replacement , with abstract stained glass, stands beside it.

    Landmarks here;

    There are many places which you should go to in Coventry. There are some best sites you should watch out for such as; Coventry Transport Museum, Herbet art Gallery and The Lady Godiva Statue.

    The Herbet Art Gallery is named after Sir Alfred Herbert, a Coventry industrialist* and philanthropist* whose gifts enabled the original building to be opened in 1960. … In 2010, the museum and gallery received more than 300,000 visitors, making it one of the most popular free tourist attractions in the West Midlands.

    Overall you should come to Coventry because, you can see the ruins of one of England’s most magnificent cathedrals as well as this, to learn more about Lady Godiva and to see the statue. Furthermore, Coventry is well- known for the Coventry city of culture award. These are some of the very few reasons you should come to Coventry.


    Philanthropist – a person who gives generously to help other people.

    Industrialist – a person who owns or engages in the management of an industry.

  13. Visit Coventry if you want to make memories!
    Do you want your family to have a perfect day out?
    If you do come to Coventry!
    There are many things to do in Coventry. You can look at the history side of Coventry. For example the Transport museum or the Herbert art gallery or the old Coventry Cathedral
    Or you can go and have some fun in the play areas or Coventrys very own water park called ‘The Wave’

  14. This piece of text is about why you should come to Coventry. Coventry is a place of wonder which you should try out and a place which is calm where you live but very busy in the city center so why don’t you come. There is no place like Coventry.

    There is great education which can set you up for your life from primary all the way to university e.g BroadHeath, Bablake, Coventry University. To add to that The history here to learn about is fantastic you’ve got a cathedral, history museum and much more so you won’t get bored.
    You will never run out of food in Coventry there are fast food, grocery shops everywhere, your local corner shops, and most importantly desserts

    So in this text, I have explained why you should come here and that is to have a great future with education, you learn the city by looking at its history and you will never be hungry because of the shops every so I shall you in Coventry.

  15. Are you looking for some quality time with your family?
    Well come to Coventry city.
    You could visit the lady godiva did you know that there is a statue in the center of city center and every hour the clock would show lady godiva riding her horse and peeping tom would come out.
    Do your children need to have a lesson on Coventry well look no further! You can visit the cathedral it is a place where the world war had commenced, it was bombed and many lives were taken.
    The new cathedral is next to the one in ruins. (World war 2)
    Are you warm and sweaty well we have an indoor water park called the wave it will bring the family together and have a nice get the kids out of the way so the parents can have a break. Make sure you go in the morning it can get extremely busy in the afternoon.
    There is an amazing transport museum where there are cars from Centuries ago.
    There is an ice skating rink to learn how to ice skate and if you need help there are staff to help you.
    Belgrade theatre is a place where you can watch musicals and plays for an example I have been to see puss in boots and have Programs tp help people understand the story.
    Are you hungry after all of the sight seeing you have been doing well you won’t need to worry for much longer because behind the lady Godiva statue there are multiples of restaurants that you could choose from and have a delicious meal.
    Have fun exploring Coventry.

  16. Dear Sir/Madam,
    I am writing to let you know about the brilliant city of Coventry which attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors every year. Coventry is an amazing city, do not miss out on all the spectacular views!

    Firstly, Coventry has been awarded the award for the City of Culture 2021.
    You can expect large-scale spectacle, music, dance, theatre and poetry as well as more intimate, celebratory cultural and heritage experiences in every ward of the city.The city has a history of reinventing itself. It is a city of peace, and a city of innovation and a city of diversity. In 2021 we will celebrate everything in our history from the jet engine to watchmaking and even The Specials – so much started in Coventry and so much will continue to grow and develop into the future.

    There are also some very famous landmarks for you to see, located in the heart of the city, the City Centre. There are examples of these famous landmarks below.

    Coventry Cathedral
    The original St Michael’s Cathedral in Coventry was built between the late 14th century and early 15th century. It now stands ruined, bombed almost to destruction during the massive attack on the city by German bombers.
    The tower, spire, and outer wall of the church survived the bombing, but the rest of this historic building was destroyed. After the war, the cathedral was not rebuilt on site but left in ruins as a testament to the futility of war.

    Lady Godiva statue
    Lady Godiva is a key figure in the history of Coventry. Lady Godiva, the wife of Leofric, Earl of Mercia, reportedly rode naked around the city in a bid to get her husband to reduce taxes in the 11th Century. There has been a statue made in honour of Lady Godiva. Without Lady Godiva, the taxes would be much higher now by they are not because Lady Godiva rode through Coventry naked.

    The Transport museum
    It houses the largest collection of British-made road transport held in public ownership. Coventry Transport Museum is home to one of the largest collections of British road transport in the world – a collection of Designated national importance, consisting of 300 cycles, 120 motorcycles and 250 cars and commercial vehicles, and over a million archive and ephemera items.

    Herbert art gallery
    Housing approximately 320,000 objects, the Herbert’s collection is one of Coventry’s most important cultural assets and a priceless resource for engagement, learning and creativity.The Herbert has been actively developing a collection of art on the themes of conflict, peace and reconciliation. This is an important subject for the museum and for Coventry, reflecting the city’s role in promoting peace and reconciliation.

    Now you have read about Coventry and what makes it so unique, what do you think about it? Coventry is so unique and wonderful there is no match for it anywhere. You deserve the best and the best you will get it you visit Coventry! Visit Coventry as soon as possible, you will not be disappointed.

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