Super homework

Hi year 4 I would like to share some super examples of homework.

Julia and Bethany created an excellent piece of descriptive writing.

Not only did they use success criteria but applied their new handwriting skills and above all had presented their work beautifully.

It was a pleasure reading and marking their homework. They are definitely soaring to new heights.

 

 

 

 

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Let’s see who will impress me next week.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9 thoughts on “Super homework

  1. Wow! Well done Bethany and Julia, I have just read both, and they are absolutely amaizing!!!
    . Success criteria
    . Descriptive language
    . Time connectives
    . Prepositions
    . Adverbs
    . Adjectives
    I would have to say I’m speechless, all I have to say is ” Those pieces of homework are way better than my piece of homework!

    WELL DONE!!!!πŸ‘πŸ¦πŸ­

  2. Was an absolute pleasure reading your work Bethany and Julia, real effort was displayed. The great use of adjectives, adverbs and figurative language built great images in the reader’s mind!

    Well done, I look forward to seeing who impresses Mrs Sharma next week and makes a wow appearance on the blog.

  3. The standard of this work girls is excellent. You should be very proud of the quality you have produced. I really enjoyed reading it, perhaps next time I can see your smiling faces on the blog as well.
    I think though someone has spelt jewellery incorrectly.

  4. The standard of this work girls is excellent. You should be very proud of the quality you have produced. I really enjoyed reading it, perhaps next time I can see your smiling faces on the blog as well.

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