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Year 4 Reading Challenge- Spring 1

Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.  Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.  Now he was for it.  He was bound to get a beating now.  Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.  Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.  Tom had merely thrown the branch to the other end of the graveyard and the dog had gone scampering after it.

‘Yer can take yer arm down now, boy,’ he said quietly. ‘I think you and I ‘ad better go inside and sort a few things out.  Come on,’ and with that he stepped aside for Willie to go in front of him along the path.

Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered.  Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones.  The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.  His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach.  He walked through the front door and stood in the hallway, feeling the perspiration turn cold and clammy.  Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter.

‘Don’t dither out there,’ he said, ‘come on in.’

Willie did so but his body felt as if it no longer belonged to him.  It seemed to move of its own accord.  Tom’s voice grew more distant.  It reverberated as if it was being thrown back at him from the walls of a cave.  He sat down on the stool feeling numb.

Tom picked up a poker and walked across to the fire.  Now he was going the get it, he thought, and he clutched tightly onto the seat of the stool.  Tom looked down at him.

‘About Sammy,’ he heard him say.  He watched him poke the fire and then he didn’t hear any more.  He knew that Tom was speaking to him but he couldn’t take his eyes off the poker.  It sent the hot coke tumbling in all directions.  He saw Tom’s brown wrinkled hand lift it out of the fire.  The tip was red, almost white in places.  He was certain that he was going to be branded with it.  The room seemed to swim and he heard both his and Tom’s voice echoing.  He watched the tip of the poker spin and come closer to him and then the floor came towards him and it went dark.  He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.

Tom opened the front window and lifted him through it.

‘Breathe in deep,’ Willie heard him say.  ‘Take in a good sniff.’

He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.

‘That’s right, go on, I’m ‘olding you.  Take in a good sniff.  Let yer throat open.’

Willie drank in some more air.  A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

Tom wiped his mouth and face with the scarf.  The pain in Willie’s stomach had gone but he felt drained like a rag doll.  Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair.  His small body sank comfortably into the old soft expanse of chair.  His feet barely reached the edge of the seat.  Tom tucked a blanket round him, drew up a chair by the fire and watched Willie fall asleep.

Bronze:

Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?

Silver:

How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?

Gold:

Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.

85 responses to “Year 4 Reading Challenge- Spring 1”

  1. Xlexben F.

    Bronze
    Willie was scared because he walked shakily towards the cottage .
    Silver
    I think willie is happy because Mr Tom is being kind to him.
    Gold
    I was scared in that scary place but Mr Tom helped me get out of that place we didn’t eat anything we thought we would not be there for a long time .

  2. Rafay K.

    bronze
    he is scared because it said”shakliy to the cottage.”
    silver
    he feels kind and freindly because he helped willie.

  3. Ramarni J.

    Bronze:
    I know that Willie was scared because he shakily walked to the cottage.
    Sliver: Willie was brave because Tom was happy kind and helping

  4. Umar S.

    Bronze

    He is scared because it says that Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.

    Silver

    He felt happy because tom was helping willie.

  5. Karanbir B.

    Bronze
    Willie is scared because in the text it said “Willie walked shakily towards the cottage and his head lowered.”
    Silver
    Willie feels grateful of Tom because he is helping Willie when he is facing a problem.

  6. Ammara K.

    Bronze
    I think Willie is scared because in the text it says Willie walked shakily towards the cottage
    Silver
    I think Willie is feeling happy because Mr Tom was nice and helped him whenever he needed
    Gold
    Dear Diary,
    Yesterday, I felt awfully scared because Mr Tom throwed the stick across my face. He told me to follow him, I thought he was going to shout at me but instead Mr Tom was nice to me. I thought Mr Tom was going to shout so I felt really scared but instead I vomited
    goodbye Diary,
    Your sincerely Ammara

  7. Ebenezer O.

    Bronze
    Willie is scared because it says he walked shakily.
    Silver
    Willie
    I think Willie felt brave

  8. Ibraheem S.

    Bronze:
    Wille is scared because it says Willie walked shakily towards the cottage his head lowered.
    Silver:
    I think Willlie Is surprised because Willie automatically flung his arms across his face.
    Gold
    Dear diary,
    “Hello Willie,I am glad I came to see you.” “I am just here to tell you a question.” How do you feel?” Do you feel surprised shocked?”I think you were shocked because in the first paragraph is was talking about you shocked that Tom came.

  9. Khadija A.

    bronze
    The evidence that shows in the text it said wilie walked shakily to the cottage. I know this because if somebody was shaking that means they are devistated to look in side.
    silver
    wilie has mr tom that helps him with a problem when he is scared at all time.

  10. Ibrahim M.

    Gold :
    Dear diary,

    Yesterday I was very scared because I was about to get beaten by a man called Mr Tom, so I put my hands in front of my face and body to defend myself but he didn’t cane me with the branch. I was confused. He then told me to follow him to his house. When I followed him I was absolutely petrified.

    When we arrived I felt a sharp pain in my stomach, feeling even more scared. I entered the house feeling he was going to beat me with a metal pole or brick. Clutching the stool, I gulped but all Mr Tom quietly said was
    “About Sammy,” holding a poker. I knew Tom was speaking but I didn’t listen because I couldn’t take my eyes of the poker. But then I felt two large hands grip me from behind and hold me out from the window. I thought, 
    ” This is it.” Mr Tom then told me to breathe but then I said that I would be sick. He told me to breathe again but then I vomited and hung limply in his arms.  He tucked me into bed and I felt safe and comfortable, I never thought I could feel safe with Mr Tom. Mr Tom is not as scary as I thought.

    Willie.

  11. Hudayifah A.

    Bronze:
    He was scared I know this because the text said: “he walked shakily into the cottage,”
    Silver:
    At the end of the text, I think Willie thinks Tom is kind because he helped him feel better.

  12. Hasbia D.

    Bronze:
    Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?
    The evidence that suggests Willie is feeling scared is that in the text it says that ‘Willie froze while he was holding the branch and he walked shakily towards the cottage.’ The verb ‘froze’ indicates that he is so terrified that he can’t move. Furthermore, the adverb ‘shakily’ suggests that he is feeling unsteady and weak from fear. My point is further supported with ‘The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.’
    Silver:
    How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?
    It think Willie is terrified of Tom. On countless occasions he has feared to be punished by him only to realize he only wants to help. This is apparent with,’Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.’ The verb ‘cry’ suggests that Willie is afraid of what is to come. My point that Willie is terrified of Tom is further supported with ‘He was certain that he was going to be branded with it.’
    Gold:
    Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.
    Dear Diary,
    As I held the branch still in my hand sweat broke out of my armpits.That was it ; I thought that he was going to beat me up. Tom grabbed the branch out of my hand and held it high in the air just like how I did. But, to my relief Tom just threw the branch away and the dog ran after it.
    We were going to go inside but each step I walked to the cottage I was shivering with fright. Tears were going to come down but I blinked them away. Through my blurred eyes I could only see the turf from the grass and the small rocks. Sweat streamed down my forehead and a sharp pain churned inside my tummy. I walked into the hallway and felt myself cooling down.
    I mindlessly I walked into the room and sat on the stool. Toms voice seemed to echo in my ears. Tom grabbed the poker and moved around the coal in the fire place. Now I knew he was going to burn me with the poker. I clutched the edge of my stool nervously. My eyes were frozen on the poker. The room started to spin and all the sounds became distant. It seemed like the poker was aiming for me, and I felt like I was drowning into the floor. Then the next second I was lifted up to the window and Tom urged me to breathe in. I gulped in the fresh air. Then I vomited. I did it a couple of times until there was no more left in me.
    I couldn’t remember what happened next but I knew I had fallen into a deep sleep.
    Willie

  13. Sania K.

    Bronze:
    Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?
    Willie is feeling scared I know this because it says Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.
    I know this because people do not walk somewhere shakily they go there normally.
    Silver
    How do you think Willie thinks about Mr Tom and why ?
    I think Willie is thankful this is because Mr Tom is helping Willie a lot .
    Gold
    Write a diary entry about Willies feelings.
    Dear Diary
    When I was holding the branch still up high I started took sweat then Me Tom helped me and lifted it up for me .
    He said you should take you’re arm down and come with me I was terrified . I walked shakily towards the cottage with my head down .
    I could see through my blurred eyes I saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones. I felt like a drained doll .

  14. Najma O.

    Bronze
    I know Wille is scared because I’m the text it says “ Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered. Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones. The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest. His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach.”

    Silver
    Willie was probably furious because Mr Tom said “ breathe in and out and Willie was about sick again “

    Gold
    I am really upset right know because I went in a horrific adventure today me and Mr Tom and I went to go to the jungle and I was so scared of lions that I ran to the toilet feeling like I was going to vomiting 🤮 but Mr Tom came to the toilet and said “can you please take a breathe in and out “ I did it and then I felt sick again and decided to vomit

    1. Najma O.

      Silver
      Willie was probably furious because Mr Tom said “breathe in and out “ while Wille breathed in and out he had felt sick again

    2. Najma O.

      Silver
      Willie was probably furious because Mr Tom said “breathe in and out “ while Wille breathed in and out he had felt sick again

      The first vomiting was meant to be vomit

  15. Isah C.

    Bronze
    Beacuse hes scared it says he wallked shirkly and herd loudly

    Silver
    Beacuse he wallked through the fire whiped his mouth

    Gold

    Wile was feeling scared beacuse went beacuse he went in the coset and herd loun

  16. Elyas A.

    Bronze:
    Willie was scared walked shakily towards the cottage.
    Silver:
    Mr Tom was friendly and recspect to Willie and make him good and happy.
    Gold:
    Dear Diary
    I felt scared, lonely and sad. Mr Tom was helping me to not be alone and Mr Tom is too friendly to me and he let me to stay on his house.

  17. Zahraa Y.

    Bronz⭐️✨
    Willie was scared i know this becouse in the text it said”Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.

    Silver☁️🌟
    I think pretty brave becouse mr Tom is helping her so she felt ok.

  18. Tipian I.

    Bronze :
    ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
    Willie is scared because it says Willie walked shakily towards the cottage .
    Silver :
    ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
    I think it’s because mr Tom is showing kindness towards him and helping Willie .
    Gold :
    ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
    Dear diary ,
    I was terrified last night but , I can’t believe mr Tom helped me out .I couldn’t stop breathing hard because of how scared i was a big thanks to mr Tom .I had a hard time that day but now I’m fine and once again a big thank you to mr Tom .

  19. Tana I.

    Bronze
    Willie was scared because it says Willie walked shakily to the cottage.
    Silver
    I think Willie feels brave next to Mr Tom
    because he help Willie he when need.

  20. Tyson T.

    1.Wille is scared because he will get a beating
    2.Wille is feeling upset about Mr Tom
    3.
    Dear Diary,
    Today, Mr Tom and me went out. I felt scared because I thought I was going to get in trouble if I was spotted

  21. Yedullah S.

    Bronze
    He was bound to get a beating.
    I think this because he thinks he will get beaten.
    Silver
    I think he feels thankful because Tom helps him in a lot of sentences.

  22. Saffa M.

    I know that willie is feeling scared because in the text it says that Willie walked shakily towards the cottage
    Silver
    I think willie is grateful at tom because when he felt to people grabbing him tom comfort him

  23. Ismael K.

    Bronze
    Wille is scared because the branch was still held high in his hand.

  24. Kamil N.

    Bronze
    Wille automatically flanged his arm and gave a cry

  25. Haroon K.

    Bronze
    Willie is feeling scare because he is protecting himself by putting his arms in the way… The evidence in the text shows this, ” Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and have a cry. ”
    Silver
    Willie feels Mr Tom is very friendly and Kind towards him… This shows in the text. ” Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair”.

  26. Ayaan M.

    Bronze:
    I think willie felt scared because in the story it says “Willie walked shakily to the cottage.
    Silver:
    I thought willie was feeling great near tom because he helped him when he was scared.
    Gold:
    Dear diary,
    I was really terrified on that adventure but mr tom helped me when I was feeling scared.We barely got any food as we thought it would take us a long time to get there.I was really scared too.

  27. Nuha I.

    I have completed the Reading Challenge in my homework book.

  28. Mohammed W.

    Bronze:
    I think that Willie was feeling scared because in the text it states that “Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.”
    Silver:
    I believe that Willie feels anxious around Mr Tom because he told Willie to breath in air but when Willie was breathing in air he was vomiting.
    Gold:
    Yesterday, Mr Tom took a branch from me but, as he took it of me I felt upset. As he threw it I got his hand and threw it across his face. After that, as I was following Mr Tom I was anxious and scared. When Tom told me to breath in air I felt like running away however instead I didn’t but I vomited.

  29. Hanfaa N.

    Bronze
    The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.
    I think it is this because he is showing his feelings.
    Silver
    I think how Willie feels about Mr Tom is that he is brave because he went in a cave. Mr Tom is helpful and kind as he made Willie feel much better.

  30. Ali A.

    Bronze
    The evidence that shows me in the text that Willie is scared was that it said Willie walked shakily to the cottage. I know this because if someone is shaking in a fright when opening something is when someone is nervous or scared to see what’s inside.

    Silver
    Willie feels really grateful for Tom because Tom is helping Willie when he is scared or having a problem.
    Gold

    Dear Diary,
    I was very scared in that creepy adventure but we are good thanks to Mr Tom who helped me get out. We barely got food as we thought we wear not going to be there for a long time. It was really scary but after all the pain we got back and recovered from anything.
    Goodbye Diary.

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