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Year 4 Reading Challenge- Spring 1

Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.  Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.  Now he was for it.  He was bound to get a beating now.  Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.  Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.  Tom had merely thrown the branch to the other end of the graveyard and the dog had gone scampering after it.

‘Yer can take yer arm down now, boy,’ he said quietly. ‘I think you and I ‘ad better go inside and sort a few things out.  Come on,’ and with that he stepped aside for Willie to go in front of him along the path.

Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered.  Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones.  The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.  His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach.  He walked through the front door and stood in the hallway, feeling the perspiration turn cold and clammy.  Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter.

‘Don’t dither out there,’ he said, ‘come on in.’

Willie did so but his body felt as if it no longer belonged to him.  It seemed to move of its own accord.  Tom’s voice grew more distant.  It reverberated as if it was being thrown back at him from the walls of a cave.  He sat down on the stool feeling numb.

Tom picked up a poker and walked across to the fire.  Now he was going the get it, he thought, and he clutched tightly onto the seat of the stool.  Tom looked down at him.

‘About Sammy,’ he heard him say.  He watched him poke the fire and then he didn’t hear any more.  He knew that Tom was speaking to him but he couldn’t take his eyes off the poker.  It sent the hot coke tumbling in all directions.  He saw Tom’s brown wrinkled hand lift it out of the fire.  The tip was red, almost white in places.  He was certain that he was going to be branded with it.  The room seemed to swim and he heard both his and Tom’s voice echoing.  He watched the tip of the poker spin and come closer to him and then the floor came towards him and it went dark.  He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.

Tom opened the front window and lifted him through it.

‘Breathe in deep,’ Willie heard him say.  ‘Take in a good sniff.’

He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.

‘That’s right, go on, I’m ‘olding you.  Take in a good sniff.  Let yer throat open.’

Willie drank in some more air.  A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

Tom wiped his mouth and face with the scarf.  The pain in Willie’s stomach had gone but he felt drained like a rag doll.  Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair.  His small body sank comfortably into the old soft expanse of chair.  His feet barely reached the edge of the seat.  Tom tucked a blanket round him, drew up a chair by the fire and watched Willie fall asleep.

Bronze:

Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?

Silver:

How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?

Gold:

Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.

85 responses to “Year 4 Reading Challenge- Spring 1”

  1. Aro M.

    Bronze
    he scared because he felt something is inside his stomach

  2. Abdullah K.

    Bronze:
    Wille is scared because he nows he is going to get a beating.Through the quotation “He was bound to get a beating now”.This shows me as a reader that he was feeling scared because he knew he was going to get hit.
    Silver:
    Wille feels scared beacause he used to get hit by his mother back in London and that’s what he thought Mr Tom would do to.
    Gold:
    Dear Diary,
    I was so afraid of Mr Tom beacuse I thought he was going to give me the beating with the stick I was so nervous.Back in London that’s what my mother used to do to me so I thought it would have been the same at the countryside with Mr Tom.I had calmed down after Mr Tom put me in the armchair he did comfort me I felt like this was the actual home.

  3. Mohammed S.

    Bronze-
    Willie was scared because he that that Tom was going to beat him up I know this because in the text or says “He was bound to get a beating.”
    Silver-
    I think Willie is scared of Mr Tom because in the text it says “Sweat broke out from under his armpits.”
    Gold-
    Dear diary,
    Mr Tom is with me I am extremely scared. Sweat is running down from my forehead to my chin I’m very anxious. Whenever I come in contact with him I feel uneasy. I am suffering in pain.
    Your sincerely,
    Willie

  4. Rubab G.

    BRONZE

    i think that tom is scared because he is sweeting. he is sweeting becaues he is paniking and worrying. another reason we know he is scaraed is becaues he is worryeing that he wil get hitted. he is shock that he wasnt hitted.

  5. Aarav R.

    Bronze
    Wille was feeling scared because in the text it said that Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.
    Silver
    Scared because he never replies to him and in the text it said he felt numb when said don’t dither come out there he said come on in.
    Gold
    Dear dairy
    Today has been one of the most scariest day of my life when I thought that Tom was going to hit me with a stick but he threw it for the dogs and I also felt numb
    and I also felt like my body didn’t belong to me.

  6. Kirtan P.

    Bronze:
    Willie was scared because in the text it said ‘Willie froze’ It also said Willie walked shakily. I think this because froze means very still and Shakily means you’re shaking because you’re very scared.

  7. Rayyana M.

    Bronze
    It says ‘Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand’
    ‘Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead’
    Silver
    He is scared of Mr Tom since it says ‘Now he was for it. He was bound to get a beating now. Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up. ‘so he was terrified of Mr Tom
    Gold
    Dear Dairy,
    I was scared when Mr Tom walked up to me and took the stick me and a nearly hit me I was terrified. He actually got me out and threw the stick for the dog and she took me to to his house.

  8. Caleb A.

    Silver
    I think Willie was feeling happy because Tom was prottecting him
    Gold
    Tom was fieling sad scared sick hot and relaxed.

  9. Mehreen I.

    Bronze
    Willie has swear on his head nad armpits and he walked shkily.
    Ot show he was scared.
    Silver
    Willie felt good with Mr Tom because he took care of him.
    Gold
    I was scared. Mr Tom came and helped me and took me in his cottage.
    He put me in a comfortable chair and covered me with blanket.

  10. Noah J.

    Bronze
    Willie is scared because it says Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.
    Silver
    Willie feels Mr Tom is agitated because it says came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.

  11. Bakary C.

    BRONZE
    Willie was scared that Tom was going to beat him up.
    Silver
    Friendly because Tom did not beat him down.
    Gold
    Diary of Tom
    1. Scared
    2.shocked
    3.worried
    4.sick
    5. Hot
    6. Relaxed

  12. Sarah A.

    Bronze
    It says he flung his arms across his face and started to cry.
    Silver
    I think Willie feels about Mr Tom , he feels a bit worried and happy
    Gold

  13. Muhammad R.

    Bronze
    Because it says willie walked shakily
    Silver
    Because Willie feels grateful for Tom because Tom is helping williewhen he is scared
    Gold
    Dear diary
    I was to scared but thanks to Mr Tom I was grateful that Mr Tom helped me out I barely had any food to survive I just Have to say thank you Mr tom

  14. Maryam N.

    Bronze
    He is scared because it ses he walked shakily to the cottage.
    Silver
    I think he felt happy about Tom.

  15. Andre M.

    Bronze
    Wille feels scared
    Silver
    He felt safe because he was taking care of him
    Gold
    Dear dirary
    Today me an Mr tom went out I was really scared because we were in a grave yard and when we got into the cottage Mr tom told me take a big gulp of air. And after I took one gulp of air I felt a wave of nausea go trough me and then I vomited.

  16. Romeesa T.

    Bronze
    Willie was scared because someone was shaking their leg in his house.
    silver
    Willie feel that Mr Tom is kind and grateful

  17. Markuss B.

    Willie is scared because he started sweating at the first pharagraph.
    Willie is telling scared of Tom because he walked shakily to the cottage.

  18. Aran K.

    Bronze
    She is scared because she’s shaking a lot.
    Silver
    Happy because Mr Tom helped Willie to feel safer and not scared.

  19. Ameen K.

    Bronze-
    He was scared because it said he was walking shakily towards the cottage.

    Silver-
    He was scared because he thought Mr Tom would throw the branch at him.
    Gold-
    Dear Diary,
    I was extremely scared in that
    eerie outside adventure.
    thank you to mr Tom who helped me get
    out of that mistake.
    We hardly ate as we thought we were not going to be there for a long time.
    Your sincerely
    Willie

  20. Elham S.

    Bronze
    Willie was feeling down hearted because In the text it says he walked shakily towards the cottage.
    Silver
    Willie feels anxisious because Mr Tom because mr tom doesn’t really know him.
    Gold
    Dear Diary
    I feel very upset because Mr tom thinks i’m a person who’s going to destroy his life, but i’m just here to introduce myself. Mr tom is not going to let me do a thing but there is one thing he is going to and that is he’s going to get his garden stick and start to chase me but i am a kind boy i’m just a next door neighbour and if you are a neighbour then your kind to other and people around you. The things that Mr Tom just wants to do is that he get his garden things and start chasing me around his house and backyard to get me out of here because he doesn’t know me, but all I try to do is just say ”no no I just want to introduce myself please just let me introduce myself please,you’re just going to run away from me all my life just please let me just introduce myself”Mr Tom has no use from himself he just can’t do no work himself but still he still he just can’t hit the children no not that you can’t do that at all so just be disrespectful on others and not being kind. I can’t remember much because I fell into a deep deep sleep.

  21. Retaj I.

    Bronze
    Willie is feeling scared because he was sweating also In the text it says he walked shakily towards the cottage.
    Silver
    He feels strange because in the text it says Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter
    Gold
    Dear Diary
    Willie feels strange and he was sweating alot he also felt sick because in the text it says ‘A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited’.

  22. Estera V.

    Bronze:
    Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead is the evidence.I think this because it says he is sweating and you normally sweat when your nervous.
    Silver:
    I think Willie felt anxiety about Mr Tom because he doesn’t really know him

  23. Abdulahi D.

    willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his fore head.This quote shows that Willie is scared.(Bronze).
    Silver: Willie felt suprised as he thought that Tom would throw the branch at him but he throw it at the other end of the grave yard.

  24. Zahra D.

    *Bronze*
    Evidence in the text showing that Willie is scared is “Willie walked shakily towards the cottage” because it says that in the text.
    *Silver*
    I think Willie feels nervous about Tom because whenever Tom speaks to Willie, he never replies in the text. Also when Willie said, “I feel sick.” Tom never said anything.
    *Gold*

    Dear Diary,
    I am writing about what happened yesterday afternoon with Mr Tom. He was so nice that he threw a stick for me to the dog to go fetch. I maybe felt a bit embarrassed. Anyways, he took me inside his cottage. It was quite small but when we got in, he told me to breathe air. It didn’t feel very nice so I had to vomit.
    Zahra.

  25. Lusardo M.

    Bronze:
    Willie walked shakily towards the cottage .
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    1. Lusardo M.

      Bronze:
      Willie walked shakily towards the cottage .
      💫⭐️💫⭐️💫⭐️💫⭐️💫⭐️💫⭐️💫⭐️💫
      Silver:
      Tom was brave.
      And Tom was respectful and made Willie Feel better
      👑💫👑💫👑💫👑💫👑💫👑💫👑💫👑💫
      Gold:
      Dear Diary,
      I was extremely mouldy in that
      eerie, outside adventure
      thank you to Mr Tom who helped me get
      out of that error.
      We hardly ate as we thought we were not going to be there for a long time.
      It was really scary but after all the pain we got back and reformed from everything that happened
      Your sincerely
      (WILLIE)
      Thank you

  26. Zeyd H.

    Bronze:
    Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead is the evidence.I think this because it says he is sweating and you normally sweat when your nervous.
    Silver:
    I think Willie felt anxiety about Mr Tom because he doesn’t really know him.
    Gold:
    Dear Diary,
    Today has been a petrifying day.I was stuck in a cave and almost came to death.But thanks to Mr Tom, I had made it out alive.There wasn’t any food so I was very hungry. I was in pain but luckily we made it out.I have to say I would’ve been still in there if it wasn’t for Mr Tom.

  27. Adam J.

    Bronze
    In the text it says Willie shakily walked to the cottage.
    Silver
    Willie feels happy because it says Mr Tom rapped his mouth with his scarf.
    Gold
    – Willie froze because he was very scared.
    – Willie gave a cry .
    – Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.
    – Willies sweat came down the sis of his head and chess.
    – Willies body felt as if it did not belong to him.
    -Willie watched the tip of poker and felt to large hands grip him from behind.
    -Willie breathed in deep.
    – Willies body sank in the old soft expanse of chair.

  28. Yaseen E.

    Bronze
    This is because Willie walked shakily towards the cottage .
    Silver
    Mr Tom was helping her so she was not scared.

  29. Sameeha A.

    I have completed the challenge in my homework book.

  30. Abul-Qasim H.

    Bronze:

    Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?
    Willie walked, shakily, to the cottage. You shake when you are feeling scared or nervous and sometimes terrier because you don’t know what is going to be happening next.

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