5 White Dragon’s Den – Broad Heath Primary School

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Elyas A. says:

17/11/2022 at 3:36 pm

Why did you only use the pros in your pitch? the pitch is of the pros are is there of there pitch

What features of persuasion did you use? what happing the pros are powerful

Watch our presentations (dragons den style) Were you persuaded? the dragons were style

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Miski M. says:

13/11/2022 at 12:21 pm

We used rhetorical questions.“ Why waste you time buying chocolate ever again?”

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Mohammed W. says:

11/11/2022 at 9:12 am

We used repition to make the person get the words into their heads.I was persuaded

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Ayaan M. says:

10/11/2022 at 5:56 pm

We had used repettition so we could make them keep on thinking about and also so you can easily persuade them and make them buy your product so you have other people to buy it to

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Tipian I. says:

09/11/2022 at 7:01 pm

I used repetition in our persuasive text for an example, the chocolate covered ants have that amazing crunch and also that chocolate covered ants is the best chocolate .

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Zahraa Y. says:

09/11/2022 at 4:19 pm

I just wanted to ask for my own(me Rafay. And Markuss) why is are’s not there?
I used repeating the words and I tried using interesting words
I was nit persuaded by any of these whatsoever.

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1. Zahraa Y. says:
  
  09/11/2022 at 4:19 pm
  
  Not persuaded sorry a spelling mistake.
  
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