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once upon time hansel and gretel lived with evil stepmother,
as their mother passed away when they were babies. their father was work as wood cutter.
one day,the ivel stepmother and their father they went to the the forest for picnic but it was not, they left hansel and gretel into the forest but clever hansel droped the paddels on the floor for each steps so that to known the way backhome and they did.
in the second times hansel drop bread crumble but the birds ate all the crumble, then they lost in the forest for three days.
they keep walking they found the house made by candle and chocolate, they heard voice said who eat at my house, then they saw a witch and the witch welcome them in the house. they eat and sleep well.
in the morning, they saw the evil witch while they want to enter onto the treasure room. the witch locked hansel in to the cage and asked gretel to make food in order hansel to become fat and eat him. but hansel did not he was dig the hole and put the food.
one day the gretel push the witch into the oven and she took the key and unlocked the cage, also they took the treasure and run away
they able to find a way home and found their father, they gave treasure to their father and rejoin with their family and live happily ever after
Wow! What a superb effort! Well done!
Made floating pirate ship , video uploaded. Caught up with education city to best Freya could . Does not know the hasselt greatal story please recap with her as she was not in school .
Well done. I can’t wait to see your ship and listen to your tables. We will go over the story again Freya.
Freya is a little poorly uploaded vid trying her best up to 20
Shayan send the video.He scored 22 in the hit button.
English homework:
Once upon a time there was a boy called Hansel and a girl called Gretel also there Dad who was a wood cutter and there stepmother who don’t like the children.So she decides to leave them in the forest.She told the Dad about it.She wanted to get rid of the kids.Hacel and Gretel heared about it,Gretel started crying and then Hansel said don’t worry I have an idea how to come home back.Hancel started picking up pables.In the morning when there stepmother bring them to the forest,Hansel was dropping some pables on the way.When they reached there stepmother say I will fetch you in the night. Hansel and Gretel started waiting until the night.But it was too dark and there stepmother didn’t come.Then they started following the pables and they made there way back home.Dad was happy to see them but there stepmother was angry and furious.There stepmother think to leave them in the forest again and lock the door of the house so they can’t collect the pables again.Hansel try to open the door but he couldn’t,then he got the bread and broke into pieces and put into his pocket.In the the morning stepmothe bring them deeper to the forest.On the way Hancel was dropping the bread crumps.There stepmother said I will collect you in the night but she didn’t come again.They wanted to follow the crumps but birds eat all of them.They don’t where to go so they just start walking.But on the way they saw a delicious candy house.They got a piece of candy from the house,then the door starts opening they got worried,a witch came out of the house the children asked the witch they are hungry they ate some food they fell asleep in the bed inside the house the bed was soft in the morning Gretel cooked some food for Hansel so he could get fat for the witch to eat Gretel was still cooking every time the witch says is Hansel fat to eat then he was the witch asked Gretel to put his brother in the oven she said I Don,t now how to so the witch put her head inside the oven Gretel pushed the witch into the oven and closed the door of it and got the keys and open the cage were Hansel was in they both saw a golden and silver cash then they got it they even made their way out of the house they were walking anywhere again and finally made their way back home they told their father what had happened and what the stepmother did the father told the stepmother to get out of the house but the wolf ate her the wood cutter was still alive.
Waniya made a paper boat she will bring in school
Waniya finished math homework tim table
She try 4 5 tim
Ok please can you bring this in to show?
Maryum has done her 2x table we sent the video in.
Maths
I have done my maths homework and I have uploaded the videos
My highest score on Topmarks was 9.
English
Once upon a time there was a poor family. There was a dad, an evil step mother and two children called Hansel and Gretel.
They didn’t get a lot of food because they were poor. So, the evil mother wanted to send the kids to the forest.
Hansel and Gretel knew this and Hansel had a plan. His plan was to drop some pebbles on the way so they can use it to find their way home.
The evil step mother did not like this so sent them back with some bread. This time, Hansel used the bread crumbs to help them home but the birds eat it.
Hansel and Gretel got lost but found a house made of ginger bread, cakes, candy and lollipops. Inside the house was a wicked witch.
The witch took them into the house and wanted to eat them. Gretel pushed the witch into the hot oven and then ran away with some treasure from the house.
They then found their dad and gave him a big hug. The stepmother was not there anymore and they lived happily ever after.
Well done Kayla! This is a fantastic effort.
I played hit the button I got 5/6 and 17/18 I read my book
Good scores. Please can you complete another piece of homework. The requirement is two pieces per week.
We’ve uploaded a video of Yusuf reading the 2 times table up 50! He also did the ‘Hit the Button’ game and scored 22. Yusuf also rewrote Hansel & Gretal in his homework book. 🍪
Thank you! Superb effort Yusuf!
Once upon a time there was a poor woodcutter who looked after two children. Hansel was the boy and Gretal was the girl. One day their father wanted to marry, so he married a wicked, old women which was a stepmother and she hated her children so she came up with a nasty horrible , plan. She wanted to put the children in the forest. Hansel heard the plan, so he went outside and collected pebbles.
The next day they were going to the forest, so every time they were going he dropped pebbles. When they arrived their parents left Hansel and Gretal went back home by following the trail of pebbles.
When they arrived, their dad was so much happy when they arrived but the stepmother was not so sadly she let them so deep in the forest.
When their parents were gone, they walked for three days and then they found a sweat house made with tasty, delicious food they were eating and eating til a little sound came who is nibbling in my house.then they dropped the food and hiding somewhere the witch said you can come they eaten more tasty food in and they went to bed at the morning Hansel was put in prison and Gretal was in bed the witch woke her up to make food Hansel eat all the food and Gretal gust eat bones and the gretal had to fix the fire and then she told the witch she could not then she pushed the witch then she was dead.they got the treasure and went home their mother died as well. The end
I score 24/24 in hit the button
Great score, Noah.
Aiyla got 24/24
i have uploaded a video of her doing her 2 times table
Hi Aiyla. Super work. I have just watched your video.
You have remembered the story well, Noah however you must remember to read through your sentences to make sure that you haven’t missed any words out.
I have completed my maths homework and sent in a video.
English.
Once a upon a time there lived a poor wood cutter that had two children they were called Hansel and Gretel. They lived with their evil stepmother who did not like them. So she decided to take them into the deep dar forest and leave them there but Hansel overhead the evil stepmother so he collected some shiny pebbles and dropped them on the way therefore he was able to find his way home. The step mother pretended to be happy when they come home. She then made them go back to the forest, this time Hansel dropped breadcrumbs to lead them home unfortunately the birds had ate the breadcrumbs. They could not find their way back home. Then they saw a Snow White bird and it lead them to a unique elegant sweet house. They ran and started to eat the candy house as they were very hungry. A voice from inside came and said “who is nibbling at my house?” The witch came out of her house and said “come in I got loads of treats”. She gave them lots of candy then showed them to her soft beds and they went to sleep. When Gretel woke up the witch showed her where Hansel was in a cage. She told Gretel to make lots of food so she can fatten Hansel up and then eat him. Hansel ate all the food and the witch told him to stick his finger out everyday but instead he stuck a stick out to show her how fat he had got. She got Impatient and decided she was going to eat him tonight. The witch asked Gretel to check if the oven was hot enough and she said she don’t know. Gretel then gave the witch a huge mighty push into the oven and they never saw the witch again. Hansel and Gretel lived happily ever after.
I have seen your video, Murtaza. You did a great job at reciting your time tables.
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You also retold the story well using some fantastic conjunctions and expanded noun phrases but you must remember an expanded noun phrase has a comma after the first adjective.
**Adjective (comma) Adjective Noun**
Once upon a time, there lived a needy, poor wood cutter with two young, small children named Hansel and Gretel. Also, they had an evil, thunderous evil step mother. Their step mother did not like the children because they had no money. They heard their step mother talking to their wood cutter to leave them in the deep, dark forest. So, Hansel began to pick up shinny, glittery pebbles. The next day their step mother woke them up and they walked to the forest but on the way Hansel dropped the pebbles and looked back at the house each time. Then, their step mother said we will come back in night time but they did not. Then, Gretel started to cry but Hansel leaded the way where he dropped the pebbles. And when they reached home their wood cutter was happy to see them but their step mother was not. So, then in night time she locked the main door so Hansel can not collect the pebbles. The next day their step mother woke them again and gave them some bread and they went to the forest again but Hansel was a clever boy. He turned the bread into breadcrumbs and the next day they noticed that the birds ate the breadcrumbs. Gretel started to cry again and Hansel for the first time felt hopeless too and they went walking alone by themselves. Then, they found a sweet, chocolate house with cookie roves on top. Hansel and Gretel tried the cookie rove and out of the window their stood a woman. The woman offered to bring them inside. In the house, it looked different outside. There were skeletons and evil portions. But Hansel and Gretel did not care. The woman gave them food and they noticed that the woman was actually a witch. The next day the witch picked Hansel and put him in a cage and she told Gretel to make some food to fatten him up. So, she can burn him to make food. After few days the witch thought Hansel was fatten up so she told Gretel to check if the oven is hot enough but Gretel said, is the oven big enough? The witch said, sure and she gone inside. The Gretel closed the oven door and the witch was burned. And Gretel knows where the witch put the keys, so she picked up the keys and unlocked Hansel and they suddenly saw a lots of money. The picked up the money but after a while they saw a lake. They found a duck and that duck took one by one to the other side and when they arrived they saw their house and the wood cutter saw them and Hansel and Gretel ran to home and the wood cutter said your step mother had gone to her family and they lived happily ever after. The end!
A great effort, Roshaan. You have retold the story well and I can see you have tried to include some adjectives and expanded noun phrases to make your writing more interesting… Keep it up 👍🏻👍🏻
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Have you completed you Math or Wow work?
Sanya has done her video and her hit the Button she also did her pirate ship
Well done Sanya. I have just listened to your 2 x tables and can’t wait to see your ship.
Once a time there was a woodcutter and his family.They had no money so they could
not buy food.
I love your adjective, sinister. Great work. You have retold the story well. Remember to always use a capital letter and full stop in your sentence.
I played the hit the button and I got the 17 out of 18. I also did my wow homework.
Well done Iqra. I can’t wait to see your WOW homework.
Once upon A time there lived four people called Hansel and Great 😊 ,
Mum,daddy they mum is elvil and they dad Love them wen they went into
They 🛌 The elvil Stepmum fort of a plan of to take nem to the forest 🌳
and Hansel got some nice pebels to get home 🏡 and then dad was running 🏃 to The children 👧 and they lived happily ever after
Hi Amelia. A super try. Well done! Remember to read through your sentences to make sure that you haven’t missed any words out.
Once upon a time live wood cutter and and and evil, stepmother and had two children. One was called Hansel and one was called Gretel at night Hansel heard them stepmother said to send to send the kids out to them out the house to the forest, the next day and so picked up some shiny peppers, stepmother made a fire to make the the kids warm. Gladly Hansel drop some peppers. Otherwise they couldn’t find their way home then the stepmother bed to go to sleep but the next morning the stepmother, Hansel and Gretel a piece of bread Hansel drop some bread on the floor. But some bird eat them and they couldn’t find their way home. But they found a small yummy cottage Hansel aet some sugar from the windows Gretel chocolate from the wall a horror fight which came up to Hansel and Gretel and dad would you like to come in they said yes and they entered the house but the even discussing with was trying to bad and Hansel up but Gretel said I can’t him and then the witch said. I can go in myself and the witch was trying to go in but Gretel push the evil disgusting witch into the oven. They went out the cottage and they spell the witches treasure and ran back home and their dad was speechless they didn’t know that the evil stepmother was dead they live happily ever after the end
I can see that you remember the story Hudaa. Well done. Don’t forget to read through your work to check your spellings and that you haven’t repeated any words.
This is a great effort Huda, well done!
A poor woodcutter and his wife had two children named Hansel and Gretel. Their mother died when they were young. Hansel and Gretel were very sad. Soon their father remarried but their stepmother was very cruel. One day, she took the children deep into the forest and left them there. Clever Hansel had some breadcrumbs in his pocket and had dropped them on the way so that they could find their way back home. Alas! The birds ate all the crumbs and they couldn’t find the path that led back home. Hansel and Gretel went deeper and deeper into the forest. They were hungry and tired. Finally, after walking for a long time, they saw a cottage made of chocolate, candies, and cake. “Look, Hansel! A chocolate brick!” shouted Gretel in delight and both ate it hungrily.
Now, a wicked witch lived there. When she saw Hansel and Gretel, she wanted to eat them. She grabbed the children and locked them in a cage. The witch decided to make a soup out of Hansel and eat him first. She began boiling a huge pot of water for the soup. Just then, Gretel crept out of her cage. She gave the wicked witch a mighty push from behind and the witch fell into the boiling water. She howled in pain and died instantly. Hansel and Gretel found treasure lying around the cottage. They carried it home with them. Their stepmother had died and their father welcomed them back with tears of joy. They never went hungry again!
Once upon a time there was a little girl and boy who were Hansel and Gretel with there step mother and a kind father who was a woodcutter.One day,when Hansel and Gretel were sleeping 😴 there mum and dad was shouting .
“Tomorrow in the afternoon were going to leave are kids in the 🪵woods”said the stepmother in 😠anger.
“No!” Said dad
“How dare you” said dad.
Hansel and Gretel were hearing what they were saying. Gretel started crying 😭 .
“It’s okay” said Hansel
“I will do something.
That night Hansel quietly Hansel went outside and collected some pebbles and put them in his pockets.In the afternoon they were going to the 🪵 on Saturday afternoon. Then Hansel dropped some pebbles (shiny white and clean).After there stepmother and dad left them in the dark,creppy,woods.Then Hansel and Gretel were following the pebbles and then they got home and hugged 🤗 there dad. After there mum was so much 😡 .Then the step had an idea 💡 to lock 🔐 the 🚪 doors. Hansel tried to open the doors but he couldn’t. So he got the 🍞 bread and broken the bread in pieces and put them in his pockets.The next day,they went to the woods 🪵and then he dropped some of the pices of bread .Then they left the kids in the woods 🪵 .Then in the morning 🌄 they saw the birds had eaten the bread .Then they got lost and then they saw a delicious 😋 🏠 house .After they ran to the house and ate some pices.Then a nice woman came out and told them to come inside but then Hansel got locked in a cage and she was a witch not a nice woman.After a few minutes later she asked Gretel to make a cake. Then adter some time ⏲ Gretel was going to check it but she couldn’t see.
“I will see it “shouted the witch.
Suddenly,she pushed the wicked witch 🧙♀️ in the oven
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” sreamed the wicked witch. Then she saw the key for the cage and saved Hansel. Then they saw so many gold and money 💰 🤑 💸 so they took the money and gold .Then they their home and showed their dad the money and gold.Then they lived Happily Ever After.
The End .
I really enjoyed reading your story. Great work. Can you think of any fronted adverbials to start your sentences?
Once upon a time there lived a woodcutter and his evil stepmother they had to kids Hansel and Gretel they had no money so they had to cut down trees the woodcutter gave all the food for the kids the evil stepmother hated the kids so she made a plan to leave the kids in the forest Gretel heard the parents so he ran outside to get pebbles when it was the morning they dropped the kids to the deep,dark forest but Gretel was dropping pebbles to make a path back home when they arrived the woodcutter was making a fire for the kids so they are not cold there stepmother said that she will get them in a while she didn’t come back to get them Hansel started crying but Gretel said don’t worry we can follow the pebble trail back home when they got home the woodcutter got super happy but the stepmother is going to take them back to the forest the next day the stepmother dropped them back into the forest this time Gretel dropped bread crumbs on the floor when they got there the woodcutter was lighting another fire at night they tried to follow the bread crumbs but the birds ate them so they went in a different direction they found a gingerbread house they could not believe there eyes it was made of chocolate,gummy,cake and gingerbread they got a piece of the roof then they heard a voice a old woman came outside and let them in she made the best good then she locked Gretel in a cage she will cook him when he’s fat but he pulled a skinny bone the witch was lighting a fire then Hansel pushed her in they ran then got all the gold they ran back home they father got so happy then they heard there stepmother is dead they lived happily ever after the end.
You have remembered the story well Aadyan and have used capital letters for names. Well done. Don’t forget to use capital letters and full stops in your sentences.
Where should we upload the video onto
Hi Zak. I just noticed that the link was missing. It should be ok now.
Maryam made a boat and it floated on water, she will bring it in
Great work.
I can’t wait to see your boat, Maryam.
Did you manage to play Hit The Button?
What was your score?
we cannot click the link to access hit the button.
Once upon a time there lived a poor woodcutter and his children ,Hansel and Gretel. There also lived an evil, annoying Stepmother. They went to bed , then the Stepmother was making a plan. In the morning ,the Stepmother and father walked in the forest. Hansel and Gretel made a trail back home. The next morning the Children were sent deeper in the dark ,gloomy forest. While walking in the forest Hansel and Gretel got lost. After that they found a sweet house made out of marshmallows and donuts. A voice came out of the door from the candy house. The witch came outside and called the children in. Hansel and Gretel found nice food to eat. Then they started eating the nice food .The witch pretended to be nice , however she was very mean. Hansel got sent in the cage. Gretel gave Hansel a bone . Gretel pushed the witch in the oven and took Hansel out of the cage . After that they found there way home .The end.
I love your use of adjectives Maryam – well done.
Great use of Adverbials of time, Maryam. You have also used some brilliant expanded noun phrases. My favourite has got to be dark, gloomy forest.
It made me picture the poor children feeling scared, cold and miserable. 👍🏻👍🏻
Once upon time there was a wood 🪵 cutter his family was poor.. he had two kids there name was Hansel and Gretel and step mother.. Their step mother was furious and evil.. one day they went for a walk in a deep dark forest.. but cleverly Hansel Drop a pebble on the ground step by step..they went to home their step mother was angry and they went again in forest she gave a piece of bread then Hansel drop again piece of bread then birds ate all bread they forgot way to go home.. both they saw a ginger bread house they went that house.. wicked witch locked to Hansel in cage and gretel give a food.. When Gretel got chance a she pushed to witch in hot oven then they ran away from there.. They got some gold and diamonds they went to happily to home
I got score in hit button 18/20
Super work Jasmine.
Once upon a time, there lived a poor woodcutter who lived with his kids. Hansel was the boy and Gretal was the girl and their mother died when they were babies. The dad had a hard time so he remarried a wicked, evil woman because they were poor. The stepmother wanted to leave the kids in the petrifying, scary woods so one night she said “we’re going to leave them in the woods.” The kids overheard what they said because they were hungry so Gretal started to cry then Hansel went outside and picked as many rocks as he could to put in his pockets. The next day they went to the woods Hansel dropped the rocks and looked back to see if they fell. The stepmother said “why are you looking backwards Hansel” and Hansel said, “I’m saying bye to my black cat.” The stepmother said, “that’s the chimney”. They stopped somewhere and the parents said “have a rest”. The parents left the kids and went home, the next day they came back home and the father was so happy. The stepmother seemed happy but she was actually angry so the next day she said “we’re going to the woods again”, but this time she locked the door so Hansel couldn’t go outside to get rocks. The parents gave Hansel and Gretal a piece of bread, so Hansel crushed his bread into pieces to make a trail. They went deeper into the woods and stopped to take a rest, then the next day they tried to find the trail but it had been eaten by birds. Hansel and Gretal tried to find their way home but on their way, they found a magnificent, appetising house with cotton candy, gingerbread, lollipops, and cake. They started to run and munch on this house, then out came a terrifying, ugly witch. They found out then that a witch lived in there, and she said “why didn’t you knock on the door kids?”. She lured them inside with the food, and after stuffing themselves Hansel and Gretal fell asleep. In the morning, the witch put Hansel in a cage and then woke up Gretal to make lots of food to fatten Hansel up for the witch to eat, so Gretal did as she was told. Hansel ate it all and left only a bone, the witch had poor eyesight so Hansel sticks out a bone, and the witch was confused because she thought this was his hand. Then the witch asked Gretal to check if the oven was hot enough, but she knew that the witch was trying to trick her so she asked the witch for help. The witch put her head into the oven, and Gretal got into position and ran to push the witch into the oven. Gretal grabbed the keys and rushed to unlock Hansel from the cage, and they stole treasure they found from a treasure room. They found their way home and found out that the stepmother died but the woodcutter was still alive. And they lived happily ever after.
The end.
Great work, Latifa.
You have remembered the story well and retold it in great detail.
Hansel and Gretel
There was a poor family who had no food. The step mum wanted to get rid of Hansel and Gretel so she had more food.
The step mum tricked Hansel and Gretal and took them to the forest without their dad knowing. Hansel heard his step mums plan so he snuck out in the night and collected shiny stones.
While they were walking deep into the forest Hansel dropped the rocks for a trail to find their way back home.
They got to the forest and their step mum said wait here while I go cut some wood.
Hansel and Gretel waited and waited until the moon came out but the step mum did not come back. Gretel started crying, Hensel said don’t worry I can take us home. They followed the trail and reached home. The dad was so happy but the step mum was very angry.
The next day the step mum tricked them again and took them deep into the forest. This time Hansel threw some old bread crumbs for his trail.
Deep in the forest, the step mum left them and did not return. The moon came out and Gretel started crying. Don’t worry said Hansel I will take us home. Hansel started walking but there were no bread crumbs, all the birds and animals had eaten them.
Hansel and Gretel were so scared but carried on walking until they came to this house which was made of cake, sweets and chocolate. They started eating the house, suddenly an old lady came out and took them in, she said come in I will give you lots of nice food. She then gave them a nice room and bed to sleep.
The next morning the lady came into the room and said to Gretel, Get up you lazy girl! Gretel jumped up and couldn’t see Hansel. The lady said I can’t wait anymore I’m going to eat your brother, go and check the fire. Gretel was so scared of the hot fire and could not check it. The lady got annoyed and said move let me check, Hansel took that chance and pushed the lady in. Hansel and Gretel then found lots of jewellery, filled their pockets and ran out in the forest.
They finally got home to their dad. Their dad was so happy to see them and told them their step mum is gone. They were so rich with all the jewellery that they never were hungry again. They lived happily ever after.
You have retold the story well. Great work. Super sentences too.
This is great, Duaa.
It would be lovely if we could see work like this in your school books.
Hi Mrs Browning.
Mum here, just to clarify I typed the story for Duaa while she was retelling the story. Hope that’s ok. Thanks
Please do let me know if any concerns with her work in school, I’d be happy to discuss privately in order for me to help her more. Thanks.
Once a time there was a Woodcutter and there, family. They had no money and food so the sinster stepmother said lets go to the dark , deep forest and the woodcutter said no. And he missed them but they went to the forest, and hansel picked up some shiny white, clean, pebbles and he dropped them on the floor. The evil stepmother, left them in the deep, black, forest, and they went away and then they walked and walked then they saw a little Cottage it was made out of Gingerbreads,sweets,and they soure the wicked witch they were shocked and she said come in and they went in. But she locked hansel in a cage gretel was shocked, and she wanted to fatten him up so the evil witch could eat him. And he didn’t know how to go in the oven and gretel pushed and pushed her in the blazing hot, fire and she died so they stole the witch’s treasure and ran home they came back the were all full of joyment luckily they did not know the evil stepmother had died The end.
Excellent, well done!
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