Year 4, we have launched an exciting competition following on from the amazing workshop from Brothers Mcleod.
We would like you to write a story for the storyboard that you created as a whole year group.
The winners will receive:
1st prize- 50 Dojo points
2nd prize- 25 Dojo points
3rd prize- 10 Dojo points
Competition ends Friday15th March
Good luck!
Contents:
1. Sir Snail’s Knighting ceremony
1. 2. Myths and mythology’s
2. 3. We meet the competition
3. 4. Challenge time
5 . Best friend
In a faraway land there was a mountain but no ordinary one it was a fizzling mountain which goes by the name FIZZLE MOUNTAIN! Pretty iconic right? All you could hear was the fizzling. No one could hear anything with all of that obnoxious noise: fzfzfzfzfzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzf. Disguised by all of those fizzle mountains there was a particular mountain that was bigger than the rest but wasn’t a mountain it was … A CASTLE!!!!
Chapter 1 Sir Snail’s Knighting Ceremony
Inside the castle were King Bob and Sir Snail or soon-to-be KIGHT SIR SNAIL “Alrighty let’s practice, “Cried King Bob “But wherever is your sword ?” Sir Snail looked proud and said, “Right here Sir! “ Whilst he said that he pulled out his sword it was green and floppy and fidgety but King Bob stood there…quietly…
Chapter 2 Myths and mythology’s
Stood there horrified by the presence of his sword he raised his finger “Go and find a new sword now ” Without hesitation Sir Snail said “ B b b b bu.…” but he was rudely interrupted by King Bob “NOW”
He sadly and gradually walked out of the castle and into the library. He was looking for something but what was he looking for? He went everywhere in Section 2 A and Section 67 B even in the restricted area “Sorry can’t go in there “ said the library employee “But but,” stuttered Sir Snail “Sorry,“ said the employee. When he grumpily walked out he mumbled “Ugh why do libraries have these things if you can’t use them “
It was night and all of Fizzle Mountain was quiet well almost. Sir Snail was at the library and let’s say that he was not respecting the library rules: CRASH, TUMBLE, BANG, OWCHE, THUD, And repeat until he was at the restricted
area. He found it Yay! The title was called myths and mythologies. He turned and tossed pages until he was at the legend of the stink cream on fire land! He also read that if you lick the ice cream you get the swordy sword 2000 which is the best sword on the market TODAY!!! So he set of past bong bong lagoon and carpet club and even daisy dessert until he met the competition!
Chapter 3 We meet the competition
“Oi what are ye doing here “ he said before he collided into the ground he was riding a flying toast 5000! “Well” said sir snail “ I’m here because I want to find a magical sword and … well who are you “ “Well “ said the anonymous man “ I am bobalettaworzywormwormadstavaganza the 3rd or bob for short and I want thi sword too “ “Well we can’t have the sword both ………actually we will do a CHALLENGE!!!!
Chapter 4 Challenge time
“A WHAT “ said bob “Fine let’s do a who can hold their breath the longest “ they both take a great big breath : Hhhhhhhh PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF 1 minute 5 minutes 10 minutes 1 hr wow they are good but what is that ? They turn all sorts of colours: Red, Blue ,Magenta , pink and even green … They stop and breath but when they realised the stopped holding their breath they ran towards the cave
Chapter 6 Best friends
When they ran to the cave they said things like: I’m going to win or Good luck your going to need it or bye dirt face ps this is what sir snail normally said . Eventually they both grabbed the ice cream or the stink cream “I want that here creamy ice “ said bob “No I want it !“ said sir snail they licked the stink cream : lam lam bleahhh bleahhhhhhhhh ugh that STINKS !
Then the swordy sword 2000 came, it shimmered and shined like a diamond they were about to grab it until : chhh! It ripped into 2 “Oh wow it’s the perfect fit for me” said sir snail “Me too “ said bob “Let’s be friend…. Oh no the ceremony” said sir snail horrified “ let’s go on my magic toast 5000“ screamed bob so the rode on bob’s toast 5000 to the ceremony! They had a party and everyone watched as king bob and yes there are two bob’s knighted sir snail “ I knight you knigh sir snail and then everyone cheered and bob went away with knight sir snail for more adventures
THE END
in a jelly land there was a Person named ben who was a knight he also had a jelly sword. He was angry because his jelly sword was not that strong so he went to a fire place. He couldn’t actually get a sword there was a big mountain that had a chocolate. and If you eat it you will get a blue sword. he arrived but there was a person there.he was shocked and then they both were fighting and Ben win the fight and wen he got to the mountain he ate it and he got a blue sword.THE END
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In a big land and with a snail that was a knight and was really really slow.
And there was a mountain that was really big and it was going to
take really long to get on the top.
At the top of the mountain was a pizza and if a person eat’s it then they would
get a sword that will chop through anything.
But there is ice on the island so then the pizza will get frozen but
it is covered by a box so it will stay
warm.
The knight snail finally arrived at the top really
cold.
And he got the pizza and then ate the pizza so then he got the
sword.
The sword started to glow and he was swinging it and then
it hit him so he got a cut on him.
I hope you liked it
The Gumball and the Knight
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Welcome to the book called The Gumball and the Knight. Let me introduce how the charcter is.The gumball was Raven and the Knight was Harry.One time they were living together then Raven was getting big and he was band to not live there.Later that day Raven was very angry and then turn evil.
Will Harry defeat Raven.But don’t forget Harry has a legendary pet that you will find
in the story.
The Real Story
So once a pon a time there a King,Knight Harry and Gumball Raven. So they both have friendship relationship and they both were allowed to do anything they wanted to do.And did you know what eat every day except every Saturday and Sunday is fish and chips but extra meal is beans.All those years was good but next year was bad.The bad news was Raven was getting bigger and bigger.But later that week Raven was band and not allowed to live with Hbrave.Now you found Harry the legendary and mysterious pet.It is called Donut.Harry wanted to buy that pet because he wanted to be crazy.Oh I forgot to tell you how the sword is made of.You might find it very very funny but not made of metal you know what is it.It is the ice cream that never melts and doesn’t hurts your hands.Now lets continue our story with the crazy ending.So Harry had to fly with his legendary pet.”This will be easy peasy lemon squeeze for me to go anywhere I want because no one can defeat me or the worst school I went.Did you know what Harry’s secret was he has the worst school that had the worse teachers in the univere. Remember don’t tell the real teacher or the worst teacher ever heard ever.Now it is really really scary part.
We forgot our villan that was band from Harry’s house.Oh I remember Raven.So Raven comes where Harry is.Raven is like the worst teacher ever heard. Raven was too too slow to walk so he took a flying carpet so he doesn’t he get slower.Harry was so shocked that Raven came.But Harry found it funny that Raven is so so fat that is sized as a house. Now Harry is felling to scared and it was to dangerous but he was brave.Now Harry watch said you can turn yourself big by feeding your pet some chocolate that makes your pet fat but if you want to make yourself small you have to feed your pet vegtables.So Harry did challenge that was you have to win in rock paper and siser and they got a tie.You know why they get a tie because they have same knowledge.So they then play splat the times tables game.When they got a tie Harry used the invisibility power but after 10 minutesit worned out so Raven saw him.But there was 10 minutes left.When they arrived in the same time they think about something. It was about there relationship together. But then Harry made Raven small. And they shared that icecream.And the crazy ending was tht they went to the icecream truck and used the ice cream as a sword. THE END.
A fantastic story Ariyan! Harry’s school sounds horrid. Well done
In a land far far away a snail knight that was extremely extremely slow!!!!! They lived on a mountain that sizzled so loud that you could not hear anything!!!!! The snail knight had a very slimy sword. So he needed to get another one he need’s to go to an island covered in fire !!!!!!!
But someone also wants the sword and to get the sword you need to lick a very smelly ice cream . The person that also want to get the sword is a caterpillar, a very evil one and he uses magic carpet that’s a piece of toast to get to the fiery island!!!!!!!!! They both each other at the exact same time. So they had a to see who could hold their breath at the longest. They said the winner gets to look at the ice cream that is extremely smelly. They both meet each other and lick the ice cream at the same time and they won the sword, but since there were two of them to sword split in half so then they were both happy and went back home to the to the Sicily mountain. The night the night snail went and evil caterpillar went back to his with his evil castle.
Great story Zak! Is the sword ever become one again?
Yes
I did my own version
“Whoops”
There was a pigeon named cluck he was a knight he had tough armour and a edgy sword.
He is on a journey to find a fruit that does not look that apetizing so on his way he sees a snail called blub.
As he arrived he was about to eat the fruit when he had beans on toast thrown at his face he took it of and they had an flex battle +and also why they need it)but then they realized “why have a flex when we can just eat it?” So then they tried to eat it but then it melts (because it couldn’t handle the heat).
Rexford A
Not a problem Rexford! Love the idea of a pigeon. What happens at the end?
In a land far away a snail knight as slow as a THREE TOED SLOTH was living at a top of a mountain that sizzled louder then a blue whale called sizzle mountain and really wanted a stinky ,disgusting and malodorous ice cream that had the power to give a person who gave it a very big , immense lick would get a crystalline , crystal sword the was the best sword in sword history because his was the most pathetic sword to ever get !
But little did he know that a caterpillar called bob was going to go there to and knew were the ice cream was and he was goin to use it for catastrophic things. After a while snail knight finally found the way to it and he also found a short cut luckily because HE WAS TOO SLOOW !!!
By the time he had made it he met bob .
“AOOOOH !!! Who are you!?”Angrily questioned BOB.
“ITS MY ICE CREAM !!!Also who are you?!I’m a snail knight. GRRRRRRRR!!!” Despitefully and viciously yelled the snail knight .
“OK. I’m bob for short .Lets have a competition snail .” Bob explained.
“Lets have one for the one who holds their breathe the longest .”Calmly told snail knight.
Then they both held their breathe BUT an unexpected thing happened they both exhaled at the same TIME then they both licked the ice cream at the same time and both jaw-droppingly got half each !!!
Finally they both became a team and fought against evil creatures
THE END .
Mrs Khaliq hopefully you like my story hope you enjoy !!!:D 😉👍💖😊
What a fantastic story Sumayyah! Love the choose of vocabulary. You have set the standards very high!
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